A little Creatu story!


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jasmeena

12:33pm Jun 5 2013

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Hi! I thought it would be nice to write a little story about one of my Creatu. This one will be about... Karisma! 
A Veram mother left her nest to go hunting. While she was gone, a nearby volcano erupted, it made everything shake. One of the eggs was unsettled and it toppled over. It would have broken, but it stayed intact. Sadly though, the eggs had been put on the top of a steep slope, so it rolled right out of the cave. It kept on rolling until it stopped at the feet of a girl wearing a cloak. She quickly picked up the egg and ran back to her home planet; aquati. The little egg was slightly damaged and had cracked in several places. Anybody who saw the girl running with the little egg, with her cloak bellowing in the wind, would have told her that there was no chance the Creatu inside would survive. But nobody noticed her. The egg was incubated and the girl anxiously waited for it to hatch, not taking notice of any of her other eggs.
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It was getting late, the sky was full of stars. Inside the hatchery, the girl waited for the egg that was unlikely to hatch. 
Crack!
 The egg was hatching! The girl watched in wonder as a little Veram slowly uncurled itself and stretched out, freeing itself of the egg shards. It was a girl, a glorious little Natural female Veram. The little Veram looked at the girl and then at the floor. With a swift jump, she landed on her new owner. "I am going to call you Karisma!" The girl said, laughing.
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A female Veram jumped onto the kitchen counter, she had seen her owner put some pizza there, and she was going to get it! But before she could, a voice cried out "Karisma, get down from there right now!" Leaping off, she looked at the girl, the girl that had saved her as a egg, the girl who save her life and never gave up. 
So, how was it? I found it fun to write! Maybe I will write about another one of my Creatu! 




Avo

12:06pm Jul 14 2013

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I think it is really good!



:)
griffinwings

7:35pm Jul 17 2013

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nice story :D



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SparkleCutsey

9:21am Jul 22 2016

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Thats great!



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