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Lillyblossom

4:32pm Sep 25 2011 (last edited on 4:34pm Sep 25 2011)

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There are times that I see,


We’re all leaves on a tree,


And troubled winds try to blow


Us off but I won’t go


I hold on.


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There are times when I feel,


There’s no tree,


This aint real,


And I think to go free-but


I hold on.


 


There are times when I feel that just a sneeze-


Might be sufficient enough a breeze


To make me free


My piece of tree-but


I hold on.


 


There are times when the lift


Of the breeze, in dreaming I drift


Left or right, just a mite


Too far, but


I hold on.


 


But the breeze is getting stronger,


I may not hold on, that much longer,


The wind feels so much freer


Then my tiny branch of tree here, and


I might not hold on.


 


I feel the breeze’s pull even now,


Don’t know when, or if, or how, but


That wind calls me to, so.


Oh please, don’t let me drift,


 Help me hold on,


Don’t let me go.



First poem of mine I've posted. O.o Scary



Love isn't like a fruit-sweetest when it's new. Love is forever bright and fresh, IF it's love that's true...♥
diamondwing

5:32pm Sep 28 2011

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this seems like a kind of metaphore



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Lillyblossom

6:45pm Oct 3 2011

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Yeah, sorta for life and holding on and perseverance and stuff like that. I was feeling pretty melancholy when I wrote it-I guess. :/



Love isn't like a fruit-sweetest when it's new. Love is forever bright and fresh, IF it's love that's true...♥
c3pgold

10:47am Oct 6 2011

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I like this! :)
Lillyblossom

12:32pm Oct 9 2011

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Thanks. :) I'm not sure if I should put more of my stuff on here or not....



Love isn't like a fruit-sweetest when it's new. Love is forever bright and fresh, IF it's love that's true...♥
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