A Tesuri tale


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Dragon907

8:02pm Jul 9 2011 (last edited on 11:42am Jul 28 2011)

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 These story changes to other chraters in first person. Hope you enjoy :)

One day I'm out flying then the next thing I knew ...Whoa i must start a the begging. hehe silly me!

One a nice day in Aquati I was flying with Taylor.With the wind in my spiea fur with green insted of pink. I was doing all sorts of tricks like loop-de loops and spirals. " I'm going to fly to the Ataqueen Forest want to come?' Taylor asked "Nah but i'll catch up with up later ok?" "Sure" Taylor said and went down twords the Ataqueen Forest. Later I went to see if Tylor was still there beacuse she didn't come at our useall meeting place. I found a stump in the clearing with a trap next to it and there was some fo Taylor's fur stuck on it, along with  some blood. " Arrgh these humans and their traps and gadgets.... they can never be trusted." I looked up a the blue sky "I will find you my friend." I flew off in search of my friend.

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"WHAT THE!!?? My trap it got a something but someone let it free." Hmm fur?" I pick up the small bundle of fur " Tesuri fur..." I went to town to gather more supplies.  When I passed a backyard and saw a Tesuri  in the yard and it's fur matched  what i found earilier. " Hmm looks nice, hurt but worth a lots! I just wait awhile untill it's better so it's worth more than injured." I walked off and smriked "Hahaha that Tesuri is all mine. Or maybe... I soon as a get the chance I'll grab it... MUHAHAH."

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 I flew for hours I looked in everywhere execpt town. Then it hit me. "They must have taken her to town to sell!" I flew stright to town I got there just as the sun was setting. "Perfect searching in complete darkness." Then going to town will be my biggest mistake in my life.

Chapter 2   

I walked around some houses then around a coner of one house a guy jumped out and put me in a bag. I could not see anything " Hey let me out!" I yelled " Shut it!" the guy said. Then i guess some how he knocked me out.When I woke up I was in a cage in the back of a truck. "Hey the Tesuri is a wake!" said a Drindian  " Um... hello my name is Breeze." I said " Hello I'm Jake." said the Drindian I looked around the truck and there was on me and Jake in the truck. Jake and I talked a while to pass the time then the guy took us to a building and I was guessing it could be one of the shops he but us in the back where he put me in a larger cage big enough for me to walk around. Jake was in the cage next to me. " hmmm maybe I can dig a hole out." I got ready to dig.

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  "Breeze that won't work it's to hard to did though." Breeze growled "Breeze maybe you can squeeze thouge the bars. " hmm I try." Breeze made herslef look smaller and sliped though the bars. "I think he has the keys, I'll go look. Breeze whispered. "ok be careful."

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"Oh I will." I looked for the keys and i found them on his desk next to him. He was awake too. So I thought of a plan. " Ok phase one is a go." I whispered. I sunck outside to ring the door bell and he came to the door then as he was opening the door i sunck passed him and grabbed the keys before he turned around and quickly went back to Jake. "Hurry unlock it before he-" "HELLO!" what do think ur doing?" the guy said

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Hurry Breeze run!" I said Breeze quickly flew up and went out the window with the keys. "My keys!  grr i'll just have to run and get another copy of them." "ha take that creep!" Breeze came back and unlocked my cage. " I..I..I thought" " What I would leave you? Nah. come on let's get out of here!" We left to a safe place then we ate and rested

Chapter 3

I told Jake about Taylor and he hoped that he can help but I told him that I can find her. " And I WILL find her." I said " Well I have to go see ya Breeze." Jake left and Then I went to the edge of the forest and saw Taylor with a human then they fell in this huge hole. "Taylor!" I yelled then I saw a guy  come out the hole and he had Tylor! I flew as fast I cound and smacked him with my paws I flew up and did a spirial right to the face. " HA take that!." then he ran away saying ''Mommy!!" " HA HA HA you better run!" I went to Taylor but then that human she was with came and I ran back to the forest cause I did not know what will happen.But I thought about it and went back I told the human that Taylor was my friend and that im nice if we happen to run into each other agian she knows.Then I looked in the forest cheacking every possible spot I could. I looked in caves, dens, tree holes and everything I could fit in. I even talked to to local creatus. But they all said the same thing. " No.", "Nope sorry" or they just shook their heads.

Chapter 4

A storm was comeing so I needed to find shelter. " Hmm the storm is comeing faster that usaual." Then I saw Taylor in the paws of a Venram. "Man, my timeing stinks!" I said. Then a Goiba running after them. I followed thinking -maybe he can help me- Once I caught up to him I leared that His name is Kiba and I told him my name. Then he Told me what just happend. Then we were off the rescue Taylor. Then we came to stop for the night. " So how do you know Taylor?" Kiba asked.  I chuckled " Taylor and I knew each other since we were pups. "So you know what she likes?' " Why of course Kiba." " Um... Breeze? Can I asked you something?"  "Sure." "Does Taylor have.... a boyfriend?" Kiba asked shyly " No...why?" "Er....no reason. Let's get some sleep." he said quickly

Chapter 5

I woke up  before Kiba did I thought about what he had said last night "He must like Taylor. Let's just hope she likes him back." I was a little hunrgey so I went to look for some food. I saw some nice, big, juciey apples I just flew up to the branch and picked them. I put some near Kiba who was still sleeping. I ate the rest, I was still hungery our cave was near a small river so I tryed to catch some fish.I layed on the side of the river and waited then I saw one comeing. I put my paw above the water then I quickly grabbed the fish. "Hmmm smells funny but is... quite tasty." I caught about 4 more fish. " Now  i'm full." "Wow thank you for the apples Breeze." Kiba said happily "Your welcome, Kiba you want to see how it's like to fly?"  "Sure." I helped him on my back and slowy flew up. "Wow you can see more up here." I luaghed.

Chapter 6

Kiba had told me to stop a this tree which looked supicious to him. I landed below the tree. Then Kiba started yelling "We're here!!" "Shh I see the Veram with Taylor." I told Kiba. But his yelling already got their attedtion. They were staring down at us. "Let Taylor go you beast!" Kiba yelled  "Why? We're having so much fun!" the Veram yelled back and I thought i saw him smile at Taylor. - Does he like Taylor?- I thought.

 "C'mon Kiba. I'll carry you up there so we can talk to them face to face." I grabbed him with my paws and flew up I looked at Kiba he looked mad. we landed on the tree branch where Taylor and the Veram  were on. Kiba  started to walk violently towards the Veram - Oh my he's Really mad.- I thought " You let her go! Or i'll swear I'll...." He git interuppted by Taylor."Kiba, you don't understand." Taylor said. "It's all right Taylor! We got this under control!" Kiba asured her Kiba looked back at the Veram and he looked angry. " Taylor are you ok?" I asked hopeing the Veam had not hurt her in any way. "Yes, I'm fine..... er... who are you and WHY ARE YOU GUYS HERE?!" Taylor replied

 "You honestly don't remember me?" I asked her. Tears began to  water my eyes. I couldn't believe it. My best friend didn't remember me? Has it really been that long? Or does the Veram have something to do with it? "I'm Breeze. Remember? You're best friend? We've been together ever since we were pups." I tryed to jog her memory She just shook her head.

 I looked at Kiba and the Veram "Get away from me! I didn't even scratch her!" The Veram yelled at Kiba."Kiba!" Taylor yelled. Kiba was walking the Veram towards the end of the branch. Down below were some really pointy rocks. "Don't ever touch her again! You hear me! Why I otta...." Kiba mumbled. "Ok Kiba! That's enough!" I shouted. - He must really like Taylor.- I thought Kiba was still walking twords the Veram. He was backing away moving twords then end of a branch. The Veram started to loose it's balance. I heard a flap of wings. I looked over to where Taylor was sitting. She was gone. I looked back at the Veram he was falling! Twords some very sharp rocks below.

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I just lost my balance well no thanks to the Kiba. I was falling then I felt paws on my shoulders. I looked up and saw Taylor carrying me back up to the branch. we landed near the entrance of my hollow.

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Are you out of your mind Kiba! You could've killed him!" I was furious how can he have done that? Why did even do that? "He should get a punishment after what he did to you!" Kiba yelled back. Did what to me, exactley? Let me have a place to stay, taking me out to dinner every night, or even being kind to me! Huh! What did he do? Give me one reason Kiba!" I just lost it, Kiba, he looked totally mad, but he couldn't find the right words to say I walked to Creetori  "You okay?" I asked. "Yeah, I'm fine, thank you for saving my life back there." he said. She nodded. Breeze walked toward Taylor. "You okay?" she asked. "Yeah, I'm fine, thank you for saving my life back there." I said. She nodded. breeze walked toward Taylor.

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 "Okay, now that I've found you, we can return back to our pack." I said. "What? I can't. I don't even know you. Plus, I have a human worrying about me! And Creetori, I can't leave him." "Who?" I asked. "Me." Creetori said.Kiba looked angry when Taylor said Creetori's name.

"Look, guys, I know this is a weird moment for us, but can we talk about this inside? It's getting a litte chilly out here. And even though Kiba tried to kill me, he doesn't have any fur, so I don't want him to get sick out here." Creetori anounced. "See Kiba! He cares about you." Taylor said Kiba mumbled in frustration. We walked inside. I acually think Creetori is kinda  cute He has Indago fur, lives in a nice little den or hollow as he calls it and he lives in a wonderful forest. But I'm afraid he taken Taylor seems to like him and I respect that they would make a nice couple. But what about Kiba? I thought all of this along with some unanswered questions. As Taylor was telling what Creetori had done for her.

Chapter 7

I'm so mad right now! All I did was try to save Taylor and I get yelled at?! I look towards Taylor, Breeze, and that, Creetori. All the things that Taylor said that he had done to her sounded like romantic things. I don't get it what is so great about him anyway? I looked over towards the stupid Creetori. He was staring at Taylor??? That's it, I couldn't take it any more. If Taylor is happy here, then fine, I'm leaving! After I eat. Or maybe tomorrow mourning. Yes tommorrow mourning, I shall leave.

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" Um... you ok there Kiba?" I asked "Yeah, I'm fine." Kiba replied. "It was   crazy out there. I guess we all just lost our temper." I said. He nodded. Kiba looked back towards Taylor and Creetori. They were smiling, laughing, and having a good time. "Breeze, do you think Taylor likes Creetori?" Kiba asked. I shrugged. "I mean, what does he have that I don't have? He has thick indigo fur," Kiba began. "That's one thing."I said I, I smiled, but Kiba frowned. "He has wings, he has good looks, he practically has everything!" Kiba said. "That's not true. He is not a Goliba." I said. It was clear to him that I was trying to chear him up."I guess I took Taylor I litte too seriously. I mean, I admit, I like her." Kiba confessed. "You don't say?" I said. He rolled his eyes. "Do you think I should tell Taylor how I feel?" he asked . I shrugged agian. "I don't see why not?" I replied.He stood up and walk towards the exit of the hollow.-But... will Creetori be ok with that?-

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"But won't that ruin our friendship? I mean, she's with Creetori." I explained. "Well we don't know that yet. They could be just friends." Breeze said. I nodded. I went back to where I was standing and laid down. "I'm going to get some sleep. "?See ya in the mourning Breeze". Then I fell fast asleep

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 I kept smiling at Taylor. She's so beautiful. I looked over towards Breeze. She was watching Kiba sleep. Kiba's sleeping in the middle of the day? All well, I'm not a Goiba, I'll never understand and maybe never will. "I don't know what to do Creetori." Taylor said. I looked back towards Taylor. "What do you mean?" I asked. "I mean that, I don't know if I should go or not. Breeze wants me to rejoin the pack, which I don't know of. Kiba's mad at me, I have a human looking for me, and you. I don't know."Taylor said. I could tell that she was under a lot of stress.

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 "Here, I know a place that will take all your worries away." Creetori said. I looked up at him. "We can take Breeze along." He nodded towards Breeze. Breeze looks up at both of us. I nodded. Breeze, Creetori and I went through the exit of the hollow and onto the branch. Breeze flew off the bench first, then me, then Creetori. It took a couple miles and we landed at a nearby waterfall. "Is this the place?" Breeze asked. He shook his head. He walked under the waterfall. He looked back and the we followed.

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"This is beatiful! Very beautiful!"Taylor said. She was right. It was around dusk time, and the fireflies were out shining their lights. The faint windy breeze made the dog Wood and other blossom trees gently move their leaves. Fish were swimming in a nearby pond and river. There were daisies and roses growing in the bushes. it was beautiful. I looked around  and loved everyting bout this place I  saw a pond. I was thirsty and so I drank some. I. As I walked there I saw Taylor was laying down, enjoying the scenery and Creetori went and layed down next to her.When I was done with my drink I turned around and saw Taylor's head on his shoulder. I was shocked. Taylor and Creetori laughed. I shook my head and went to the river to catch some fish. - I hope Kiba does not know of this- I thought as I was catching a fish. I could hear some of Creetori's and Taylor's conversation I couldn't help it so.. I listened.

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"You know, I felt very lonely until I met you and well, I like you Taylor, and not just as a friend." I said to Taylor. She looked at me and smiled. It was clear that she was thinking the same thing. I went close to her face. I kissed her cheak. She blushed. "I never met a Veram like you, Creetori. I would imagined that verams would be kinda evil or something. No offense." Taylor said. "None takin. Most Verams are rough like that." I said. "But you're different." She finished. We both smiled and we took a little nap.

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I woke up. I didn't see Taylor, Breeze or Creetori any where. They're probably out catching food. I stood up and walked outside onto the branch. It was a nice night. I guess I was a little rough on Creetori. I climbed of the branch and climbed onto the tree. When I reached the ground, I decided to search for the others. I went in the direction that the branch was pointing to. Maybe they were near that waterfall Breeze and I pasted along the way here. I decided to run. I want to reach them as soon as possible. I want to tell Taylor how I feel about her.

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 "Taylor? Taylor?". I woke up to the sound of my name. I slowly opened my eyes and saw Breeze standing over me. "What is it?" I asked her. "Kiba's here, and he's not happy." she replied. I sat up and saw Kiba sitting on a large rock. Then I looked next to me. Creetori was still sleeping, but his paw was on top of mine. I looked back over to Kiba again. "What is it?" I asked. Kiba got off the rock and walked over to where I am laying. "Let go of his paw, and come with me." he whispered. I slipped my paw out from under his.

Then I followed Kiba to the waterfall. We went through it. He sat down and a rock and I sat down an another rock across from it. "I need to tell you something." Kiba began. I nodded. "The reason I got like that with Creetori, was because I um.. how do I put this? Um...care about you."Kiba said. "Yeah, and I care about you too?" replied. "Not care as in a friend. I mean care as in... look I like you ok? I think you're pretty and intelligent and awesome." Kiba lowered his head. "Oh." I feel so guilty now. Here I am, loving on Creetori, and all this time Kiba liked me? "Taylor? Taylor please tell me that you're here!" I heard a familiar voice call.

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Taylor turned her head. I couldn't see who it was, but I bet she knows who it is. She started running towards the figure. "Taylor!" she said and started running towards Taylor, like she was to her. I got a little closer. She came into focus, it was a human! Taylor jumped in her arms. Creetori, Kiba, and I walked towards The human. "Don't worry guys! Maddie's my friend!" Taylor assured us. -I have a bad felling about this..- I thought Then Taylor jumped out of her arms and introduced us to her. "Nice to meet you all!" she said. Kiba and Creetori greeted Maddie, and I didn't. "What's wrong Breeze?" she asked. "Taylor can I speak with you for just a moment?" I asked. She nodded.

Taylor followed me to the waterfall. "We shouldn't be around humans! We need to get back to our pack!" I explained. "Ha ha. You're a poet and didn't know it!" Taylor joked. "This is serious Taylor! We need to go back. So we need to say good bye to Kiba, Creetori, and that girl!"I said. She didn't even know what I was talking about. "Look, I don't know you. Yeah, you seem familiar to me, but I don't know you. I didn't even know I had a pack!" She  exclaimed. "Well you do, so please come! We shouldn't even be around humans! No Creatu should!" I said. She shook my head. - Oh this is going to be hard getting her memorey back-

 Chapter 8

I wonder what Taylor and that other Tesuri is talking about over there. Taylor's friends are really nice. Creetori keeps talking about the scenery in the waterfall, and Kiba keeps hopping around my legs. "So how long did you know Taylor?" Kiba asked. "Um, a couple days I guess." I said. Kiba smiled.  "so how did you guys meet Taylor?" I asked. "I found her in a sack and we both found a place to spend the night!" Kiba said. "I attacked Kiba and Taylor, and took Taylor to my hollow. There she helped my pain from a splinter and we became friends." Creetori explained. The look on Creetori's face tells me that him and Taylor are becomming more than friends. BOOOM! That sounds sounded like a gunshot. "I'll get that Tesuri, if it's the last thing I do!" I heard a voice say. "Run guys! I think I hunter is comming!" I said. Kiba had a panick look on his face. "Come! Behind the waterfall!" Creetori said. We approached a waterfall. "What's going on?" Taylor asked. "Hunters. We're going behind the waterfall! Hurry!" Creetori said.
We all went behind the waterfall. I kept a look out for the hunter. I saw him in the middle of the feild on the other side of the waterfall. It was the same hunter that Taylor was talking about, and the same hunter that I saw in my window! " Guys, stay down! Keep quiet!" I warned. I looked behind my shoulder and saw that all my friends were crammed in this small rocky den.I looked back towards the hunter. He was close, too close to the waterfall.
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I know that Tesuri is some where around here, I've been following her tracks. I can also smell her. Don't ask, I just have that talent. "Bzzzz. Keith, come in Keith. This is Rick, come in Keith." My partner called from the walkie-talkie. I got it from my belt. "What do you want Rick? Have you captured that Sepia tesuri yet?" I asked.
"Um, right. About that." Rick stuttered. "Rick! The boss is counting on us! He wants atleast one rare Creatu! He'll have our guts if we don't bring one in by the end of this week!" I yelled into the talking device. "And don't call me Keith! It's Bandit Keith!" I corrected. "Yes, Bandit Keith." Rick sighed.
I growled. I put the walkie-talkie back on my belt. I reached to the other side on my belt and grabbed my Heat Seaker Bonoculers. I put them up to my eyes. There was no figures that looked like Creatus. I looked over by the waterfall. There, I see something. Several somethings at that. I see, a human figure, and several little Creatus under some none living things, possibly rocks. I grinned. I put the Bonoculers back on my belt. I moved towards the waterfall.
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He's comming!" I heard Maddie say. I looked at Creetori. He told me one night that what ever happens, he would always be here to protect me. I hope he's right. Then I noticed a tear trickling down on his handsome indigo fur. Why is he crying? "You all right?" I asked him. He gave me a worried, and sad look. I felt guilty, like something in his past was comming back to him. "I knew we should of headed back to the pack. Now we're all in trouble!" Breeze said. I looked over towards Kiba. He was tucked away in his shell, rocking back and forth.I heard him say  "Theres no place like home, there's no place like home." I looked back otwards the waterfall. I started to cry. This was all my fault. I was the one who put all of my friends in danger. Maddie backed away from the waterfall. She started running towards a large bush. She saw me and made a 'Hide! Stay under there! Don't make a peep!' motion with her hands. I backed up further under the rock.
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Oh this is it were done for! I saw Taylor look over the rock for a glimpse and it looked like that the hunter just came behind the waterfall.
 He was now in this landscape. All the beauty seams to fase away when I bad person enters. He but this weird thing up to his eyes. He grinned and was walking fast towards the rock. Taylor looked over towards Maddie for help. She looked scared, panick stricken. Her eyes were all watery. The Hunter was right in front of the rock now. His feet her inches from Taylor's snout. No one made any movement, no one made any sound. We thought that we would all be safe, if we just kept still. I closed my eyes hopeing that he would go away. But.... we were wrong.
Chapter 9
He bent over and put us all in a sack. " Oh great.... in a sack agian." I said. "what do you mean breeze?" Kiba asked " Um there is no time for that I'll tell you guys later." - if there ever is a later..- "Don't be afriad! We can get out of here!" Creetori said.  Taylor was upset, she started crying. I hated seeing her like that. "This is all my fault. I'm sorry guys. If it wasn't for me, you all wouldn't be in this dangerous situation." Taylor cried. "Don't say that. You know it's not true." Creetori said Kiba was I heard Kiba groan behind Creetori. I was on top. "This is very uncomfortable." I said. "You're telling us." Kiba complained. " We will make it." Creetori said to Taylor "Sure we will Creetori  except for the hunter making us into fine fur coats." Kiba whaled. "Shut up!" Creetori whispered. Taylor's  facial ex
pression read 'what ever. We're all going to die' " WAAAA  I"m too young to be made into a fur coat!" I whaled
Creetori tryed to comfert Taylor by kissing her on the cheek. "Hey! It's not make-out time right now!" Kiba snapped."Right, sorry."  Creetori apologized
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No! I'm not going to loose Taylor again! I ran towards the man holding the sack with all my friends. I was about to tackle him when he turned around and I felt a sharp shooting pain on my neck. I fell to the ground. "Did anyone ever tell you to mind your manors?" the hunter snickered.
I looked up. The man was holding a dagger that had some blood on it. I winced in pain. "Haha. Well see ya  loser, I gotta go give one of these to the boss, then after that, they're all mine to kill. Ha ha!" The evil man laughed. He ran out to the other side of the waterfall. I put my hand up to my neck,it was bleeding bad. I rested my head on the ground. Out in the corner of my eyes, I saw other Creatu watching. then my vision got all blurry, and everything grew dark.
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That was almost too easy! Ha ha! I gotta call Rick! I picked up the walkie-talkie from my belt. "Rick, you there?" I called "Yeah, what's up?" he asked. "Our luck has turned pal! I have Cream and Sepia Tesuris, a indigo veram, and a Orchid Goiba!" "Exellent! It's time to contact the boss. Meet me in Atqueen Forest at our hideout. We'll discuss more there." Rick said. "right. see ya then." Then I turned off the Walkie-talke  and returned it to my belt. This is my lucky day. " This is my lucky day, hmmm hmmm " I hummed

 



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Buump it up

 




HI There! Plz cheack out my story A Tesuri tale and look for my ad called Request of the pets! and one more thing cheack out my shop and dialga2palkia's shop and hey does anyone have a cream jakku? it's for kir and i don't have that much tu. Peace!
Dragon907

12:32pm Jul 19 2011

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up up up



HI There! Plz cheack out my story A Tesuri tale and look for my ad called Request of the pets! and one more thing cheack out my shop and dialga2palkia's shop and hey does anyone have a cream jakku? it's for kir and i don't have that much tu. Peace!
dialga2palkia

9:15pm Jul 20 2011

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lol. nice



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Dragon907

11:14pm Jul 20 2011

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awesome thx

 




HI There! Plz cheack out my story A Tesuri tale and look for my ad called Request of the pets! and one more thing cheack out my shop and dialga2palkia's shop and hey does anyone have a cream jakku? it's for kir and i don't have that much tu. Peace!
Dragon907

8:02pm Jul 21 2011

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ok..... why isn't any one reading this? I gave it an cool ti
tle



HI There! Plz cheack out my story A Tesuri tale and look for my ad called Request of the pets! and one more thing cheack out my shop and dialga2palkia's shop and hey does anyone have a cream jakku? it's for kir and i don't have that much tu. Peace!
dialga2palkia

1:14pm Jul 22 2011

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maybe you need to change it?????? most people read a ti
tle for example..... Dark Angel..... most people think darkness is evil, and most think it's cool iguess. and angel is usually good. so the ti
tle dark angel usually means that there might be an evil angel or something....... maybe if you cange it to Tesuri Rescue or something.....



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