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fullmoon	4:45pm Jan 8 2010 (last edited on 4:45pm Jan 8 2010)
Normal User Posts: 6,296	Here goes.... *I just ne-eed to believe,* *All you've done for me.* *You've given me stepping stones,* *That I gladly took.* *But what did I give you?* *Nothing,* *Nothing,* *Yet you hel-eld on,* *Even though,* *I did nothing,* *Nothing,* *Nothing,* *For you.....* *It took me so long,* *To get here,* *And you were part of that.....* *Yet I gave you......* *Nothing,* *Nothing,* *Nothing,* *Yet you ju-ust kept holding o- oh-oh- onnn....* *Just believe......* *Believe...* *Be-elieve....* I took the stepping stones, That I did not achieve. They were yours, your path to grea-atness, But what did you do? you gave them, all to me, I don't know why, but you did, And you held on... Tight..... To... me. ~~~~~ How do you like it? It's called 'To believe.'
ZoeyRedbird	5:14pm Jan 8 2010
Normal User Posts: 2,518	Pure awsomeness full. Muffinz 0_o
Toxoplasma	6:17pm Jan 8 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,240	Dood, I wanna hear someone sing this so I can get a better idea of the tune, but the lyrics are great. Different, though, due to the fact that it doesn't have a chorus. Not that that's a bad thing. :3
fullmoon	5:19pm Jan 9 2010
Normal User Posts: 6,296	Thanx. :3 I have it perfect in my mind, but I can't exactly record myself and put it on....
Toxoplasma	8:02pm Jan 9 2010 (last edited on 8:02pm Jan 9 2010)
Normal User Posts: 1,240	True, true. Ah, well, it's still a nice song, none-the-less. :D
thaliaflame98	6:19pm Jan 21 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,009	that was beautiful....seriously, that was great!!! :-) "Monsters are real. Ghosts are too. They live inside us and sometimes they win." ~Stephen King
paigecam	6:35pm Jan 21 2010
Normal User Posts: 10,925	Very nice, Full. ^_^ *We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.*

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