The Lost World of Zylonkia


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Firefairy2k10

2:07pm Oct 26 2010

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This is a story I am writing, I would love to hear any comments anyone might have, be they good or bad.
Firefairy2k10

2:21pm Oct 26 2010

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The smell, sights and sound of it were, quite literally, overwhelming. For a young Zerinex in a strange place, things were, as you'd imagine, quite frightening. He looked about himself and was astonished to see a large cat with its fur hanging from its bones. Trouble was, he could actually see the bones.

All these different creatu, he thought. No more than my own planet, but they're all so new, so strange. Suddenly, he felt a hand on his back, and when he turned around saw a rather mean-looking Roditore staring down at him.

OakWood

2:41am Oct 28 2010

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Zenirix* x3



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