Key Chronicles


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Wishbelle

7:32pm Sep 9 2011 (last edited on 7:09am Sep 10 2011)

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Key Chronicles
ALLBOUTKEYS!
Listen up: I will pay 10k for any attempt at a helpful suggestion or critique!

Shall we begin?

My mother died in an attempt to save Key Castle.
My Grandmother gave up her soul in an attempt to protect the ones she loves
My father left on a journey to the young ones lair. 
   
I am the victim of grief and pain. My family died for me, saved me time after time and killed themselves in doing it.
Why?
Why me?
Why am I the one left to wonder why I was so helpless, or why I am the one made to rule Key Castle at only the age 14?

   The daily thought zoom through my head. Every day the same bundled thoughts take their trip through my head, but one thought goes around multiple times before it finally leaves. 
My name is Katherine Key, leader of Team 0012.
     Team 0012 is a resistance against the takeover of the young ones. Young ones are not 'young' they are old creatures who cannot die and will not die without a fight. Their bodies covered in black slime. The horrible smell of dirty socks and intense stink is topped with a trail of slime behind them. It gets worse, the smile sinks into ground and contaminates our water, and crops. With only days left to live, 0012 is Key Castle's only hope for life.



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Wishbelle

7:10am Sep 10 2011

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UP 
remember paying 10k for critiques 



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diamondwing

8:08am Sep 10 2011 (last edited on 8:09am Sep 10 2011)

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are those creatures kind of like wyraes?



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Wishbelle

4:16pm Sep 10 2011

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Sort of, only like the babies though. Their big animals who were once alive and living until a young one came and killed it and then it became a young one. 
Thanks for posting though. 



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Wishbelle

4:23pm Sep 10 2011

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CONTINUATION:

   I walked into Key Castle. I wore a wonderful silk woven gown made for me by the prince of the neighboring kingdom. He offered his hand to me, if you know what I mean. And if you don't, he wants to marry me. He flatters me more than anything, his kind voice, gentle nature. But nothing, nothing. Means more to me, than the protection of Key Castle. 
   Anyway, the dress was floral patterned with roses as sleeves and tulips as decoration. In his own special way he meant, I love you Katherine. 
 



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