Tesuri Dawn


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dialga2palkia

10:41am Apr 2 2012

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((Hello! I'm back on Rescreatu, and hopefully will be writing more stories. I fear that my last work, Tesuri Skies might have gotten deleted due to my absence. But it is okay, now I am writing another piece called Tesuri Dawn. Most of my pets that I had a while ago are long gone now, but thankfully I still have a few pets that I have saved in my gallery, including Taylor the Tesuri, Creetori the Veram, and Kiba the Goiba, if you remember any of those that I have used in Tesuri Skies. I will be sharing my love for them by also placing them as talking characters in Tesuri Dawn. Tesuri Dawn may or may not contain some parts of the plot of Tesuri Skies, and hopefully will become popular. I fear though that in October, when I turn 13, that the Forums might be blocked off to me, according to the post in the Role Play section titled:tle="" href="http://http://www.rescreatu.com/forum/cat/games/rp/important-information-regarding-inappropriate-roleplaying/%7Epage/1/"> IMPORTANT! Information regarding inappropriate role playing. If that is the case, then I will continue my stories in the Blogs when they open up for me when I turn 13. Sorry to those of you who are under aged of the blogs and enjoy my writing. Anyway, hopefully I am much better at writing now, since I have been practicing deeply in my room at writing fictional novels. Hopefully this one catches your attention makes you grip for more. Thank you for reading this long notice, I have missed everyone on here. Luv you all! ~ D2P))


CHAPTER 1


Her paws ran as fast as they could, she panted hard, and her fur was warm and sweaty from the massive running. She looked back behind her shoulder. They were still chasing her, emitting low growls. Their strong paws thudded against the dirt path. She could feel the warmth of the beasts.

She tried to put on a burst of speed, and dived in a near by bush. She stood as still as she could, hiding her tail and wings. She tried to calm her breathing down, trying to recover from the chase. "I need to find some place where they won't find me." she whispered. "Some place where I'll be safe, some place where my scent won't reach them." She peered out of the leaves of the bushes, one of the Zaphao that was chasing her was sniffing around the base of the bush.

"Here little Tesuri," he muttered. "I know your around here some where, I can smell you." She gasped, and stood as still and quiet as she could be. She could already feel her fur tingle from the electricity emitting from his paws. She stared at those long claws, and those sharp teeth. She was certain that the horns on its head and the ones on his back her sharp as a needle as well.

The Tesuri's ear twitched as she heard a gun shot. "Have you found her yet?" a rough, greasy voice asked. "No sir!" replied the Zaphao. It was a human, he stepped out from behind the tree, holding a shot gun rifle in his hand. "What about you, numbers 2, 3, and 4?" "No sir! Nothing sir!" replied the other Zaphao. The man scowled, "Well get moving then! Before I shoot you four and sell you to the boss!"

The Tesuri gasped, "A hunter! I have to get out of here." She turned around and dashed quickly out of the bush. She could hear the Zaphao growl at the bush, they had smelled her scent, and now the chase was back on.

She tried to flap her wings, "Come on wings! Work, work!" she gasped. She saw the Zaphao band run up close behind her in the corner of her eye. "No!" she panted, and continued running hard. The sharp rocks and pebbles on the dirt path began cutting into her paws. It was starting to sting.

There was a sharp curve up ahead. She skidded to slow down, and turned around the corner. Two of the Zaphao did the same, but the others kept running and slowed down to late, and ended up crashing into a tree. 'Two down, two more to go.' the Tesuri thought.

There was a large lake up ahead. The Tesuri looked back, one of the Zaphao tried to bite her tail. She gasped and ran faster, 'They are getting too close.' She ran full speed for the lake ahead. She could hear her heart pound against her rib cage, she was panting hard, and dashed with her head down into the water.

The two Zaphao skidded to a halt beside the lake. They grinned at each other, and one of the dipped their claws into the water, letting off some of their electricity. Blue streaks of electricity ran all through out the lake, hurting the Tesuri and all the other life that lived in it. there was loud buzzing noises, and the whole lake glowed bright blue.

Underneath the water's surface, the Tesuri screamed in pain. Air bubbles emitted from her mouth, bubbling to the surface. Every muscle in her body tingled and ached; sharp shooting pains ran all about her being. She opened her eyes, but it hurt even more as the water began to electrocute them. She shut them tight, trying to paddle her way to the top.

She finally broke through the water, and slowly climbed her way onto the ground. She gasped and coughed for breath, spitting out the damaged water. She turned her head and saw that the Zaphao has spotted her and started to make their way to her side of the lake. She gasped and coughed some more. She stood up, shook the water out of her fur, and continued running.

After quite some time of running, she began to slow down. She had lost them, and hopefully for good. She panted hard and collapsed on the ground. She buried her muzzle in her cream colored fur, and tried to lick her wounds. The wounds stung when she licked them, but she continued to try and heal herself.

She heard a growling sound from the bushes, and looked up to see three pairs of eyes glowing from the bushes. "Wh... who's there?" she asked, her voiced cracked from the electrified water, and cracked from fear. The figure stepped out of the bushes, their glowing orange eyes glaring down at her.

The creatu had black scales, with orange amber crystals growing on its body. It's under belly was a reddish-brownish color; it had webbed feet, and three claws at the end of its tail. But what was most surprising about this creatu, was that it had three heads. Never had the Tesuri seen a creatu like this. "What are you?" she managed to ask.

"We are known as Crusher, the Ardur." the three heads growled in a perfect union. The young Tesuri shook her head, "No, I know what Ardur look like, and they don't have three heads!" she barked. "That's because I'm a special kind of Ardur. A mutated one in fact."

The Tesuri gulped, 'Three heads to tear me apart!' she thought. She backed away slowly, ears down and tail tucked between her legs. "Why don't you just fly away, little Tesuri." The mutated Ardur chuckled. "I... I have a name... you... you know!" she stuttered. Teh Ardur began to slither towards her, "Would you mind telling us that name?"

"It's... it's... T...Taylor..." she stuttered, whimpering. "Well, Taylor. Would you like to be devoured? We're sure your fur would feel great slipping down our throat." the Ardur chuckled. Taylor whimpered even louder and backed herself up against a tree. The Ardur smiled and, wrapped himself around the small Tesuri. All three of its jaws were open, and drool was starting to drool out.

"Crusher, do not eat the cream puff!" the hunter shouted as he stepped froth from the bushes. The Ardur closed all three of its mouths and looked up at the hunter, "Yes master." it grumbled. He looked at the Tesuri, "I was just teasing her, Master."

Taylor felt like she couldn't breath. she kept trying to grasp from breath, but Crusher was squeezing her too hard. It seemed like the perfect mourning dawn was being broken to little bits, like pieces of glass falling off of a mirror and leaving behind a thick blackness. "Crusher, alive!" the hunter barked.

The world seemed to get lighter now, and the Tesuri's chest didn't seem so heavy. She began breathing again, and stared at the two opposing threats in front of her. If she tried to escape, the Ardur would come after her. She could battle him, though, but doubt that she would win. Another threat was the shot gun that the human was carrying. One blow from that baby and she would be dead in an instant. She had to find some way to escape.

Taylor closed her eyes, maybe if she played dead, they would let her go. She made her breathing slow, until she was holding her breath. She was completely still, and completely quiet. She was sure that the smell of the salty lake water and singed fur would hide the scent of her living. "Crusher! I said alive!" the hunter yelled and stormed over and bent down to face the Tesuri.

"She is alive, Master! I am certain that I didn't kill her." replied the Ardur. He lifted her up to his Master, who placed his two fingers on the neck of the Tesuri. "She barely has a pulse!" he spat. "The boss won't want a dead cream! Dispose of her, fast and quick." he ordered to the Ardur. Crusher chuckled deeply, "Yes sir!"

Taylor could feel the creatu's hot breath against her neck. she opened her eyes quick and stabbed the Ardur in one of the pairs of eyes with her claws. Crusher shrieked and let go of the Tesuri. Taylor quickly dashed away. "AH! Useless creatu, get her!" the hunter growled. "Yes sir!" replied the Zaphao. The chase was back on. The hunter looked over at the Ardur, "USELESS!" he shouted. He hopped on the Ardur's back, "Let's go." he mumbled. Crusher roared and ran, carving into the ground and traveling underneath.

She kept running from the Zaphao. Up ahead, she could make out a faint scent of a human. "If it's the hunter, I'm doomed!" she moaned. But she kept going anyway, and soon she could see a tall white house. If she could make it there, then she could hide her scent and hide in the side bushes. She looked back behind her. The band of Zaphao continued to chase her.

She shook her head and continued to run, all she had to do now was cross the thick black road. 'I can do this, I can do this.' she thought. She felt the cool pavement on her paw's pads, stinging the sores on her paws even more.

There was a loud horn honking, and Taylor turned her head and saw a large car rolling its way towards her. She widened her eyes and yelped as it it hit her, making her tumble on the road. The Zaphao skidded to a halt. The paused by the road, "Dead Tesuri now..." Number 3 muttered.

"Why are you four standing around?" the hunter asked, riding up behind the Zaphao on Crusher. "Target is now deceased." Number 2 explained, pointing to the road. "Great, well come on! No use trying to catch her now." he scowled. The band of creatu hunters left, leaving Taylor out in the middle of the road.

A girl walked up to the Tesuri. "Thank heavens, you're still breathing." she sighed with relief and she watched the Tesuri lay there. "Must be knocked out cold though," she murmured. She picked up the Tesuri and held her in her arms. She watched the rise and fall of her side as she laid there, silently breathing. "I watched as that car drove by, it must've hurt."

She patted the Tesuri's head, and stared at her hand as she saw the Tesuri's blood staining her hand. "I'll take care of you." she whispered in the Tesuri's ear, "Don't worry."



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dialga2palkia

10:31am Apr 4 2012

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CHAPTER 2

Taylor opened her eyes and moaned. "Where am I?" she asked herself, blinking. She turned her head and saw a human sitting in a chair beside her. She widened her eyes and sat up quickly. A sharp shooting pain ran through her body. She winced.

"Shh, be careful, you need rest." the human said. The Tesuri stared at her, "Who...who are you?" she asked, baring her teeth, ready for an attack if needed. The girl giggled, "No need to worry, don't be afraid." she smiled, stroking Taylor under the chin.

"No...no... st..stop..." Taylor spoke softly, but she was actually enjoying being scratched. Her eyes rolled to the back of her head, and she panted, rolling her tongue out. Her tail wagged, and her ears drooped down to the sides. "Feels good?" the girl asked. Taylor nodded.

The human stopped and smiled down at the Tesuri, "I'm Ever. What's your name?" she asked. Taylor didn't trust the human just yet, "L... Let me go." she demanded, but her voice was still weak from the electrocuted water.

Ever shook her head, "Sorry, not until you get better. You'll be eaten alive and killed if I let you go right now." Taylor remembered how Crusher had almost eaten her, and how the Zaphao and the hunter would do anything to catch her. she had almost gotten shot with the hunter's gun, and zapped to death by Zaphao.

Ever placed her hand behind Taylor's head. "You alright there?" she asked. Taylor shook her head and backed away. "Keep away." she warned. Ever sighed, "You have every right to be afraid. You don't know me, you don't trust me yet. But I promise you, I will not harm you. I will take care of you until you're well enough to live on your own." she said.

Taylor tilted her head and stared up at Ever. "You're not like the hunter? You don't want to catch me because of the color of my fur? You don't want to sell me?" she asked. The human shook her head, "I care for all creatu, I despise hunters and people who use creatu for no good." she said. She pet Taylor on the head. "You're safe here."

The girl got off of the bed that her and Taylor were sitting on and walked to the door. She paused and looked back at her, "You need anything? You hungry, thirsty, what?" she asked.

Taylor had a tight pain in her stomach when she thought about taking food and water from a human. But she was becoming dehydrated and starving. She had lost a lot of energy running from the hunter and his creatu.

She thought for a moment, and hopped off the bed. She winced and fell to the floor. She noticed that a bandage was wrapped around her ankle. "Wha....what's this?" she asked, sniffing the bandage. "Your ankle was broken, and I bandaged it up. You can still walk on your paw, but don't put too much pressure on it." Ever explained.

Taylor got back up, and kept limping. Several times she fell back down to the floor. She blinked, sat up, and shook her head again. "How am I suppose to get better if I can't walk?" she muttered. "Can't you fly? You have wings."

The Tesuri looked up at Ever. She shook her head, "I can't fly." she said. "But you have wings, fully fledged wings?" Taylor sighed, "My parents died before they could teach me how to fly." she said. "Oh," Ever tilted her head. "It's alright, maybe I can teach you?" "How?" Taylor asked. "I use to care for a Easero and watched it fly. I understand some of it, so maybe I can teach you?"

Taylor shook her head, "Humans can't teach creatu how to fly." she said. Ever pursed her lips, "I guess not..." she said, then shook her head. "Do you still want something to eat?" she asked. Taylor nodded, and Ever went to pick her up in her arms.

Taylor sniffed and looked down. "Don't drop me..." she murmured. Ever smiled and walked out of the room and down the stairs. She walked into the kitchen and set Taylor on the table.

Ever got a saucer of water and a bowl of Kellog's Krave and placed them in front of Taylor. "Bon apetit." she smiled. Taylor looked down at the two bowls in front of her. She has never seen any food like Krave before, and she didn't know if the water was safe to drink. "Is the water electrocuted?" she asked Ever.

Ever chuckled, "No. Why would it be?" "What about poisoned?" Taylor asked, squinting her eyes. "Would I serve it to you if it's poisoned?" "Is it clean?" "Yes..." "What about..." "The water is fine, little Tesuri."

Taylor stopped talking and closed her snout. She looked down at the water, and finally decided to take quite a few laps of it. Ever smiled as she watched her drink. "So, what is your name?"

She stopped drinking, and peeked at Ever out of the corner of her eyes. "Taylor... My name is Taylor..." she said. Ever nodded, "Taylor the cream-colored Tesuri." she smiled. "Nice." Taylor narrowed her eyes, 'So she does want me because of my fur...' she thought.

After she was done with the water, and some of the Krave, Ever took her outside. Taylor smelled the fresh air, she had missed feeling calm and safe outside. The sun was warming her fur, and she could hear bird creatu chirp in the trees. The wind blew gently, making the leaves of the nearby trees and bushes rustle. there was a large pond near the center of the backyard, surrounded by wild flowers and cocktails.

Taylor slowly limped over to the pond. She peered into the water and got spooked by her own reflection. That was how clear the water was, that you could see a crystal clear reflection of yourself. She dipped her good paw in the water, flinching when she had shifted her weight to her bad paw. The water felt cool and welcoming, the underwater rippled flowing between her paw fingers. The cool water felt good on her sore paws, and it seemed like it was trying to heal her quick.

The water was welcoming her back, it was kissing her paws with its wet lips and trying to urge her into the water. The young Tesuri obeyed without hesitation, padding into the water. She had missed the water's coolness, she was glad that it was clean, she was glad that it was not hurt, and she was especially glad that it wasn't boiling with electricity.

"This feels nice, I miss swimming in the waters of Atquati." Taylor smiled, and laid down in the pond. "I would expect that out of an Atquati creatu." Ever said, sitting down next to the pond's edge. She watched Taylor play in the water with anxious eyes.

Taylor turned her head and stared at Ever, then sighed. "You can come in and join me if you like, Ever. The water feels great!" she barked. the human girl smiled and folded her pant legs up around her knees. she took her jacket off and took out her hair tie, letting her long golden-brown hair fall into her face. She took her socks and shoes off and walked into the water.

"It's cold," she whispered. "You'll get use to it," Taylor smiled, splashing some water onto the girl. Ever gasped, her tank top now soaked. "Why you little..." she laughed, splashing some water onto Taylor as well. The two had fun splashing water onto each other until Taylor sensed something in the bushes.

She turned her head, sniffing. The scent smelled familiar, but not too familiar. She stared into the forest with her twinkling blue eyes. A low growl emitted from her throat. "Taylor, what's wrong?" Ever asked, kneeling down next to the Tesuri. She didn't reply, but kept growling.

"Here, let's go inside and dry off. It's getting a little dark and chilly out here." she said, picking the creatu up. Taylor continued to growl at the bushes and the trees. 'I know someone's there... and I don't like it.' she thought.

"Ah, so that Tesuri is alive. Crusher was right... Well then, i guess I'm going to try and capture it again." the hunter muttered, watching the girl and the Tesuri enter the house. "And this time, I will succeed."



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8:16am Apr 6 2012

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CHAPTER 3

Eyes, glowing yellow eyes. Everywhere she went, eyes were watching her, glowing brightly in the pitch darkness. she kept trying to run away from them, but they kept reappearing in front of her in a snap. She was surrounded, with no way out. She couldn't see anything but these eyes, and it was driving the Tesuri crazy.

She tried barking at them, howling and snarling, but it didn't scare them away. She heard three different sets of voices laughing at her. Voices that were deep and scary and monstrous. Instead of scaring them away, they scared her away, making her run in the other direction.

She seemed to be running on and on, forever and ever, stumbling in the blackness of the scene. 'Where's the sun when you need it?' she thought. All she heard was the laughter laughing at her as she stumbled, and all she can see was the glowing yellow eyes that seemed to always be following her. The eyes, they were like large glowing lemons, and the laughter was like ear splitting thunder.

She continued running, but soon the black ground beneath her began to feel different, changing from nothingness to a bump and scaly feel. She began to slow her run, until it was just a walk. She felt the scaly ground with her paws, it felt familiar, too familiar, threatening familiar.

When she saw a large orange-yellow crystal, she tilted her head until it hit her. This was... an Ardur that she was walking on. Taylor turned around and saw the three glowing eyes, and their head came more into focus.

It was the Ardur, it was Crusher. "Hello little Tesuri, missed us?" the three heads said in an union. They all smiled after that, showing their sharp teeth. The middle head dipped down, close to Taylor's face. He began sniffing the fur, "Damaged, but she will heal soon. Master won't mind though." it chuckled.

Taylor felt her breath being sucked out of her was the Ardur moved and squeezed her. She gasped for breath, but none came. She was beginning to feel light headed, and her vision became blurry. She could feel its hot breath breathing on the back of her neck.

"Taylor? Taylor?" Ever called from far away. Crusher looked up, letting his guard down just a little bit. Taylor realized that this was her chance to get away. She squirmed about and bit the Ardur's scales. Even though it felt like nothing but a pinch, the Ardur dropped her anyway.

Taylor was beginning to fall to the ground, but she didn't know where the ground was. It was still pitch black, until she saw something bright dance under her.

It was yellow and blue, and it moved like crazy, making the furs on the back of Taylor's neck rise the closer she got to it. Then she realized, 'Electricity!' She tried flapping her wings as hard as she could, but it was no use. She didn't know how to fly, and the electricity kept clipping them together at her sides.

It began to come closer and closer, brighter and brighter, and more painful. She closed her eyes, ready for feeling the pain for the second time. She could hear Ever shout for her at the side, "Taylor! Taylor wake up!"

Taylor opened her eyes, and looked down at Ever, before the electricity swallowed her whole.

The next thing she didn't expect though. Ever was shaking Taylor, and her eyes shot open quickly. Her pupils began to get small, and startled by the sudden awakening, she fell off of the couch and landed n the floor with a loud thud.

Ever giggled, "Are you okay?" she asked. Taylor sat and and shook herself, looking back at the girl. "Uh, yeah, sure." "You seemed like you were having a night mare..." Ever said, getting off of the couch and sitting next to the Tesuri. "You were whimpering and everything, want to talk about it?"

Taylor thought for a moment, then sighed. "There's this hunter who is after me to sell me to his boss because of my cream colored fur," she began. "I was chased by Zaphao and they electrocuted me in a pond, along with other creatu. When I finally managed to get out, they started chasing me again until I met a three headed Ardur." "Three headed? I think you drank too much milk last night..." Ever said, tilting her head. Taylor shook hers. "No, it was real."

"The Ardur captured me and almost strangled me to death, was about to eat me too until I broke free. I ran again, with both the band of Zaphao and the Ardur on my tail, literally. Then the  next thing I knew, I saw your house, went to cross the road, and got hit by something." Taylor finished.

Ever nodded, "And your nightmare?" "It was the Ardur, his name is Crusher. He chased me in my dream, not leaving me alone, and almost strangled me again once more before you called my name. He dropped me, but into a pool of electricity though. That's when I woke up before the pain could get me."

Ever nodded and picked Taylor up, holding her in her arms. "It's okay, Taylor. I won't let anything get you." she whispered in the Tesuri's ear. Taylor smiled and closed her eyes, placing her head down and resting her muzzle on the girl's arm. "Thanks Ever," she said.



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