Where it Ends


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Alcarie

8:50pm Mar 18 2011

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Just a/some peice(s) i've written over time.

This first one i'm looking for a new ti
tle. If you have one in mind i'd love to hear it; and if I like it you might just be sent something.^^
 
Needs ti
tle
 
Sing to the Midnight,
Sing to the Moon,
Sing to the sweet hands
Holding you.
 
Lost in your Nightmares,
Lost in your Sleep,
Lost in your mind
Waiting for the spirits weep. 
 
Running from the Darkness,
Running from the Screams,
Running from H*ell
So it seems.
 
Where it Ends,
Where the creature lurks,
Where you wake
With a fearful jerk.
 
It was only a Dream,
It was only a Scare,
It was only a...dream?
Then what's over there!?
 
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Criticism is, of course, loved.
 
I might add more later if I think of them, but the one above I'm always refining. Again, i'd love to hear what you think.^^
 
Soaring Winds
Deathly Heights
Hollowed Lungs
 Screaming Nights. 



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Meelanya

8:54pm Mar 18 2011

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Is it a song? 'Cause it would be awesome to find a melody for it! o_O
I really like it!



Alcarie

9:08pm Mar 18 2011

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I'd love to turn it into a song if I could sing/write music. But unfortunatly I can do neither (someone would go deaf); so for now it's just a dusty old poem unless someone expresses interest.^^
 
Thank you, by the way! 



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