name's actually dodgson, carroll was his pen name ;o

i think i love you. Haven't been amazed by a poem so much since reading some stuff by this student in a book. Beautifully written, love the pace, the tone, argh everything really.

not much of a poet but i love the last line especially, made me smile. And i enjoyed the alice reference (maybe because i'm a fan). I feels light, relaxing and a poem that i can just sit back and enjoy without frowning at the flaws of humanity. Really.

again, i applaud you.

thanks so much. :]

yeah, i know carroll's name is dodgson (i'm a fan as well) but technically speaking, he wrote it as lewis carroll. I mean, there was a reason he created a new name for himself as a writer rather than a mathematician. Charles dodgson was a mathematician - lewis carroll was a writer. So, alice in wonderland is a book by lewis carroll, not charles dodgson.

anyways, glad to make you smile. It's something i like to do on occasion. :']

h'okay ma'am. I understand o3o

an i look forward to more of your writing. These forums tend to lack in nice works sometimes xd