((Happy, i'm fine with your person having shinies, but I find it unfair that it's shiny and he captured it so easily.  It's not fun when they capture things too easily. :/))

Crystal continued to ride her Salamence, her eyes still closed.  She trusted her Salamence enough to even ride it without her hands on it and her standing up with her eyes closed.  Her Salamence would never let her fall, but if she happened to fall then Salamence would swoop down and catch her.

They were unaware that someone had been following them, and just continued on their way to no where.  It was just for a nice relaxing ride, nothing else.  Crystal finally opened her eyes, and sat up, the wind blowing her hair.  "So....." She paused to take a deep breath.  "Beautiful." She finished quietly, gazing at the nature.  A Starly flew past them, and swooped down and landed on a tree.  Wow, it wasn't scared of them.  Usually wild Pokemon ran or flew away, scared.

(Sorry...but this Chikorita's really weak...so it'll need alout of training.)

He smiled seeing the pokemon and the girl atop of the tree. He climbed up easly and sat atop a branch. "hi he said seing the starely not get scared of all the other pokemon and the humans. His mijimaru looked up and smiled "miji" she said happily wawing with her little wight paws as her eyes glistened.

 Autuom Bare.

((But how would you like it if I suddenly saw some shiny starter and then caught it on the first try?  Heal balls only have a regular chance of catching, shinies are rare, and so are female starters.  So you found a shiny, rare-gender Pokemon and caught it easily. It's unfair. :/))

Crystal looked down at them.  "Shut up." She said bitterly.  She was dark to everyone but her Salamence.  "I can't believe you think you can just sit there staring at me with your idiotic face and disturb me and my Salamence by saying hi." She glared, and then looked back at her Salamence, who was glaring at the Mijimaru.  "It's alright, Salamence." She whispered.  "I won't let those pests bother us.  We'll fight if needed."

(Lol...i'm so sorry...don't be mad.)

He cringed "I-I did'nt mean to disturbe your bliss" he said frowning shyly. "Miji" his Mijimaru added more powerfully. "Miji...mijimaru...maru maru ru" she said meaning he's a shy boy and only want's to make friends. She sighed as he frowned and she licked his right cheek as sine of caring and of love. 

((Can Drake go to her and start the battle already?))

Crystal continued to fly away, but then decided to land.  "Salamence, lets land." She said quietly, and her Salamence obeyed her, and swooped down.  It landed on the ground hard, sending strong gusts of wind everywhere.  She had a feeling that that annoying boy would come back, and just sat there.  Oddly, she realized that she was in mood for a battle.  If only she hadn't flew away.  But maybe he'd come back, and she'd just sit there waiting.

He did go after her, his hands in his pockits. He pulled out a pokeball and bounced it in his hand before throwing out Autuam bare as Cariel jumped off his shoulder. "It's a double battle" he said reluctently with a smirk.

Autaum bare smiled and jumped atop the Salmences back, as Cariel let a growl ripple through her muzzle before using Shellblade on the bigger cretures head, the top,middle to be percice. He smirked as he asked questioningly"thiere not as weak as you though...huh ?".

((Happy, thats power playing. ;c  You auto-hit Salamence, you have to let them respond.

Heres and example of power playing:

"They punched them." If you do it that way the other person doesn't get a chance to respond and dodge.

If you do this however:

"They swung a punch at them." The other person has a chance to reply and either dodge or get hit. :/))

((Wait, I have a few more things to say before posting.

First of all, Chikorita can't jump high, so it's rather stupid that it jumped onto Salamence's back when it was still in mid-air.  And Salamence was going at it's highest speed, too.  And Cariel shouldn't be able to jump that high either.

I'm not saying that Salamence are supposed to be invincible, but they have extremely high attack and a good amount of speed, while your Pokemon's stats are lower, so I find it odd that they are much stronger than they normally are.

Okay, I let you capture a rare shiny female Chikorita because you said it would start weak and need lots of training, and you barely trained it and it's already powerful.  Thats just... wrong. T.T"

I could name a few other unfair things, but i'll save them for later. :/))