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6:45pm Aug 27 2009 (last edited on 6:52pm Aug 27 2009)

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Echsong comes from the dark kingdom known as, Nokaru, the very hell hole of space. Every wolf's heart is filled with darkness and hate. Evil radiates from every corner of Nokaru. The smell of death and blood lingers all over this forbidden place. Her mother, Katrina, was one of the most murderous wolves in the pack, aside from Kovu the Alpha of the pack. Kova was the most horrid wolf ever known in their region. He has killed hundreds of wolves, and he took over Nokaru single-pawed. Kovu and Katrina are now mates and Katrina gave birth to three healthy pups. The moment Echsong was born her parents knew that there was something strange about her, and she had to be killed.

Her parents were only going to let her live for a week. When the time had come for Echosong's final day in Nokaru, Kovu knew something was going to go wrong on this day. Kovu sniffed the air as he approached the den where Katrina where her ans the pups stayed. But something was amiss Kovu couldn't smell Katrina or Echosong, but he could still scent the to other pups. When Kovu walked into the den, Nikara, Katrina's best friend, was nursing the pups.

Kovu was outraged, "Why in the hell are you here?" He yowled "and where is Katrina?" He didn't wait for her to respond , instead he leaped fowards tackling Nikara, and the pups let out a wimper as they we're tumbled over. Kovu pinned her to the ground by the neck with his paw. "Tell me where she is NOW!!" The words shot out of his mouth like fire. "I said tell me!" Nikara gasped for breath. "P..ple..please," she stammered "let me...go and I'll tell...you where she is."Kovu released Nikara.

"Now," he began "tell me where she is before I kill you!" He threatened. Nikara stood her ground. "I will never tell you where she went." she shot back at him. Kovu attacked her once more and pinned her to the ground. "Even at the cost of your life?" Kovu said as a wicked smile crossed his face. "Yes!" Nikara spit back at him fearsly.

Kovu picked her up and threw her against the wall. Nikara coughed up some blood. He walked over to where she lay on the ground, her sides still moving up and down."Are you going to tell me now?" he asked evily. "Never." some more blood spat out of her mouth. Kovu picked her up and this time he pinned against the wall. He let our a scinester laugh and all it took was one slice across the thoat. Blood spurt out and some got on Kovu's muzzle. Nikara's body went limp and Kovu took his paw off her throat and there was a soft thump as she hit the floor. She did not get back up.

Some othe wolves gathered around to see what was happeneing. Kovu tilted his head towards some wolves "Take her body outside the camp" then he added "don't even burry, her leave her for the vultures."



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12:39pm Aug 28 2009

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I like wolf stories, but this belongs in the writing forums instead of the suggestions and ideas. ^^;




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