this is a poem/story i wrote..


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thaliaflame98

7:16pm Jan 28 2010

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I wrote this about a week ago. I wrote it because I'm kinda having friend probs so...anyway, this poem/song thing is kinda sad.  It's about my friend....Well, here it is....Please tell me what you think. BTW: Im writing a short story kinda based on this. Its called something like Friend                  

                   You were there

                   right beside me

                        with me

                  to support me.

         And I did the same for you.

                I gave you hope,

              I gave you freedom,

           I showed you the light

              at the end of the

                     tunnel

     And what did you leave me with?

             Betrayal, dispair, grief

 Your shy welcoming smile on that first day

                    made me think,

                   "She's the one"

                    Was I wrong?

         What have they done to you?

                 I want you back

              the way you were before.

                  You were there,

                  right beside me,

                       with me,

                  to support me.

            And I did the same for you.




"Monsters are real. Ghosts are too. They live inside us and sometimes they win." ~Stephen King
xoholaxo

7:53pm Jan 28 2010

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*cries*



thaliaflame98

7:56pm Jan 28 2010

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thanks...*smiles weakly and stares at lyrics, eyes gazing a million miles away, hoping*



"Monsters are real. Ghosts are too. They live inside us and sometimes they win." ~Stephen King
luvsarahdessen97

4:23pm Jan 29 2010

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aww i love it! I really hope things work out between you and your friend
thaliaflame98

5:36pm Jan 29 2010

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Thanks LuvSarahDessen. I just love your writing! Where do you get your ideas? Anyway, What do you think I should call it? For now, it's a no name poem/song




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ZoeyRedbird

8:14pm Jan 31 2010

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I love it!! it's awsome thalia!



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xoholaxo

2:10pm Feb 1 2010

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Name it "What used to be"



thaliaflame98

2:35pm Feb 5 2010

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oooh!! i like that name! Thanks!



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SweetAromaz

9:02pm Feb 6 2010

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You should name it, "Loves whisper".



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thaliaflame98

8:54am Feb 7 2010

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OH! Thats good!



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