Soul Keeper


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Flowers234

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Ok so I like LOVE writing stories. I have two others here in the forum called, Kitten! An amazing encounter!! and The Deadly truth behind it all. And so I decided, if everyone likes those two stoires, why not make another. And my friend Enola, is making me a story because I'm to busy called The silver lake. So I hope everyone enjoys this story called Soul Keeper.

Chapter-1

Amy began to write in her diary, about what happened at school today. She wrote: We got as.signed these really stupid stories. We have to read the entire thing and then either making a poster or a report on it. Or both! I chose a report. Because my parents don't want to waste their money on me. She sighed and reread that last sentance, then continued. Why can't high school be easy. Why an't we have ONE clas.s, not a million! It would be better. Suddenly Amy heard a door open and slam, her parents where home. She heard screaming and then footsteps coming up the stairs. Amy closed and locked her diary, hid it under her bed and got the book she was as.signed. She pretended to read but she was really listening to her parents fight. "Why don't you get a better paying job!" Her dad was screaming as loud as he possably could. "I tried! This is all I could get Greg." Her mother never called her father dad, allways his real name-Greg. Same with her Father, allways calling her mother Rose. Her mother began to cry. And her father went down stairs with rage. Amy knew not to bother him when he was mad. She didn't want to get a broken nose again, like last time. The house was sighlent, until Amy's door opened. She closed her eyes and lifted the book over her face. 'Please don't hurt me!' She thought in her head, thinking it was her father. "Amy," A soft voice said. She put the book down and looked at her mother. "It's ok. Me and Greg just had a rough day at work." Her mother sniffled and wiped a dried tear off her cheak. "That's what you allways say! I know that your job is easy, and you know that it is, too! Stop lying. I know you and dad fight because of me!" Amy began to cry. She threw her book across the room. It hit the wall and fell to the floor. He mom stood up, "This is!" Her mom calmed down and lowered her voice, "This is not about you. This is about me and your father, you don't have to worry." She moved Amy's hair behind her ear and kissed her on the cheak. She walked to the door, waved, and then left. Amy waited a few minutes, to make sure her mom was gone. She got up and slammed her door shut. She ran to her bed. Then she heard loud foot steps coming up stairs. Her dad. Amy got up and looked around the room. 'I'll hide in the closet! No, he found me there last time. I'll hide under my bed.' Amy made a plan in her head. She tied her bed sheets into a long rope, then hung it out the window. To make it look like she ran away. Next she slid under her bed. Now to be quiet. Her door flund wide open, the door nob leaving a deeper hole in the wall this time. Her dad began, " You know we!" He stopped and noticed the window. He turned around and yelled out, "Rose! Amy ran away!"




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Chapter-2

Amy's mom ran into the room, "She what. She couldn't have. How could you!" Dad looked at her then pointed at the open window with the sheets hanging out. Her mom ran to the window and looked out. The gras.s was wet and muddy that day. Her mom looked back in the room, "There are no tracks?" 'Tracks! Ugh, I forgot tracks.' Amy thought in her head. Her parents went down stairs to call the police. Amy waited until the coast was clear. She slid out and stared packing her backpack. She wrote a list of what she needed and what she should do.

1. Clothes to last a week or two.

2. Blanckets and towels

3. Soap, shampoo, and conditioner, and a brush

4. Maybe a book and some fun stuff

5. Money, lots of money

6. She if I can spend the night at Clair's, if not go to hotel. Go on from there.

She packed everything and then snuck downstairs. "Yes, our doughter is missing. For about ten minutes. What do you mean she has to be missing for two weeks? She'd be dead by then!" Amy opened her mouth, she wanted to jump out and scream at her dad. He hung the phone up and went to comfort her mom. Who was crying on the couch. She crouched down and snuck threw the kitchen. She grabbed some bread, turkey, apples, and two bottles of water. She snuck out, as soon as she got out side she ran as fast as she could. She stopped when she reached the middle of the forest. She sat down and gasped for air. Never has she run that fast. Amy drank some water and then continued on her way. Finally she reached the city. She looked around at the street signs, and found the one that read: BlackBird Ave. She started walking down BlackBird, in search of her friends house. 'Bang Bang Bang' Amy found Clair's house. "Hello? Oh come in Amy. What brings you here?" Clair's mom Sally had answered the door. "Not much Ms. Sally. Just another fight over at my house." She sat down on the couch and took off her shoes. Her feet were sore from running. " Oh dear. Another? Ok ok, you can stay here till I call your parents. Whats there number again?" She picked up the phone and looked at Amy. "Uh..." 'Gotta think up a lie.' She thought for a minute. "Well they, um. Got new phones. So uh, there numbers changed." She rubbed the back of her head. "Oh! Well then I'll get in touch with them later. Um, Clairs upstairs in her room." Sally began cutting some raw meat in the kitchen. Amy nodded and went up to Clairs room.




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Thanks tiger.



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Chapter-3

Amy slowly opened the door and looked in, "Clair?" There, spread across the middle of the floor was Clair. Her dark blonde hair hund over her eyes. Infront of her was a big folding poster, with pictures and writing on it. It was titled Soul Keeper. She turned around and stared deep into Amy's green eyes, with her blue eyes. "Hey Amy! What brings you here?" She stood up and wiped the glue off her hands and onto her pants. Amy sat down on her bed, "Well, my parents had another fight. So I ran away." Clair starred at her, "You Ra..." Amy jumped up and covered her mouth. "Shh, don't yell. Your mom doesn't know, I told her they changed their numbers." Clair pushed her hand away and took a deep breath. "Ok...Um let me guess. You need to spend the night over here." Amy nodded her head and Clair paced back and forth. Ok, maybe coming to her friend wasn't the best idea. Clair can't keep a true secret like this. 'Great, she's probably going to tell her mom. Wich will get me in trouble.' Amy thought. Clair sat next to her, "What are you going to do?" Amy shrugged, "Well, I have money. A hundred bucks from my savings. And I plan on getting a hotel room." Clair shook her head, "You can't live like this forever!" Amy nodded, "I'll just go then." She got up and began to walked out the door. Clair stopped her and explained, "I'll tell my mom your spending the night then going home tomorrow, then you can find a hotel. Your still going to school right?" Amy said yes then they both told Sally the story of spending the night. The next morning Amy said goodbye and set off, in search of a nice affordable hotel. "The Wild-life 8" Read the hotel sign. Amy read the signs around it and hung on the door, "We allow any animals, only 8 are available per room." She looked around and saw something digging in the trash. She slowly walked over. Two small Jack Russels poked their heads out of the garbage. Amy bent down and smiled. They ran towards her and licked her face. Amy rinkled her nose, "You two smell terriable." They turned their head sideways and barked. "But in a good way!" She kept petting them. "I'll name you Logan, and you Jackie." She picked them up and carried them inside the Wild-Life hotel. She got a room and went up to wash the pups.




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lol, I named the two dogs after my two Jack russels, Logan a boy and Jackie a girl.



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Chapter-4

"Wow!" Amy starred into the master bed room sized bathroom. There was a huge tub and a giant closet filled with big towels and cloths. All the way acroos the room were three five foot long woos shelves. Each filled with at least four of each kind of shampoo and conditioner. All of them were different types for different animals. Finally she found a container of regular dog wash. She put Logan and Jackie in the tub, the splashed around and yipped. Amy laughed and kept washing. When she finally finished she dried them and let them run around. Then chased and froclicked around the huge hotel room. There was a sign on the door. Amy read it aloud, "1 night = 50$ 2 nights = 100$ 3 nights = 150$-" and so on. She thought. 'Well I brought 500$ with me. So I an spend...at least four nights here.' She thought. Suddenly Jackie wimpered and looked at Amy. Only then did she relize how skinney the dog was. Same with Logan. "Oh dear!" She jumped up and went down stairs, the two dogs following her. She went into a little gift shop filled with all kinds of toys and food. She bought a regular medium sized dog food pack and then got them each a little fluffy bed. She bought treats and toys. "Woah, I spent that much!?" Amy looked at the piece of paper in her hands.

Total=

20$

'That was cheap!' Amy put the paper in her pocket and left. When she got in her room she sent down the two bowls. She filled one with food and the other with water. The pups imediently started eating. She layed some toys around and put their beds either side of her bed. She sa on her bed and relaxed. Suddenly Amy's phone began to ring. The name read MOM. She quickly aswered and ung up.




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OMG. The best!



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Thanks!



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Chapter-5

She panicked. "Why would mom call-" The phone rang again, "Heddo?" She put on a thick accent. "Um, who is this?" It was her dad, "Uh, Dis is noboody? Goo Die!" She hung up. "Go die!?" Her dad screamed before she hung up. 'Oh crap!' She thought. Amy layed in her bed and the two pups snugled with her.

BANG BANG BANG

Suddenly Amy woke up. "Open the door!" 'It couldn't' She tought, 'No' "Open the door NOW!" 'Dad!' Amy went in the bathroom, 'Uh, me no talky, I in shower." She turned on the shower. "I said open the Door!!" He yelled. Jackie began to yip and so did Logan. "Amy doesn't have dogs? Must be a wrong number, Sorry!" He turned around and left, Her mother still crying. Amy waited a minute, then turned the shower off. "Thank god I found you two." She kneeled down to pat the pups. She gave each one a treat. Then she went back to bed. The next morning Amy had nothing better to do then read. She read her as.signed her book, the same as Clair's. Soul Keeper.

"Mikey-"

She yawned and shut her book. 'Wow, I had no idea this book is so boring.' She thought.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

Amy got up and looked out the peep hole. ((lol)) "Room Service!" A nice old woman said from out side. Amy opened the door and  let her in.




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OMG. He said good bye. LOL.



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4:50pm Aug 8 2010 (last edited on 5:07pm Aug 8 2010)

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Chapter-6

The nice old woman came in pushing a big silver cart. It had balloons and candy on it. And a big box with a lock on it at the bottom. "Whats that?" Amy pointed at the box. "You'll find out!" She said. "Your the 100th person to come here! You win a grand prize!" Amy looked happy yet confused at the same time, "What do I get?" The old woman pointed at the cart with candy and treats. "You can pick up to five things from this cart." Amy looked, "I want, the...Fancy Cakes, Swiss Rolls, Two Balloons, and That box." Shepointed down. "Yeah!" She put everything she wanted on her bed, then pulled the box out from under and set it on the floor, "Enjoy!" She left with the rest of the candy. Amy picked up the box, "OMG!" She yelled, "Whats in here?" She hulled the box onto the bed. She couldn't figure out how to open it. It needed a key. She picked up the Fancy Cakes, 'I could really use a snack,' She thought. "Woah." When she picked up the box it was very light. She looked inside and found a key. She tried opening the box. CLICK It opened. "Oh My GOD!" She screamed and jumped around the hotel dancing and singing. In the box, was a pile of money, staked all the way to the top. Amy picked up a hand full and threw it up. 'Thats not enough' She picked up the box and threw the money everywhere. At the bottom a small card stuck out. Amy read it, "From Mom and Dad-" Amy unfolded it and read it aloud.

"We know you ran away because of us, We- Me and your Father are very sorry. We don't want to fight. We wouldn't fight if you came home. Please!"

"To Amy-" A tear fell from her eye and erased the Fight part.




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