Name my song?


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Epona

12:01pm Feb 26 2011

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Song I wrote and played for our unit on the Holocaust in U.S. History. Dunno how well it sounds sounds cruddy on the computer, but is sounds really scrappy on my phone...

Took about 5 stinkin minutes. ><

Im so weary
I cannot sleep
Im so hungry
I cannot eat
Im so scared
Comfort will not come
Maybe if I close my eyes
I'll leave it all behind

This is all wrong
This is my fate
Filled with sorrow
Pain and hate
This is my world
This is my song
I've got to be strong
'Cause it wont last long

Stuck in this place
I've done nothing wrong
But to exist
Will someone come?
Set me free
Take me from this place
Allow me to close my eyes
Let the pain go away

This is all wrong
This is my fate
Filled with sorrow
Pain and hate
This is my world
This is my song
I've got to hold on
'Cause it wont take long

When one falls another
Takes their place
Senseless malice
Scorn on his face
Persecuted
For my beliefs
But it's not their gain
I've left all my pain

This is all wrong
This is my fate
Filled with sorrow
Pain and hate
This is my world
This is my song
I've got to be strong
'Cause it wont last long

This is my world
This is my song
I've got to hold on
'Cause it wont take long 

 

The suggester of the ti
tle I choose will get a free commission from me of whatever they choose...as long as it's appropriate, of course... ^^

 




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fawn

1:42pm Feb 26 2011

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I like this song!

I sung it for you, cause I was bored...

http://www.fileswap.com/dl/lpweyZH/Hai.....wma.html 

Sorry about line 5... I screwed up there.

Anyway call it... Take Me Away or It Won't Last Long.




Epona

2:18pm Feb 26 2011

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Your version sounds so much happier than mine. LOL I screwed up in the first verse, so no worries. XD

Hmmm. Nice.....I liek It Wont Last Long the most so far.




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Meelanya

1:55pm Feb 27 2011

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How 'bout My Fate or Pain & Hate ?
I will certainly come up with better titles! I'll edit this post then! :D



Epona

12:23pm Mar 5 2011

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Hmmmm



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Cherry

1:33pm Mar 5 2011

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I Liked the verse "This is my world" so I think that sould be your ti
tle.



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Epona

1:42am Mar 6 2011

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Hmmmm. Could be.....

LOL Ish be chorus. ^^;




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Malik

2:20am Mar 6 2011

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'Hold On'? xD



Ravenclaw14

5:53am Mar 6 2011

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That pretty good Todeo. What about calling it 'All Wrong'?



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Messenger

7:56am Mar 6 2011

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That's good!! Call it"Pain and hate"

 

Meelanya

9:08am Mar 6 2011

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That's what I suggested, Messenger! xD



Messenger

8:33am Apr 6 2011

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Hmmm, how about My Pain and SORROW WILL NEVER END. Sorry for the caps. I is doing this over PS3.
Fave

11:21pm Apr 7 2011

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I think that you should call it My calling of fate.
Shaste

8:28pm Apr 10 2011

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How about 'Leave it all behind' or 'Set me free'? -Fail- xD



Epona

10:34pm Apr 16 2011

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Mmmm. These are all really good! D:

 

Sorry for not replying. Just got decent internet runnin again. *stabs computer*




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