Story based on Doctor Who


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dragon231mm

8:51pm Jul 21 2009

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I'm not that good of a writer, but heres a story I made.

It was my birthday on the planet Galifrey and my mom and dad were taking us out for a picnic.  Me, my mom and dad were setting up the blanket in the deep red gr*censored*. I put out the food and we all sat down and ate. We had lemonade, grapes, apples, sandwiches, and my favourvourite, watermelon. We ate for a while until we got full. Dad jumped up and grabbed one of the silver leaves off the trees. I tryed to get a leaf for dad, and jumped up. But I couldn’t reach and I fell right on my bum. Dad and Mom just laughed andI started laughing too.

Soon the three suns set and the orange sky turned black. The stars twinkled and shone. We packed up our things and started to walk home. When we got back to the domed city I heard explosions. I was scared at I held tight on to Mom and Dad’s hands. We were the only ones outside. Everyone was inside, hiding from the Daleks. The Daleks were evil, robot like creatures that only knew how to kill and how to fight. They had no emotions exept for anger. The Daleks raced towards us yelling “EXTERMINATE!!!”. We ran for our lives, but soon they caught up with us! A blinding ray of blue light zapped Dad, and me and Mom started to cry. There was Dad, dead on the ground. Mom told me to run, and i ran as fast as I could. I heard a ZAP and looked behind me. Mom and Dad were both dead on the ground. They had no energy left  to regenerate. I ran and ran.

Soon I was back home, but I could still hear the explosions outside an the constant ZAP as the Daleks exterminated every last one of us.  I have to get out of here! I thought, so I ran to the door, opened the lock and bolted outside. There were Daleks everywhere, each one of them yelling “EXTERMINATE!!!”. I was terrified! I ran to the ship, The TARDIS, and I got inside. I knew the force fields on the ship would keep the Daleks out for a while, but I had a problem. I didn’t know how to work the TARDIS! I thought about Dad had always did it when we went on trips and I walked up to the control panel. I pressed a couple buttons and pulled a lever. The TARDIS started making a loud VROOP VROOP VROOP sound as it moved through space.

To be continued... Da da da...




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Reeses

7:48am Jul 22 2009

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That was based on Dr Who?  I didn't know that.




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chantico

8:41am Aug 3 2009

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Nice,bit random though. And yes Reeses the Daleks are from Dr.Who,I love to watch that show



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Reeses

10:28am Aug 3 2009

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The first time I heard Dalek was from Neopets, and that was the name of a robotic pet that ran the Pound. xD; -is horrible-




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chantico

9:35am Aug 5 2009

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yeah,but the Dalaks are like indestructable. Though Donna Noble,the Doctors asitant at the time,along with another side of himself found a way to destroy them, I think.........



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Reeses

10:02am Aug 5 2009

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I never watched Dr. Who, so I'm a bit clueless.  She showed me this story a while ago but never told me it was based on Dr. Who




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chantico

9:11am Aug 13 2009

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thats fine, Dr.Who is on BBCAmerica sometimes. You can watch it when its on and find out more.



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dragon231mm

7:17pm Sep 7 2009

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Dr. Who is awesome! I'm a sucky writer tho D:



"What's your name?"
"Bob, sir."
"Bob. I like Bob."
"It's a sacred name, sir."
"All right, your Sacred Bob."
Hai. Call meh Pengui or I'll steal your cookies >:3
Reeses

8:01pm Sep 7 2009

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You took a while to respond. XD




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chantico

8:12pm Oct 30 2009

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sorry



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