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Ardor

7:31pm Dec 11 2009 (last edited on 7:56pm Dec 11 2009)

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It took me a while to think of a concept, cause at first it was going to have floaty rings outside it's body. But after the markings developed it turned into something else. Now it's some kind of dragon..wolf..cat thing. :3 Always looking to improve, if the anatomy/shading is horribly wrong tell me. Nit picking is annoying. Being accurate = goal. I did have trouble shading the mane. The hair flow was weird for me. :/ Looks mangey. EDIT: I don't understand why its pixely, because its adobe and it shouldn't be. I zoom in to do my work, but its in 'actual size' the whole time. If I try to use a larger image and resize it smaller, the brush strokes spazz out and it looks like some kindergardener doesn't know how to 'stay inside the lines'.

This is the size I work in. This is merely zoomed in.

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7:38pm Dec 11 2009

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=3 pretty



Reeses

8:19pm Dec 11 2009

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Beautiful. <3 Love its position.




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shadowrider

11:16pm Dec 11 2009

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I love the shading and coloring on this. The tail is too thick for my liking but its cute. something about its arm seems wonky. Cant explain it.



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Yoshi

4:08am Dec 12 2009 (last edited on 4:13am Dec 12 2009)

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At first it made me think of a Tesuri with the colors, but then the head pushed me over to thinking Meiko. xD

Looks like its right front leg is too short - shorter than its left. I know the left one's stretching out more, but there's still too much difference between the lengths from elbows to paws. Its hind right foot looks funny too, like it's tucked in too much or something and its heel doesn't protrude enough.

I'd say pushing the shadows mostly to the right and having a few lighter ones on the left may help with the mane. At the moment its shading seems pretty random, which confused me about where the light source was at first.

It also seems a bit weirdy that we can see the pokey thing on the left ear from this angle. It's like the right one's below the ear but the left is sticking out and up.

Quite a lovely creature though, and awesome pose. I just wanna liek, ruffle up its fur or something. With my weirdy ways of showing love. 8D

... I've no idea if this counts as nitpicky. x3 With crits I'm always like. 'La-dee-daaa. Oh, I'm sorry - I rambled. O:'




Ardor

12:06pm Dec 12 2009

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Those arent really nit picky, thanks ;P I have trouble with light source.
Foo

2:29pm Dec 12 2009

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I love him more than I love you. ;_;



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Ardor

6:50pm Dec 12 2009

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Even with my stunningly good looks? >:
Noelle

2:08pm Dec 16 2009

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He's all in all an adorable little critter C:

Since you want critique, would you mind if I did a redline for you?  Id love to help <3 

LostHope

4:00pm Dec 16 2009

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I just adore that colour scheme. Don't get me wrong D:

But I think it would be better as a silver than a natural colour to be honest, unless of course you're trying for a CS pet? c:




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Ardor

9:57pm Dec 16 2009

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Yes a red line is nice :3 Very helpful. Would you mind red lineing my other thread?

@ losthope :3 this isn't for res it's for another petsite. If i was going to make it another color i'd probably make it blue or something.

LostHope

3:47am Dec 17 2009

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Oh sorry, my mistake, just the 200 x 200 D8




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