Just great. From normality, to... this...


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YoursTruly

1:43pm Aug 21 2011 (last edited on 6:00pm Aug 21 2011)

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I don't know exactly how long I lay there, on the cold, stone floor. Thinking about how much my life has changed in the span of a week. I went from being the loner at school, the one no one speaks to, unless they need something from you. I wasn't smart, good at sports, I was simply... myself.
I am no longer truly myself. Yet, how can that be? How can I not be myself? If  I am not myself, what does that make me? Does it make me someone elses self? But if I have become someone elses self, surely that means this is my new self, therefore I am myself, but how can I be myself if I am no longer myself?
My mind whirled, as I thought up paradox after paradox. These were the things I thought about, while I lay there. Not the most important thing. Not how I had changed from being my old self into my new self. I wasn't even sure how I did that. Or what my new self entailed me being.
Eventually, I willed myself to stand, though my body ached. Why should it ache? I was more powerful than I had ever been. Why should it ache? Maybe because I knocked down a seven story building by running into it. That could be why.
Well, Damn this stupid earth! Damn it and everyone upon it! I have been shunned by people my whole life, tortured, abused. Well, no more. From this day forth, I shall be the one to shun them, not the other way round. I shall destroy everyone who ever opressed me. Only difference is, this won't be the last thing I do. It shall be nothing more than the beginning.

I *may* write more. If you can figure out what I plan on doing with this person, tell me. Also tell me if you can figure out this persons gender. XD




Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
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... Screw it. HYE. ♥
Winterlove

5:55pm Aug 21 2011

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I would change line 2 the word "space" to "span" perhaps? He sounds like a guy. :P Hence, he. xD So far, not bad. ;)



YoursTruly

5:59pm Aug 21 2011

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Shweet, thanks. ^_^ And I shall not reveal the gender yet. -poofs to edit space-



Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
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... Screw it. HYE. ♥
YoursTruly

8:26pm Aug 25 2011

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But for now, my ramblings will, to you, seem wild, distorted, and unconnected. Every word that exits my mouth will be changed by your doubts of me, melted down and remade into something you try to cling to known as logic. That will all change soon, my friend. Hmn, why did I call you that? I don't even know you, and yet I just called you my friend... strange.... yes, very strange indeed. But more to the point. That will all change because I will tell you- or rather, show you- what this world has done to me to make me hate it so. I am not evil. I do not hate for no reason. Nor am I good, either, for I do hate. But life is not as simple as black and white, is it? As 'good' or 'bad, 'right' and 'wrong'? No, that pretence is yet another case of you people melting down what you see and reshaping it into something you find feasable and logical.
Moving on, however. I should possibly start from when I was made into... no, no, actually, I believe I won't start there. I'll start from the very beginning of my story, and the reason people hate me so shall become clear soon enough.



Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
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... Screw it. HYE. ♥
SpikedBunny

12:39pm Aug 27 2011

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I think it sounds like a girl. But she sounds pretty old, for life to have moulded her that distorted and that isolated she would have had to have lived through alot. Also it's quite mysterious, what has happened to change her so suddenly? this is very well written.

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P.S. please read my thread 'forever alone' 




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YoursTruly

5:08pm Aug 27 2011

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Thanks. 83 The gender will be uncovered soon, once the story truly starts from the beginning. 'Till then, it's open for debate. xD

-poofs to read Forever Alone-




Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
SpikedBunny

7:00am Aug 28 2011

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I'm looking forward to the next part!



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