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milomouse

2:42am Jan 3 2010 (last edited on 7:11pm Jan 3 2010)

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I have liek, a few unfinished stories in my writing book and I want to put them here. 8D I dun know how good they are but I liek, tried. O.o

My first story is –let me go find it- *cough* Erm it is about when everyone over 18 disappears. Haha I know that some of you are 18 and older but I'm not so I thought it would be fun - sorta - writing about it.

    Bang.
    Just like that. That was how everyone over 18 disappeared from the world. It was four o'clock in the afternoon and most parents were taking their small children home from school. There were kids in cars, kids in shops, and kinds in their homes. And suddenly they were alone. The only thing that made sense was the bang. And yet why that bang occured was a mystery.
    One girl, a 13 year old called Samantha, had just gotten home from school. She was about to start her homework when she heard the bang in the kitchen, where her mum was. She ran in, but her mum wasn't there. She thought something was up and looked first in her mum's room, then in the laundry, then the rest of the house. Her mum wasn't there. She sat dowm on the kitchen floor and started calling out for her mum but she didn't come, so she started dozing against the bench.
    After a while she went to turn the TV on and found that it wouldn't. She decided to go to her neighbour's house and ask them whether their TV isn't working either.  She went out the front and thought it was very quiet. Then she realised it was because there were no cars driving past. Usually there were heaps of cars zooming past, because Sam's house was near the highway. She walked across the road and knocked on the door. No-one answered. She started to get a bit annoyed. Suddenly a car swerved into her street and crashed into her house.
    "Oh my god!" Samantha ran across the road and to the car, which had started smoking a little.




Nouveau

11:41am Jan 3 2010

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*waits impatiently*  O_O






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milomouse

6:54pm Jan 3 2010

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I wrote some. O.o



Reeses

6:19pm Jan 4 2010

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Write more! ^o^ -is patient unlike Lola-
 
8) -turns into secret corner and kills dust impatiently-




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paigecam

6:24pm Jan 4 2010

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Reminds me of the Book "Gone," But I like it. ^o^



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milomouse

10:44pm Jan 4 2010

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Paige: That was where I got the idea from! But it will be different. :P

Thanks Petty! It is sort of weird.




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