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6:12pm May 2 2009 (last edited on 6:33pm May 2 2009)
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well, you should do at least 3 sentences. but the story can never end (well not exactly). try to make it good or convincing. this is also good as training for the story game. if it is ever going to be played agian. you can make your part of the story as much over 3 sentences as you want. ps. you can put yourself as a charecter, choose your side, make yourself as a personolized creatu. the story/game ends only if you have a good subject (rmail the ti
tle, subject,goal, beggining and end. i will end the current story but it might take me a while) you can put as much fantasy as you want. like a purple spotted wizard uilus. pss: nothinemo,demonic,digusting,disturbing or too halowenish. all creatu types allowed as charecters.including imaginary creatus and creatu idea creatus. rules for THIS story; main charecters(enemy and heroes)must have powers unless you are a charecter that rarely apears. eniding must be that the reason why ebelias are like this is because of (i must not give that part away!) the most inportant rule is to HAVE FUN!!!!!! make the story as fun,exiting,dramatic,amazing and detail as posible. nothin like: it was a cold windy night. make it more detailed. like it was a bitter cold night, i could hear no other sound exept the occasional piercing cry of the winds. see the begining of the story under this post. will be posted in a few seconds. or a while. tle="Laughing" /> |
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6:31pm May 2 2009
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the history of shadreka or the story of how the ebilia became a nightmare. (this takes place in reiflem, before the creatu had owners) one icy cold night on the planet reiflem, a young omni named shadreka (sha drek a) walked the cold floors of reiflem. she had heard their gaurdian was sick, and the sicker he got the colder reiflem got. you see, the life of a gaurdian is entertwined with the life of their planet. if the new gaurdian was not born and their gaurdian died ,then the planet would die without their gaurdian.(the gaurdians now are imortal unless this site dies) the creatu citizens were afraid of freezing to death or dying in a terrible sickness. but shadreka didnt really care. she was an orphan who has grown a stone heart. she lost her friends, her parents were dead, and she has faced sickness and starvation she prayed to GOD to give her friends and a home, but GOD didnt seem to answer. she didnt know he had an adventure stored for her....... |
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2:38am May 3 2009
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Shadreka heard a small crack behind her. She turned around and saw an egg. It was green and glowing... An ebilia egg! As the egg cracked a small, cute ebilia climbed out. Shadreka fell for it's cuteness immedietly. She nuzzled it gently and picked it up. This would be her friend. Her best buddy she decided. But the ebilia had other ideas...
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9:26am May 3 2009
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(good your going with the story! ebilas are bad in this story, exept one....in this time ebelias wouldnt shed fur to the bone or flesh,ebelias were whole. but something terrible was happening) Shadreka gave food to the ebelia, and treated it as her own. soon the ebelia bacame black, she never new why, but the ebelia wanted to kill her! its evil mind carried so much sin that it was like a sickness, the ebelia grew stronger and faster, but the more he was with her the more care he felt for her..... but his mind was made up. he would commit murder! but one shivering night, she finnaly admited:"you seem to be my only friend, GOD does keep his promices" the ebelia turned his face away (his name is Krux) krux walked to his his cardboard bed. wondering if he should still kill her..... |
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10:48pm May 3 2009 (last edited on 10:49pm May 3 2009)
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suddenly, krux heard a celestial noise and turned around,two liyures stood before him! one black the other albino. they spoke together as one: we are here to help thee, to look beyond what you see, your sin is used by the single three, we are here to help thee. krux was confused by the riddle. how could they help him? an who were 'the single three' the black liyure (name: yang) stepped up and said,to find your power look for paor. agian he was confused. paor and power sounded the same until he remembered, Starcra!!! the black guru paor! the albino liyure (name:ying) stepped up and said, travel through the ocean: aqua, there you will find the gaurdian nakua. krux was once agian confused. aqua was water. naqua then should be a sea gaurdian...that ment...Aquati!!! but why is stracra there he wondered..... the liyures left as they came. krux told shadreka what had happened, she then thought he was crazy but the liyures apeared once agian and said agian in harmony: shadreka and many will be history, but your adventure is a mystery. shadreka and krux went on their way but first they gathered some apples from the kind apple meiko....
hellooooo people
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10:05am May 4 2009
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Some footsteps pattered behind them, and Krux turned around swiftly. A ghostly cat-like figure was standing in the shadows, so still it looked like a statue. Krux rolled his eyes as he saw Shadreka laughing with the Apple Meiko. He snorted and crept up to the figure. It took a step backwards. Krux could see it more clearly now. It was an elerly Ebilia. "Greetings, young one, I am the great Guru," The ebilia said, it's bones rattling with every word. "Wow! Guru! You're famous! I have so many questions!" Krux gasped. "I may only answer one," "Should I help the Ebilia Forces in battle? Will I die from it?" "There will be death... young one... be warned... You cannot trust everyone!" Guru said, and vanished.
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3:42pm May 4 2009
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suddenly krux remembered the words of the liyure..... the sin controled by the single three....... he had heard the battles this time were in vain. in the back of his mind he heard: the elderly ebelia is a spy. do not trust him. your kind has turned from GOD and the guardians. Krux became angry and sad. his kind were villans. he suddenly saw ying and yang. the said:do not worry dont be surly(not SHUR LY its that angly sur ly) krux was angry he wanted to attack them, but before he could, the gave him a kiyoka egg. when krux touched it he felt calmer. ying and yang said: its name is peace. they disapeared. he heard the egg crack, there he saw an albino kiyoka(the dear creatu) before him. she nuzzled him sofflty and fell a sleep. (krux is a teen)
he scooped her in his wings and covered her with them on his back.
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3:46pm May 4 2009 (last edited on 11:13am May 8 2009)
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(woops. another accidental "clone post" please ignore this post) |
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1:58am May 9 2009
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Krux quickly scuttled back to Shadreka. A couple of hours later, they were walking along a dusty road. Krux was tired because he was carrying the kioka. But, whilst he was about to fall, a miracle happened. Out of the sky... (I thought I'd leave some one else to do the thinking! He he tle="Tongue out" />)
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11:49am May 11 2009
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A beutiful tesuri apeared called supernovastar ( nickname:Nova). she landed in front of them bringing good news: i am here to help. here. (she gave them stone braclets that had strange markings) suddenly krux fell to the ground. he was tired of carring the kiyoka. peace came out and put on her bracelet and pulled krux' ear. she wanted to pull him to a small field to rest. shadreka had some questions for krux but she thought he had the right idea. nova and shadreaka pulled him to the small feild while the kiyoka pulled the bag full of suplise. they rosted some apples for dinner and went to sleep. the next day they woke up smelling fish.....they found they were on aquati!!!! the tersuri said the braclets were able to transport to any planet-but they had to be in a perfectly undesturbed place in the planet to do so. suddenly they heard a bit of splashing, and a loud roar, suddenly |
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12:35pm May 19 2009
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they looked behind them and there was nakua the water gaurdian! he was laughing at a joke that starcra told her. the two where having fun talking to eachother. nova: ah. those two are old friends. starcra just came to get some water from the springs and found nakua. shadreka: how'd she get here? peace: guru's are able to transport anywhere because they meditate constantly in a sacrea and hidden temple. letting them able to almost withdraw from reality by the old undisturbed magic that GOD lets them 'tap' into. their spirit enters into the dimension of wisdom and they learn anything there. the dimension of wisdom has all portals to enter all dimensions. only a pure heart can enter one portal and end up in the place they want to be. but this is a dangerous process. time travels quickly in the dimesion of wisdom. one minute there is a day any where else exept GOD'S dimension. the team turn around in surprise to the young kiyoka. nova: how did you learn this? ???: because she learned it from me. they turned agian and found it was starcra! starcra: this young one woke up in the middle of the transportation, while i was meditating. she floated unconsiosly in her sleep and was stuck in the dimension of wisdom. she learned a few things and i taught her to enter and exit into that dimension. a childs heart is pure. thats the only time to become a guru. now why did you come? krux stepped up: two liyures told us to find you here to receive our powers. |
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