My emo sadness poem (Untitled? ouo)


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Requiem

11:23am Jul 3 2012

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SO YEAH I WROTE THIS.
CUZ...
I NEEDED TO VENT.
KTHX.
It sounds better to music in my head, but..xP



The darkness is closing in,
I can see the shadows bend. 
And as I start to bleed
All I can do is try to see

A warm summer's breeze, 
Your hand around me
What seems to be happening? 
Now you're drifting away, 
The image, it fades, 
And you're leaving me in this dark place!

Maybe we should give it a little more time? 
After all, we only got one try 
To go around in this crazy life, 
But you're leavin' me alone tonight! 

The wind bends the trees, 
A warm summer's breeze. 
Now your pulling away from me. 
But what can I do, 
As my world unglues? 
Other than just sit here,
In this dark room. 

Maybe if I try once more
You'll know that It's me, 
Who will always give you all that you need, 
But would you even bother listenin' anymore?

I need you,
I miss you,
Where did we go wrong? 
You can't even
Listen
To this final song!

Because after to night I'm not 
Asking anymore
So if you need me break 
Down this door
To this cold dark grave 




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CH

1:06pm Jul 13 2012

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Is it a poem or a song? You put on the ti
tle that it's a poem, but in the post you said there is music to it. |D 

Either way, I like it! :D



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BOBISBOB

10:20pm Jul 13 2012

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You'll see my ghost floating away. 
Because I'm gone. 
Gone with the wind.
Spirited away. 

Done. 

Just my continued ending. 
I like it as a song. 




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