The Assassin (Parts 1 & Some of 2)


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fish94

9:19am Aug 17 2009 (last edited on 9:33am Aug 17 2009)

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Comments and Constructive Criticism are always welcomed. This is a small project I am working on, possibly to be made into a larger scale at a later date. 
 
 
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The man perched himself on a small patch of tiles at the top of the building. He had been following his target for 2 entire months, and for what; a 10 second job for some easy money? “No“, he thought to himself. He brushed a hand through his infinitely black hair, feeling the sweat from the sheer anticipation of what he was about to do. 

At the same time, the target sat inside a posh restaurant, enjoying a portion of cheesecake. His name was Teuril Mensuta, and he was a well respected businessman. Unfortunately, Teuril tended to do as he willed, regardless of who he offended. Little did he know that this meal would be his last, and as he exited the restaurant, the *censored**censored*ins plan commenced.

The door to the restaurant swung open and the man who had been so calm instantly reacted. Standing, he proceeded to  jump from the top of the building, snatching a small, slender H&K USP from his trouser pocket and shooting once. The bullet hit with perfect accuracy to the forehead.
Of the wrong man.
The *censored**censored*in landed softly on the floor, distributing his weight. “Denzel Avens. I should have know it.” Teuril said, his voice tainted with hatred. “What is your problem with me?” He asked, never breaking eye contact. Denzel found it hard to match this, but still spoke softly and calmly. “I know what your doing Mensuta. I know all about your plans to bring back the Celands.” Teuril glared at him. “What’s your point?” He whispered after what felt like an eternity to Denzel. “The point is” Denzel replied, raising his pistol “That you aren’t going to see tomorrow.”
Another bullet was fired, and the now silent and still corpse of Teuril Mensuta dropped to the floor.


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Denzel was a man of skill, an expert in his field. It was no wonder then, that instead of sleeping that night, he stayed up wondering how he managed to miss Teuril from such close quarters. “It was just a bad shot” he re*censored*ured himself over and over until the sun finally began to splinter across the earth, and Denzel Avens was yet again made to get up and see his boss.

Skipping breakfast, he proceeded to get dressed hurriedly, throwing on a brand new jacket and grabbing the nearest watch to him. He headed down to his sleek silver Audi R8, making sure he wasn’t being watched or followed; In his line of work, it was particularly easy to make enemies, so Denzel was always cautious of his surroundings.

After 20 minutes of driving through some of the most covert routes Denzel has ever seen, he reached his bosses headquarters, and as he rolled up quietly to the door, he could have sworn he saw a glimpse of someone run away into the nearby woods. Someone or something.
Something familiar.
Snapping out of his daze, he swiftly moved to the door and knocked three times, slowly and exactly, always striking the exact same position. The door swung open and a tall, bold, executive looking man stepped out and grabbed Denzel’s hand, pulling him into the rather violent handshake Denzel had grown accustomed to every time he met with this man. The man of course, was his boss, A Mr O’Neil. Originally from Ireland, he moved to London after the murder of his wife and children and began a business in *censored**censored*ination. Denzel had always been fond of Mr O’Neil. Everyone always expected him to be some crazy bloodthirsty man, but really he was just a human being with a terrible, corrupted past.

Finally releasing his grip, he looked at Denzel and said peacefully “Lets go for a walk. We need to talk.” He began to pace away slowly, staying just close enough to Denzel so they could talk face to face. “How did it go?” Asked O’Neil slowly and quietly, looking rather far off. “Fine, Mensuta is gone, nobody is left to bring back the Celands.” Replied Denzel, a light grin forming on his face, only to be shattered by O’Neil’s next words. “They are already back.” 
For the next 7 minutes or so, Denzel found it almost impossible to form a complete sentence. “Bu..Wha..Whe..”  he stuttered repetitively, eventually stopped by O’Neil, who slowly raised a finger to Denzel’s lips in a quietening manner. “Yes, they are back. Mensuta, it would seem, was but a distracting to lure us away from the real culprit.”
Denzel, who was finding this information hard to digest, decided to sit down on a nearby stump due to the fact he felt as if he was about to collapse. “Listen, I’m going to leave you to let it sink in. I’ll send an *censored*istant along to look after you.” Said O’Neil, patting Denzel on the shoulder and walking away. Approximately 1 minute later, a tall, cheery looking girl strode across the compound towards Denzel. He stood to greet her, when suddenly his eyes blanked and Denzel’s legs gave way.

He awoke with a start, flinging his upper body forwards violently. “Calm down, you have suffered some form of mental breakdown and shaking around like a mad man isn’t going to help.” Said a soft, girlish voice. Denzel swung around to see the *censored*istant from before, who p*censored*ed him a gl*censored* of freezing cold water. “Thanks” He coughed out, downing the gl*censored* of water quickly. ”Mr Avens?” Said the *censored*istant “Yes?” Replied Denzel, wiping a small bit of blood from his forehead “I..I was wondering if you could tell me about the Celands.” She questioned, sounding almost ashamed to ask.

Sorry about the censoring, thats just over the top security on rescreatu's behalf x.x



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WolfMoon96

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It's good. I like it. It would be awesome to add my character Felix, in the story. Back to his old job as the top @ss@ssinator.




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fish94

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Thank you :)
I'll be sure to try and fit Felix into the storyline



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WolfMoon96

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I can give you his character sheet if you want. So you have a better understanding of Felix.




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fish94

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That would be brilliant :)



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WolfMoon96

3:24pm Aug 18 2009

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Great!

 

Name: Felix  Wolf 

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Occupation: The first best *censored**censored*in

Personality: Felix is quiet and he rarely speaks to his boss. He just does whatever his job and he never fails. He doesn't have any friends because everyone is so scared of him. When he does talk, he talks in a strong, yet deathly quiet voice. He is a "Wolf" in every sense of the word. He is very leery of people and shies away from them until he really gets to know and trust them. There is a gentleness and kindness in him though when he warms up to them.

Appearance as human: Felix is 6.0 ft tall. He also wears a long silver cloak with a wolf paw on it when he is on duty, his hood always up. He has long arms and medium length legs. He wears a black tank-top and he has navy blue jeans that are ripped and frayed on the knees. He has straight black hair that stops at his chin. The tips of his black hair are a blood red color. He wears black shoes. He also wears a black string necklace that has a small shard of turquoise crystal that has shots of lighting blue in side it. 

Pet: He has a pet Siberian Tiger. Her name, is Sage. He found her when she was a cub, abandoned in the snow. They grew up together. She is a beautiful siberian tiger with a morning orange pelt with midnight black stripes. Her eyes are ice blue with speckles of amber in them. She helps him when he's called on duty.

Other: He has a scar on his back, starting from his left shoulder, crossing over his shoulder blades, and ending on his right hip. It looks as if he had sliced his back open. He has a small knife. It has a wolf howling to a blue moon engraved on the knife. He also has a wolf whistle that makes no sound, but makes him wince when he blows into it.

Theme Song: Sound the Bugle

Past: Felix's past is a rare mystery. He never mentions his mother or father and he never shows that he is related to someone. Some would say he was an orphan, others would say not. Tales have spread around the areas he's visited, saying that there is in fact, someone else who is related to Felix. They say that Felix is a twin. An identical twin. Felix has yet to hear this news, but when it does, it will be his reaction that either confirms the tales, or not. 

Nickname's Given to Him: Silent Storm and Wolf.

Born: Where Felix was born is a mystery, but Felix was born on December 24th, 1990 on Christmas Eve at exactly 12:00 midnight.
Weapons: A silver pistol and his knife.




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