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12:31pm Mar 9 2010 (last edited on 11:14am Mar 10 2010)

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So. You can continue this story.

Story starts with this;

" I woke up in dark cave.  -So,here i've born. Where are my parents? Hmm. I am alone, i quess.-   "

 

  There you go! Lets continue! :3






Reeses

8:49pm Mar 9 2010

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The first thing I noted was how desolate my surroundings were.  A cool wind rustled through my fragile bones, bringing with it the mysterious scent of the world.  Unsure and rather unconfident, I uncurled from my position and struggled to sit upright.  For a brief moment, I pondered about my situation and why I was here.  After that time pas-sed, I stopped and checked myself over- after all, shouldn't I at least own the knowledge of who I was?  
 
 




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NightmareDream

2:04pm Mar 11 2010 (last edited on 2:04pm Mar 11 2010)

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I felt like there was something missing but I couldn't remember anything. All I could remember from before this place was a strange place where the stars were so close I could touch them...And the moon that smiled down upon my face. The place I lived in now was very different.

I pushed the thoughts aside and walked outside of the cave only to find....

 




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5:13pm Mar 11 2010

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 A strange creature was waiting for me, looking like it had been expecting me for a long time. It was like a lizard, but not exactly a lizard. It had large, bat-like wings, and its scales were violet. The creature's large golden eyes looked down at me.

     "What are you?" I asked.

     "A dragon," was the unusual creature's rumbling reply. "A certain type of dragon."

       I had no idea what a dragon was at all, and closed my eyes, for a moment, wondering if I'd ever heard of one before. But my memory was absolutely blank.

     "What type of dragon?" I asked, suddenly looking at the dragon curiously.




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1:17pm Mar 12 2010

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"Can't you tell, boy?" the dragon hissed. "I'm a chinese dragon. And you've stolen something precious from me. Which is why I stole something you might find are missing..." I rushed through my thoughts.

"You stole my memories," I answered. The dragon smiled (or I think it smiled).

"Exactely. But that isn't nearly enough... For what you stole was dearly important to me... It was my....




omnoms

11:41am Mar 17 2010 (last edited on 11:43am Mar 17 2010)

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ability to fly well", the dragon said for me.

 "How, how i'd do that?" i asked.  

      "Not you,but your parents did. They cut off my tail." -and then the dragon show his tail, and i saw that there were half cutted off. 

" .. My parents? Who were they.. ?   ..And why they cut off your tail ?" i asked.






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4:48pm Mar 17 2010

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He merely snorted. "I don't feel like supplying you with many answers."
 
"You're mad about that, and take it out on me?" My brow furrowed in confusion and possibly grief.
 
A sense of gloom and emotion fell on his previously angry face.  Closing his large set of dark eyes, he exhaled a large smelly tendril of smoke and spoke in a low tone. "They also killed my mate."
 
 




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Staeria

1:54am Mar 18 2010

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This was then I noticed a pile of ashes behind him.

'You flamed your mate's carc*censored*, didn't you?'

'Yes, I did, and why so?' He snarled.




The longing, the yearning, when can it be fulfilled?
The sadness, the loneliness, when can it ebb away?
The anger, the fire, when can it be quenched?
The happiness, the blissfulness, when can I be touched?
When can I be washed clean, and start afresh again?
omnoms

1:19pm Mar 18 2010

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"..but,why? i just dont get it. " i said.

 "Dragons get peace after death,if they get burned into ash",the dragon explained for me.

,and i feel stupid, - of course,because they are fire-creatures! -

  " ..When you was about to give my memories back? .. i think i can't give anything for you, erhm. i cant get your tail and/or mate back,even i would try to. "

   " Yes you can. " the dragon said for me. 






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3:17pm Mar 18 2010

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Surprised, I gazed at the beast. Then I re-gained my composure. "How?" I wondered aloud. The dragon gave me a toothy grin. It's hot dragon breath hit me like a brick.

"There's a device out there that lets you change something that happened in history... And I want you to get it. The only problem is...




Reeses

4:08pm Mar 18 2010

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"You're a human, and humans do not do anything for anyone except themselves unless there's something in it for them.  And, I am rather weak since I took away your memory...though you may not realize it, you've been asleep in a coma-like state for many years now...approximately 5 years.  There's a possibility I do not posess enough power to return them, but that item can also change it so after you return my mate and such, you can also use its other benefits.  The item holds immense power, and the holder also gains some energy."
 
"That's complicated," I replied wryly, not exactly wanting to embark on a quest.




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NightmareDream

3:57pm Mar 19 2010

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"Too bad your decision doesn't count, now, isn't it?" the dragon hissed. "Though I am in a weak state, I am strong enough to devour a puny human like you." I decided it would be best to do as the dragon asked and embark on the quest anyways.

"Fine. Then... Where do I go?" I asked.




Reeses

6:45pm Mar 19 2010

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"A place," The dragon replied in a mocking tone, and suddenly fell into a coughing state, huge gasps wracking his body.
 
"Where is this 'place'?" I demanded, trying not to let my irritated tone seep into my voice, "You give me no clues, I can't get it."




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omnoms

10:48am Apr 22 2010 (last edited on 10:49am Apr 22 2010)

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.. I think the dragon heard irritating in my voice,because it looked me with angry look.

" .. why cant you just let me know where this place is,.. " i said carefully,

and continued with "..so i will try to do something that helps both of u- .. you? "

  After i gave some respect after the angry look,and i said that i'd help it, it said for me "..






omnoms

2:33pm May 12 2010

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".. You can find this place from the desert... From South.. Large, burning hot desert... There, is an cave.. " -it said for me mysteriously, thinking at the same time.

"... but if there is an cave in desert, how i can find it? " i asked.

  " ..i was about to came into this part. You can have this," and the dragon gave me one of it's scales. 

 ".. what im supposed to do with your scale? And how it helps me to find that cave? " i asked. 

I have alot of questions today.

 The dragon seemed to be a little annoyed. Maybe i should know something,that it knew. I just didnt know what.

" My scales, like evry dragons, start to shine.. abit.. when there is water near.." it said.

Of it's voice, i got that the word "water" was important. So.. there is water in that cave, and  this water was important? Maybe it wasnt normal water. So, i asked for more info; ...

 

// Alright, why there was a freeze in this story? Too hard to imagine some next? O___x

Well, i made up ^something.^ Continue for now? ;3 






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3:50pm May 12 2010

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So there's water in this mysterious cave that just so happens to be in the middle of a gigantic desert?" I asked, weighing the dragon's scale in the palm of my hand. It felt very smooth, and surprisingly cool, like a river stone. "What does water have to do with a mysterious device anyway? Is there something special about it?" The sun was just starting to show in the east, pale and halfhearted, as though it didn't look forward to the day and what it would bring any more than I did. I let the few lazy rays of the sun lend their light to the purple scale in my hand absentmindedly as I waited for the dragon's response.

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2:46am May 13 2010

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The dragon shifted on its feet and leaned its head closer to mine, its sulfurous breath searing my face, "You humans know nothing," he growled, 'but I will answer your idiotic question, if only to make you stop asking more."

I nodded silently, not wishing to enrage this powerful dragon with his fange mouth so close to my face. 

The dragon snorted and turned his head to the side, so that his large indigo eye was gazing into my own. "Listen well," he murmured, a now musical quality to his voice. "Far in the past, this machine was created, for what purpose though, that is unknown. This water is special, for it powers the history-altering machine. But only those pure of heart can make my scale sense this water. Do you understand? Any double-rossing me will result in immediate death."

I gave a sharp intake of breath, my eyes wide with fear. "Y...yes sir," I managed to force from my mouth, my voice sounding like a pitiful squeak. 

"You will get to this desert by..." began the dragon imperiously.





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1:58pm Jun 1 2010 (last edited on 1:59pm Jun 1 2010)

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".. following that river,.." it pointed with it's head " ..which goes to the west. When the river dissappears to underground, you are about to reach the desert. Not very long from there. You'll find it, im pretty sure." it said. "Even you are human, and they are not very wise." it continued, and made odd voice, like laugh..

" .. Alright, i'll tr- ... I'll find the desert, the cave,and the mysterious water." i said with the scale on my hand.  "How shall i take the water with me, if im trying to get it into the machine- .. ?" -i was about to ask also where the machine is,but i remembered,that the dragon was annoyed of that i speak too much.. 

It was calm. It said "Dont worry about the machine, just try to find the cave. You'll find me from the cave.. ".. As when it said the last words, it jumped with huge noises, crashing branches, rumbling stones, and it flied.

It was in the air. Not very still, though, I could to see that it cant fly well. It's tail went left'n right all the time in the air. Scary. Then, with nooisy FLAP, FLAP -it flied away. It was gone.

I was just watching it's flying, so i almost forgot what i had to do. 

I saw the river, splashing next to me, few feets away, and i started my mission. ^^

 






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12:59pm Jun 20 2010

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I enjoyed walking beside the river for a while, but it kind of got boring after a while. Some adventure. Still, it's not like I could back out of it, considering I would have a dragon breathing fire down my neck if I didn't-- literally. It was then that I grew careless, tripped over a rock, and fell into the swifly moving river (thankfully rushing in the direction I was supposed to go in) and was swept away by the current. "Aahh!--" I was cut off from my yelling as my head went under the water. The next thing I new was the sensation of falling with a bunch of water and staring at black rocks below me. I was coming down to meet them at terrifying speeds. I had gone over a waterfall.



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