Issie finds a horse (part 1)


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FluzzyPerson

11:27am Dec 10 2013 (last edited on 4:26am Dec 30 2013)

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As Issie sped along the windy road she turned her head to
look to the right and stopped right in her tracks, she was gasping like a
goldfish. There was a beautiful horse; she knew that horse, Pride and Joy. She
stared at Pride for a long time, taking in his beautiful hind legs his
beautiful summer coat which was gold with the sun glowing down on it. Issie
watched his muscles twitching in the sun, flicking his tail lazily at the odd,
annoying fly. He was beautiful, just how she last saw him. Issie had last seen
him when he was five. She had found him in a terrible thunderstorm; he was
cantering away from her hiding beneath the trees. Issie had taken him in, cared
for him, and taught him everything he should know. Never to bite or kick. She
even taught him when she whistled he must come. She raised her fingers to her
lips and blew a short, sharp, high note and then a long, not so sharp, low note
and then she called him, “Pride, come here boy!” Pride looked up and saw Issie
coming towards him. He whinnied and galloped to her. At last, she was reunited
with her horse. “I missed you so much boy,” she whispered in his ear. “Excuse
me, what are you doing to my horse?” asked a girl with long blonde hair.
“What’s your name? Do you own him?” Issie asked nervously. “My name is Nicole
and yes, I own him! So, what are you doing to him?” asked Nicole. “Was his name
Pride and Joy by any chance?” Issie asked ignoring to answer Nicole’s question.
“Yes, his name was Pride and Joy, but we got him from an auction.” Nicole said
looking cross. “Well, my name is Issie, and I believe this is my horse.” Issie
said climbing over the fence. “How?” spat out Nicole. “Well, Pride” Issie
started, “His name is Goldie,” said Nicole. “Well, Pride A.K.A. Goldie was
stolen from me. I taught everything he knows.” Issie said proudly. “Well, how
do you know he’s your horse?” Nicole asked looking angrier by the minute.
“Well, his name was Pride and Joy and the other one is the whistle I gave him.”
Issie said shrinking back, it looked like Nicole was going to explode. “Well,
please leave Goldie,” she said Goldie slowly, “alone please.” and with that she
stomped off taking Goldie with her. “You’ll see Nicole, I will get him back.”
She whispered to herself. She cycled speedy quick home. “Mom! Dad! I need to
talk to you! Lounge in five minutes please.” And Issie ran upstairs to get
changed in to comfy clothes. Five minutes later she was in the lounge with her
mom and dad. “Mom, dad,” she began, “I don’t know how to say this but, I found
Pride.” Issie said smiling. “Fantastic! Where is he?” asked mom. “At Hog Hollow
Trails.” Issie sang.  “How do you know
it is Pride?” asked dad confused. “Dad one I know him anywhere, two I whistled
and he came and three because I asked Nicole, that’s the girl who owns Pride
but now called Goldie, about him.” Issie said, she couldn't help but have a
grin. 



SHOULD I CARRY ON TO PART 2???




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Crystaalis

5:41pm Dec 29 2013

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Please continue this! :D



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FluzzyPerson

4:45am Dec 30 2013

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Here we are Crystaalis!

Issie finds a horse (part 2)

Her dad didn't look pleased at all. "Allan, Issie found Pride, cheer up you old grump." her mom said calmly and in a funny way. Dad's face went from pale, which Issie only noticed now, to a dark red. "Cheer up?" her dad exploded, "That horse, that horse is, is, is, a-" he stopped there and put his head in his hands. "You promised we wouldn't get another horse." he mumbled. Issie didn't hear her dad. "Mom, let's go outside and let dad calm down." Issie whispered. Her mom got up and walked outside Issie followed and went down the stairs and looked back at her, her mom was saying something to dad then she heard it, "Allan, you better calm down." "Oh wake up Amy, we live in a flat not on as farm." her dad had hissed. Mom walked outside and took Issie by the hand and they walked to Pride. "Oh god, it really is Pride." her mom said. Pride had been put back in the paddock but Nicole was looking at her. Issie pointed at Nicole and Nicole walked off. "That's the little brat Nicole mom." Issie said. "Issie, don't be rude." her mom scolded her. "Wait, tell you meet her." Issie said. they walked up the driveway and saw Nicole at the door. "What do you want Issie?" she said. "Hi there Nicole, i've heard somethings about you, i'm Mrs Brown but you can call me Mrs B." "The little snitch." whispered Nicole, only Issie heard it. "May we have a look at Pride?" asked Mrs B. "Sure." said Nicole sweetly. When they got to the gate Issie did her whistle and called Pride. She looked at Nicole and saw the look of disappointment on her face. "Oh, i'm so sorry Nicole." Issie said copying Nicole's sweet voice. Nicole's turned red with anger but turned to her normal colour before Mrs B could see. Pride came trotting to the fence. "Told you mom." said Issie. "Well I never." said her mom.

ONTO PART 3?



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Crystaalis

12:34pm Dec 30 2013

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Yay! Part three! =D



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FluzzyPerson

7:55am Dec 31 2013

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Part 3 will take awhile.



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Crystaalis

12:20pm Dec 31 2013

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I can wait x3 =D You're story is really good so far (I don't like Nicole o.o)



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Avo

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Really good so far, friend! I see you carried on from the stroy I gave you, but don't mind! So happy yhat you found something to write on about! subbing.



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