I don't know...weird but whatever

Two

is the word that changes

everything

Too

many times is the number

I've been rejected

To

Start again is too greater favour

To ask for

Two

friends I've got in this lonely world

who I can't even rely on

Too

Much hate and fear and anger

As I walk through the school

To

Live like this isn’t

Right

Two

Parents I have and

They don’t care

Too

many people that don’t

care

To

Die would be so

easy

Two

is the word that changes

everything

Hmm... it's quite nice but I can't help but feel it's missing something. For me, I don't quite understand how 'Two is the word that changes everything', what's the context that the word 'two' is being used in?

Oh, and instead of 'is too greater favour' it would be 'is too great a favour'.

Other than those things, I think it's nice ^.^