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Yuck

6:10pm Jan 18 2009 (last edited on 6:10pm Jan 18 2009)

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sc
ript: The Case of the Stolen Diamond

by user "Yuck"

Character Bios:

Iluvu - Cynthya, very stuck up. Albino. Red ribbons on ears.

Omni - Carter, mysterious and smart. Natural. Tan brimmed, hat.

Zenirix - Emmett, hyper and cheerful. Blonde. Wears black scarf.

Kioka - Hannah, quiet. Natural. No accessories.

Tesuri - Tyler, grumpy but helpful. Black. No accessories.

Scene 1:

Setting: Fancy mansion, living room.

Cynthya: HELP! [headshot]

*Carter runs into living room*

Carter: What is it, Miss Cynthya? [full screen]

Cynthya: *fretting anxiously* Detective Carter! My precious diamond has been stolen! It's disappeared!

Carter: *appearing to think hard* Hmm... When was the last time you saw your diamond?

Cynthya: I don't know. I was gone shopping for the day! [headshot]

*suddenly, Tyler appears*

Tyler: I'm Miss Cynthya's butler. And I think I can help you there. [headshot]

Scene 2:

Setting: Fancy mansion, living room.

Carter: You can help? [full screen]

Tyler: *growls grumpily* Duh. What do you think I just said? Anyways, I saw a mysterious figure run out the mansion today. They were carrying a suspiciously, large diamond.

Cynthya: Oh! It must be my diamond!

Carter: What did this figure look like? [headshot]

Tyler: *shrugs* I dunno. Jeesh. [full screen]

*Carter and Cynthya appear annoyed; they sigh. Carter suddenly turns to face Cynthya.*

Carter: Who was in your mansion while you were away?

Cynthya: *glances upward* Um.. the house keeper and the pool boy.

Carter: Show--

*Emmett suddenly appears, and interrupts Carter*

Emmett: *smiling* I'd be glad to help you there, Detective! [headshot]

Carter: *sighs* They just keep coming and coming, don't they?

Scene 3:

Setting: Fancy mansion, living room.

Carter: *facing Emmett* I assume you're the pool boy? [full screen]

*Cynthya and Emmett nod. Emmett is bouncing as if he can't stand still.*

Emmett: Yep! That's me! *turns to face Cynthya* And I think I know what happened to your precious diamond, Miss.

Cynthya: OOH! TELL THE DETECTIVE, POOL BOY! *squealing excitedly* [headshot]

*Carter quietly nods towards Emmett.*

Emmett: Well, I'd been arranging the beach balls in front of the pool, which is in the mansion's front lawn. A strange figure suddenly darted out the mansion, and ran right into me! They were carrying a ridiculously large diamond. [headshot]

*Carter standing thoughtfully while Cynthya is anxious, yet excited at the information. Emmett continues.*

Emmett: It was the housekeeper, Hannah.

Scene 4:

Setting: Mansion, living room.

*Carter and Cynthya gasp*

Emmett: She seemed really nervous. Me and her are really good friends. I think that's why she even talked to me. [headshot]

*Carter, glaring at Emmett with a determined ex
pression on his face*

Carter: Well, go on.*impatient*

Emmett: *nods* Well, she said she'd be back at 3. [full screen]

Cynthya: *gasps* That's... NOW! [headshot]

*mansion doors suddenly slam open, and Hannah is standing in the doorway with the diamond.*

Scene 5:

Carter: You! Hand over the stolen diamond! *advances towards Hannah* [full screen]

Hannah: *looking nervous* It was an accident!

Everybody: Huh?

*Hannah glances around, fretting quietly to herself before continuing.*

Hannah: Well, while I was cleaning the diamond, I accidently dropped it. It was scratched--

*Cynthya interrupts Hannah angrily.*

Cynthya: How dare you?!

*Carter gestures for Cynthya to be quiet. She pouts, but obeys.*

*Hannah gulps and continues.*

Hannah: I took it to be polished, and.. well, it's as good as new. *she suddenly hands Cynthya the sparkling diamond*

*Cynthya quickly grabs the diamond and holds in tightly*

Cynthya: HMPH! I guess your work is done here, detective.

*Emmett laughs and bounces up and down. Carter and Hannah sigh in relief. Carter looks as if he's about to speak, but Emmett happily cuts him off.

Emmett: *enthusiastically* CASE CLOSED!! [headshot]

THE END

(Credits appear on screen)

Yuck

6:17pm Jan 18 2009

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Posts: 18
I also just rmailed you the sc
ript, Princissa. :3
Princissa

4:29pm Jan 19 2009

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Posts: 95
:3 thanks yuck!




Princissa
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Zoie

8:29pm Jan 26 2009

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Posts: 77

When will the winners be announced?

Princissa

2:17am Feb 1 2009

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Posts: 95

:) now:

1st Place: Zoie/Yuck

2nd Place: Arruby!

3rd Place: :( no one!

aw! I will be sending the prizes now! Thanks for entering! 





Princissa
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Arruby

7:52am Feb 1 2009

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Posts: 93
Thankies, Princissa!! 8D



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