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Fluffy88999

7:56pm Aug 31 2010

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Dive into the sea my love,

Dive into the sea.

All that remains in my heart,

are little beads of sorrow,

just like your love

that you just discarded for me 

Dance up into the sky my love,

Dance up in the sky.

Skip and prance among the angels,

lest they ask why,

your ex
pression is exquisite, but your heart full of hate

Sing on this piece of home my love

Sing for me, I plead.

My heart is yearning for you,

your soul who I can see.

I reach out my hand to you my love, 

reach out my hand to you.

Why won't you take it,

I fear, it is for you are dead.

Charm the murderers in hell my love

charm them with your wit.

Lest they ask you why

and then they shall die.

Why won't you respond to my calls my love,

pick up the phone, I plead!

Can you not see,

my name written clearly on Caller ID?

Fling my joy into a cloud my love,

toss it away, aside. 

Will you not regret this once

I ask you why? 

 

o3o Don't ask me why I wrote this. I was not actually sane at the moment, but it sounded nice. *shrugs* I was slightly insane a week ago, so I'm unhappy. I'd still like criticism, (and I'm not entirely sure why), but it's technically supposed to be lumped into the 'romantic' category, but I figure this could be some awkward fight relationship thing o3o Yeaah. So. FAIL. :3




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Avocado

8:56pm Aug 31 2010 (last edited on 8:56pm Aug 31 2010)

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I should post this on my profile it is beautiful *ahem* I mean  horrible ;o



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Fluffy88999

7:56am Sep 1 2010

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Thanks Erin, if you do, gimme credit though. I sorta was reading about Squirrelflight and her sorta crazy love life so I was all liek o3o 'INSPIRATION!'



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Avocado

3:29pm Sep 1 2010

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omg warriors lover too! And I would definately give you credit~ pffft,!



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enola

1:50pm Sep 5 2010

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Amase =]



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