hornet and the butterfly


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petra13131

11:58pm Apr 8 2011

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We cannot be together
you and I 
For I am like the hornet
and you a butterfly.
You are to different to me
and I would tear you apart
I'm sorry if I leave you
with a broken heart .
Arrow

11:50am Apr 10 2011

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I absolutely love it. :D

It's simple and sweet. The rhyming scheme follows through throughout the whole poem with the excpetion of
"You are different to me," and "I'm sorry if I leave you," but it still flows very well. C:





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supernovastar

12:43pm Apr 10 2011

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Aww, it's awesome!


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Reddaysi

1:37pm Apr 10 2011 (last edited on 2:06pm Apr 23 2011)

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Amazing.
Yeh. XD


petra13131

1:51am Apr 12 2011

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Well thank you .It's nice to have positive feedback from other Res users.
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