A new world [[Private with Irissa and Det]] of metal and lies


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ssather

5:05pm Oct 5 2010 (last edited on 1:29pm Oct 6 2010)

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Lightning danced through the air lighting up a forest that surrounded a building known as hell to most. It was a bitter cold night and the rain felt like ice falling down on your shoulders and if you listened carefully you could hear the sound of feet running through the mud and water as a girl ran towards the forest.
The girl was only around five years of age. She was tiny and had a curly mess of light red-brown hair stuck atop her head. Her clothes were ragged and clung tightly to her as she ran through the forest. She would stop every few minutes to catch her breath or take a small drink from the puddle and her senses and instincts were all she had to help her survive. Through the messing head of hair she had two small ears popped up on her head for she was one of the 'experiments' also known as a mutant of monster to some. She ran into the forest until she soon became lost and tired and couldn't run anymore and curled up by the roots of a tree. Her tiny body shivered as the wind blew into her causing her wet clothes to feel only colder. She sat there in the cold night for a little while without a clue of what to do and soon she cried herself to sleep.
 
~~~ Ten Years Later ~~~
  The small body of a girl raced through the forest leaping from tree to tree as Stranger ran from a half human half robot. She glanced over her side every few seconds to look over at the cyborg crashing through the trees and bushes after her and turned back around as she jumped onto the ground. She raced towards a town with a few buildings in it and crashed into run making for to close and lock the door behind her. She looked out the window as the cyborg p*censored*ed the building and looked around for her to soon give up and disappear back into the forest.
 
~~~ Plot ~~~
In the future, mankind has settled on a new 'Goldilocks planet' (Just right) and since the race was depleted from the third world war the humans decided to create a new super race of people called mutants and Cyborgs, but eventually due to overpopulation/creation, the cyborgs took over. Hating their mutant counterparts the cyborg government [NCG] created a top-secret hit team to hunt out and kill any mutants they found.
 
~~~ Irydens ~~~
a planet much like Earth, but with lighter gravity to allow the cyborgs to move more easily. There is also more landma.ss, about 65% land, and the water is mostly fresh water, with a few inland oceans. The forests tend to be overgrown as wood is rarely used for building anything, the cyborgs prefering metal and iron. Most animals are the same as on Earth but the extinct species seem revived some how. There are also a few made up creatures.
 
~~~ Mutants and Cyborgs ~~~

Cyborgs: Cyborgs are half human, half robot. They are extremly strong and can bend metal with their bare hands. They are also fast and have exeptional refelexes. They often have hightened senses because of their mechanical parts. They are rather hard to kill but can be killed by most methods used on humans. They do eat but they need to eat far less frequently than normal humans. They often have weponry biult into their mechanical parts.
Their gentict traits can only be p@ssed on by birth and creation.
They live for upto one hundred years.

Mutants: Mutants are possibly the weirdest creatures as they are normally a cross between two animals and a humans DNA. They stand on two legs and have fur/scales/etc. covering their bodies, most have tails and animal like ears. They are stronger than most humans and have a much longer lifespan. The first mutants were not born, but created in testubes in a lab somewhere. Mutants are now created by birth and artificial insemination. Mutants can eat just about anything, from vegitation to raw meat or fish. They sometimes have powers as a result of the experiments done on them. They have hightened sesnse and exelent refelxes.
They live for upto three hundered and fifty years.


~~~ Rules ~~~
No pp or gm.
Try to use correct spelling and grammar and post at least one paragraph.
Violence is allowed, but nothing to bloody or gross.
Romance is allowed I guess...
 Um...Thats all for now.^_^
 
~~~ Characters ~~~
Mutants:
Sueleen Stranger Rynn(Snaky)
Sagitta O'Connell(Det)
Nina Lain Bas.savy(Irissa)
Sinne Bryndle Hathor(Snaky)
 
Cyborgs:
 Iesrei Flo Netilo(Snaky)
 
Okay, so here it is...When can we start or whatever?



Detneth106

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[Double L in Connell, but you got it all right. <3]

Shuddering trees bent under the strength of the storm crowded the forest, leaving hardly an inch of breathing room for its inhabitants. Rain drops the size of baseballs thundered down from the heavens, the roaring thunder never ceasing its noise. Black thunderheads floated heavily across the sky, the sun, or perhaps the moon -for the time of day could not be discerned- and the air was thick with humidity.

The air was hot and muggy inside the forest, the rain troubled to find cracks through the tightly interwoven leaves and branches. But to one thin girl, it was a saviour. The storm, the inhospitality of the forest, all saved her from an untimely death.

A shivering wreck, she sat perched high in a tree, long and slender hands gripping the tree branch so tightly they were bloody, staining her fingers and the bark a dark crimson. Dressed in the old earth clothes from when the humans occupied the stinking planet named Earth, she would have cut a strange figure among the Irydens, who lived on this planet, the 'Goldilocks Planet'.

'Sidorna, Aurelei, Kukhuurik and Atran, I pray for my life. For my freedom. Save me please from the cyborgs,' she whispered softly, clenching her eyes shut. She wished the prayer was not futile, for she would need all the blessings she could get.





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Irissa13

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Bump :3



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Irissa13

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OOC: I think we should post a little about the planet, just so we can get a feel for it XD




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ssather

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((Yea, we probably should...))




Detneth106

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[Irydens, a creation of all our names (Ir - Irissa, y and ns - Snaky, and de from me. ;)]

[Irydens, oh, a planet much like Earth, but with lighter gravity to allow the cyborgs to move more easily. There is also more landma.ss, about 65% land, and the water is mostly fresh water, with a few inland oceans. The forests tend to be overgrown as wood is rarely used for building anything, the cyborgs prefering metal and iron. Most animals are the same as on Earth but the extinct species seem revived some how. There are also a few made up creatures. o3o]





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Irissa13

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OOC: Yes! We could use a ouple of the Res pets as wildlife if we're short of ideas ;)



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ssather

1:11pm Oct 6 2010 (last edited on 1:12pm Oct 6 2010)

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((Awesome!8D))

 Drip...Drip...Drip...

 Iesrei trailed through the thick for listening as the rain dripped from the leafs and onto the forest floor. His dark green eyes flickered across the forest searching for any sign of a mutant. He frowned as he spotted nothing and continued to walk through the forest, wacking bushes and branched out of his way.

 He had just been hunting down another mutant who was made from four different speces, cobra, begnal cat, and ferret. She went by the name of Stranger to her friends and was known as Ghost to the Cyborgs for her different species and smallness allowed her to move through the forest almost unheard and unseen.

 You could have caught her you idiot! Why did you let you get away? He thought to himself as he remembered chasing after her through the forest and into a small town. Where she went he didn't know and he didn't have all day to try to find her for he had other mutants and things to worry about.

 He stopped just as he heard something a little wyas ahead up in a tree and slowly walked towards it trying not ot scare it away if it was a mutant. He up into the trees far above his head and noticed what looked like a small girl up in a tree holding onto the branches tightly and both eyes closed as she prayed, most likely not to be found.

 

((Other intros are coming later.XD))




Detneth106

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No, came the thought in horror as the girl opened her eyes anf stared down at the cyborg, who though did not seem to be seearching for her, was looking nonetheless. Letting her hands go carefully from the tree branch she spread her black-blue raven wings in readiness, waiting for her enemy to move.

[In french. D:]





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 Iesrei watched the girl spread out two black raven wings and look down at him. He titled his head and narrowed his eyes as he studied the girl for a few seconds as if to see if there was any wya to attack with out her flying away. Then without any alert or wanring he shot off towards the tree and grabbed hold of a branch. He twirled himself upside down and grabbed the next branch with his toes as he made his way up to the girl.



Irissa13

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Nim crouched low in the tree she was currently sat in, her belly hovering about an inch from the branch and her eyes wide as she watched the Cyborg standing under a large tree across from her. She prayed that he didnt look towards here as she would surely be seen, her bright white fur sticking out like a sore thumb.

'Please dont turn around... Please, if there is a god you'll make him stay facing the other way.' She thought, clutching the branch beneath her for dear life. Her life depended on her ability to cling onto the tree and not make a sound. Her right leg began to slip from the branch, threatening to send her crashing to the ground below. Her left leg had long since gone dead and was now also sliding downwards, dragging the rest of her body from the branch. She let out a sharp cry, her right leg getting caught on a large branch and emitting a horrible crunching noise before she hit the ground. The landed on her feet and her right leg promptly gave out as she did so "Oh sh!t..." She murmered.




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Detneth106

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'No,' she gasped as the cyborg swung his way up gracefully to land next to her on the branch. Letting out a scream of terror she let herself go limp, and dropped out of the tree. The scream had not been faked, but Sagitta had timed it perfectly. It would seem just as if she had fainted from shock.

Ramming into the thin branches she fell patiently until there was an opening large enough to hold her wingspan. Bracing herself the girl snapped out her wings and gasped with pain as the wind rushed into them. 'Idiot,' she hissed with pleasure, though her pretty voice was marred with pain.

Gray eyes blinked quickly as she flapped her wings again, gaining enough altitude to land on a thick tree branch on all fours with cat-like grace. Black-tipped tail flicked from side to side as she crept forwards swiftly, the spines on her back arching with anger.

That son of a hunk of metal won’t get me, she thought fiercely. Flicking her ears and baring lily-white fangs the mutant began climbing up the trunk of the tree she had landed on, slithering upwards as quickly as she dared.





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'No,' she gasped as the cyborg swung his way up gracefully to land next to
her on the branch. Letting out a scream of terror she let herself go limp, and
dropped out of the tree. The scream had not been faked, but Sagitta had timed
it perfectly. It would seem just as if she had fainted from shock.



Ramming into the thin branches she fell patiently until there was an opening
large enough to hold her wingspan. Bracing herself the girl snapped out her
wings and gasped with pain as the wind rushed into them. 'Idiot,' she hissed
with pleasure, though her pretty voice was marred with pain.



Gray eyes blinked quickly as she flapped her wings again, gaining enough
altitude to land on a thick tree branch on all fours with cat-like grace.
Black-tipped tail flicked from side to side as she crept forwards swiftly, the
spines on her back arching with anger.



That son of a hunk of metal won’t get
me,
she thought fiercely. Flicking her ears and baring lily-white fangs the
mutant began climbing up the trunk of the tree she had landed on, slithering
upwards as quickly as she dared.





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Irissa13

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OOC: <_< My charrie is on the ground with a broken leg... >_> Cant do much...



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Detneth106

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[Meh, let Ssather-kins respond. ^o^]




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Irissa13

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OOC: Yhus, we shall let her XD



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ssather

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 Iesrei leaped from the tree after the girl. He landed onto the ground and began to run below her until he got to the other tree. He jumped into the tree and began to follow the girl up using his metal arm to help pull himself up after the girl. He hissed as he felt on of his hands slip and felt himself slid down a few inches before he caught himself and began to climb up the trunk again. He looked over his should and looked down letting out a large gulp as he looked down at the forest floor far below him. He hated heights...They were his only fear in the world.

 

 Sinne walked through the forest quietly as he listened to a bird sing a joyful song that carried through the forest. He closed his eyes and began to hum along until a loud cry interrupted him and the bird. He opened his eyes and looked around for where the scream came from when he nearly tripped over a girl on the forest floor. "What the-" He stopped looking down at Nim confused. "Are you okay?" He asked not noticing Iesrei or Sagitta.




Detneth106

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'Nah nah, metal man can't stand the heights?' Sagitta taunted from her perch above him. However, she didn't stop her movement. Climbing at a quick pace she knew she would reach the top of the tree in a few moments. Then, she would be free.

Hand over hand, using branches as footholds, the slim girl climbed higher and higher, calling on her snow leopard genes to aid her. Using a fox's nimbleness she easily avoided any trailing branches or leaves.

Darn it, she thought with a sharp intake of breath as she climbed. Her tail. It would be an easy thing for the cyborg to grab if she didn't lift it out of reach, but then she would have nothing to balance herself.

'Just climb faster,' she reasoned with herself, hoping sincerely that it would be enough to keep her from death. And the fact that the metal man hated heights.





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 "C'mon...Just a little higher." Iesrei told himself not wanting to look down again. He crawled up the tree crashing through the branches and twigs as he crawled up behind her. He felt the twigs scrape against his 'human self', but ignored them only focusing on keeping up with the mutant girl.

 You can't let this one escape...Not after loosing the last one. He thought to himself trying to climb faster. She is going to get away if you don't hurry!




Irissa13

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Nim clutched her her leg to her chest "I-I think its broken..." She gasped, tears escaping her green eyes. She choked out a strangled sob, still clutching her leg to her chest "You have t-to help m-me... One of them is after me..." She murmerd, a pained gasp escaping her lips. She looked up at him "I really n-need some help..." She stuttered, clearly in pain.

OOC: PHAIL.




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