If I said I loved you,

Would you give me a chance?

Even if I'm not your type

Can you still fall in love with me?

You only need say yes,

I'll try my best.

All I need is a chance,

to show you what I'm worth.

You may not see me,

but I feel your every touch.

You can feel the same way,

after some time,

I would know,

I have tried.

Say you only like me in one way,

but have you tried to love me another.

I spill my feelings out,

Have them wrenched away,

Every scar I hold from love,

is shown.

But do you notice?

Could you notice?

Your friendship means a lot to me,

Can I help it if I start to want more?

Love may only be a feeling,

but not getting a chance is painful

I hear stories, don't you?

Can we be a story?

I don't need a happy ending...

I just need a beginning.

Hey would you believe me?

If I said this.

Would you still turn me down?

After all I've said,

From you,

I just want a

Chance.

Take that Russett ^^

To be

_-_-_-_

I eat

and eat

and eat

And the I

Am consumed

by darkness.

I wait.

I wait.

I wait some more.

I wait for my new beginning

To sprout and

Blossom

Into

The light, but for now...

I wait in

The Darkness.

Living life in these shadows,

I am wrentched down under my feet.

I feel as if the world is drowning,

And I am lost in myself.

Trying to find my way out.

I forever am lost,

waiting to see you again.

But forever is a long time to wait,

because we know I am gone.

I will watch you from afar,

but you'll never smile at me again...

>( We're supposed to let the other people judge whose poem is better. Not repeatedly post poem after poem.

>P Your disqualified, so I win. ^^

I will do this based on the first two poems. One from each of you.

...

...

...

...

They are both better than mine.

Lies, me
ta. I win because that made no sense, no-sense-maker.

I am not biased because Russ is my friend.

Russ's poems are more...poetic. xD But that's only because I am a Slammer (one who presents a poem), and poems that rhyme/are too literate are less appealing. Russ's let the imagine run, and use pleasent imagery.

I like yours, me
ta. Both of you are very good. I just...like Russ's more. xD

 Mine are about loss and what not ... besides I just write about what I feel. I wasn't writing to be imaginative. I don't usually write for fun, but it becomes fun because I am putting myself into those poems. I write these based on life experiences that I go through, which is why I see myself as a good poet.

Russett's were good, because he was doing his in a childlike and imaginative manner which isn't bad or anything. Its good.

I see myself as a realistic poet, and because of that, I prefer to be more literate and stuff. And I don't intend to rhyme. I just write. I never think about that my poems are saying. They are just a message and a way for people to know me.

So even though I'm not a judge, no one's style is better. I realize that. We have two different styles which means we cannot compare. So we both win..which means I have to go send Russett 1,000,000 TU because I do not care about being better actually, I just got sucked into it. But either way, no one is better. No one is more...distinct because if you do two different styles..how can you compare??

I wasn't saying that there was a right way hehe. I was just stating there is no better or worse.