Reu X Larg X ZaeZae X Shao


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Zae9

5:30am Feb 22 2011

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Larg. I already typed the first one out. Dx Could we have the next one with you disappearing? Cuz we're just being introduced to Alitas, so...xD

You do the next one with you disapoofing, okay? :D 




Zae9

10:43am Feb 22 2011 (last edited on 10:46am Feb 22 2011)

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Okay. Got something. Is it going to be us at a camp or something, or just random demigods on the run? xD 

First person or third person? :)

And how long should it be? Cuz I've written a possible introduction, but the 'introduction' itself was about a 1000 words long. xD  




Reubin

11:48am Feb 22 2011

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I like third person... how I write, lol. um, it could be Abadon and your character hunting or something, and they run into the others maybe? and find out about an oncoming apocalypse.



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Shao

6:26pm Feb 22 2011

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Third person is easier yeah and as for the length, I say the longer the more interesting ^^






Shao

12:06am Feb 23 2011

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bump (O<>O)






Zae9

4:56am Feb 23 2011 (last edited on 5:29am Feb 23 2011)

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Aw. xD I prefer first person. But third person is good, too. :D

Oooh. Hunting. xD Nice.

Will do, Reu. Why don't you start of?  Or wait. I've written something. Temme if it's okay. xD




Alchemist

5:08am Feb 23 2011

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o3o Zae should've posted her thing here. xD

Shao's siggy is amazing. o__________o

 So.My character attributes now?







Zae9

5:17am Feb 23 2011 (last edited on 5:33am Feb 23 2011)

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Here it is. xD



Zae9

5:32am Feb 23 2011

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It was just a normal day for the Buer siblings. At least, that’s what they thought.

The younger one, Zayce, clutched her stomach, her black hair rippling about her due to the harsh gale. Her green T-shirt was soiled with mud, and her brown pants were tattered at the hem. So was the state of her face, which was smudged with dirt. Her bow and quiver lay at her feet as she rested against a bark of a redwood tree. She glared at her older brother as he carefully sharpened his blade with a whetstone. He looked as much as a vagrant as she did, but in addition, had a long scar running down his left cheek. His white T-shirt had turned an unpleasant shade of brown, and he was missing one shoe.

‘’Abadon…’’whined Zayce,’’ Could you hurry up? I’m starving!’’

‘’ Patience, sister…’’ he said softly, biting his lip slightly as he sharpened the blade slowly,’’ Patience makes perfect,’’

‘’ No…’’ said Zayce,’’ I think it’s ‘practice makes perfect’,’’

‘’ Your point is…?’’

‘’ I’m hungry, Abadon. If you’re not coming, I’m going to find myself some food,’’

She stood up angrily, muttering curses under her breath, and grabbed her bow and quiver, slinging the bow around her shoulder.

‘’ Don’t go too far,’’ advised Abadon,’’ You know what to do if you fall into trouble,’’

‘’ I’m a demigod,’’ sighed Zayce,’’ Nothing is going to happen to me,’’

‘’You’re the daughter of Apollo,’’

‘’So? I’m a strong one. I’ll let you know if anything happens, though.’’

Abadon grunted in frustration, and stood up, dusting the twigs and dirt of his jeans,’’ Forget it. I’m coming along with you. I’m hungry, too. We’re hunting, though. I didn’t sharpen my blade for nothing,’’

‘’Obviously,’’ grinned Zayce,’’ I need my meat,’’

-x-x-x-x-x




Alchemist

5:34am Feb 23 2011

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Okay. |D

Is this going to be like a camp half blood thing? O_O 







Zae9

5:39am Feb 23 2011

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Nope. Don't think so. But this could give us more scope, though. x)

Chiron could help us. That would be legit. :D




Shao

6:44am Feb 23 2011

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lol my niece XDP and Largeh you mean the one with the kioka right? Ninzy did that, she's open to comissions for them now ^^






Reubin

7:55am Feb 23 2011

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Mehh, i prefer it when I have full control of my character, lol



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Zae9

9:01am Feb 23 2011

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No one said anything about that. -points at the intro-thingy- Dx

Who's gonna continue? 




Reubin

9:04am Feb 23 2011

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I'll continue, but how're we going about this? lol



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Zae9

9:07am Feb 23 2011

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Erm. Let's see where the road takes us? We'll introduce Larg's and Shao's character and then come to a conclusion. What say? 



Reubin

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I mean with the whole charra control thing, lol... oh wait, are we treating this as a novel and just writing a part each and taking turns?



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Zae9

9:23am Feb 23 2011

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Writing it as a novel, taking turns? 

That's what I thought. xD  




Reubin

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I like that idea now. ^_^



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Zae9

9:37am Feb 23 2011

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Write, Reu. Write, write, write, write. xD



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