This is one of those poems that I just wrote in about 15 minutes and it actually doesn't make too much sense. It's strings of words that sound good together. So here it is. Please critique~ Oh yes, and interpretations are welcome. ^^

 

A small smile fades away

Into the quickly leaving day

21 balloons fly

Into a vast blue sky

 

Paint the blue sky grey

And watch as they fly away

Those 21 balloons

 

Frowning looking up that way

Lady luck was late today

Grey clouds spill the rain

Will the sun come out again?

 

Paint the blue sky grey

And watch as they fly away

Those 21 balloons

 

I want to fly away

With those 21 balloons today

Flying high so free

In the sky and over the sea

 

Paint the blue sky grey

And watch as they fly away

Those 21 balloons

 

The sun comes out from the clouds

Its rays are beautiful; glory abounds

And I watch as they fly away

Quickly into the fading day

Fading from our memories

So easily forgotten

Those 21 balloons

 

Paint that grey sky blue

And watch as they fly away

Those 21 balloons

 

 

Oh yes, and steal it and I will haunt your soul forever because I can prove its mine (hehehehe).

It's really inspirational. I love it. Great job! <3

Thank you ^^

<3's! It almost seems like there's supposed to be more... Do you have a tune for this?

Hehehe yeah I do. xDD

this is really good! keep writing!

Thank you <3 I've read some of your things too, you're not too bad yourself xD