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InfernoFire

12:48am Oct 23 2009

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Two horse riders, from different riding schools, fall in love but it is forbidden because they are from rival stables, which both have the rule, that riders aren’t allow to date riders from the rival stables, can they keep their relationship an secret?

Stables

Wild Fire (Expensive stables)

Olivia Rose Ash- has the horse Lightning-Fire

Kara Skye Ash- Olivia’s niece who she adopted after her parents died in a car accident- Has the horse Hot-fire

Jade Emerald Ash- her daughter- Has the horse Sky-fire

Annabelle Rose Ash- her daughter- Has the horse Star-fire

Grace Faith Ash- her deaf daughter- Has the horse Cloud-dancer

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Meadow Lea Stables (Poor)

Oliver Noah Baker- has the horse Meadow-song

Hayden Oliver Baker- Oliver’s son- has the horse Meadow-tail

Savannah Kayla Baker- Oliver’s daughter- has the horse Meadow-skies

Scott Hayden Baker- Oliver’s nephew whose parents didn’t want him- Has the horse Meadow-water.

Rafael Noah Baker- Oliver’s blind nephew and Scott’s twin- Has the horse Meadow-heart

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Oliver’s wife Kayla was forced to divorce him by her family and she took his second daughter, Savannah’s twin Summer.

Olivia’s husband Callum was killed when he crashed his car while driving their only son, Grace’s twin brother Lucas who died a few days later from serious injuries.




wolfspirit25

12:59pm Oct 23 2009

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Interesting concept and I'd like to see how the characters are developed. The only problem I have with this is it's the cliche Romeo and Juliet scene, coupled with the cl*censored*ic "one is poor and one is rich so they aren't allowed to be together because of their cl*censored*es" appearance. It's not a bad plot, I've just seen it too many times.



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