Fire and Water


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thaliaflame98

1:16am Jan 2 2010

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 Natural enimies, fire and water. Like two magnets. Can you stick them side by side and will them to behave, to stay together? No. Water can quench fire, it is true. But Fire can melt ice and snow, brothers of Water. Water and Fire are not their own persons. They have branches like a tree. Each branch brings something new, like a nest or a bird. What do you think?



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Raru

1:46am Jan 2 2010

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...Is it a poem? o3o

And you spelt 'enimies' wrong.





xoholaxo

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thaliaflame98

11:20am Jan 2 2010

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I agree :-)



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Raru

7:25pm Jan 2 2010

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Honestly, never mind. I realised why people don't review your stuff.




xoholaxo

5:26pm Jan 3 2010

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wolfspirit25

6:15pm Jan 3 2010

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Stop writing everything backwards please, it isn't "cool" it's just annoying to read. You asked for an honest opinion on the writing and Raru asked a legitimate question. Directly after that one person called her stupid and the person asking for the opinion agreed. If you don't want honest opinions don't ask for them and don't insult others that are trying to help you.



xoholaxo

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I'm sorry, this may sound slightly rude, but I felt that Raru's comment may have offended Thaliaflame98.  If she becomes a famous writer, her editor isn't going to say;"Oh, you spelled 'enemies' wrong.  Sorry, there's WAY too many grammatic errors.  Too many errors......"  Although I respect Raru's opinion, I also believe that when writing a story on a website, spelling errors don't matter much.  There's no spell check, so it's hard to tell, too.   

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wolfspirit25

7:09pm Jan 3 2010

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Actually, that is exactly what an editor is for, to find spelling and grammatical errors. No matter where you're writing, you should watch your grammar and spelling.

If you're worried about offending people, you made some extremely rude comments as well, calling the people trying to help your friend ignorant and stupid. Take all comments, both positive and negative, and grow from them, don't insult the people that make them. Raru also never said that there were too many errors, she just commented that one word was spelled wrong, it's a good thing to point out.

I understand that they happen sometimes just because you type it wrong and there's nothing that catches it, but then it shouldn't be a problem to say "oh, woops, my bad" and edit it. I know I've done it before, been informed about it, and promptly laughed about it and fixed it. Getting a spelling error pointed out isn't insulting, it helps you grow as well.

I'm just going to not comment on the backwards writing anymore, I give up on that part.




Ping

1:06am Jan 4 2010

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Um... Not to be offensive or anything, but what is this supposed to mean? I mean, sure fire and water are enemies and all, but what message are you trying to send with this writing?



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Raru

4:14am Jan 4 2010 (last edited on 4:14am Jan 4 2010)

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Bah, let me explain some things.

My comments were not to offend anyone and I apologise if I did offend Thalia. I ask if it was a poem so I know whether to review it as a poem or prose. I point out spelling mistakes because there are -much to your surprise I'm sure- people who would notice and fix them despite the fact the internet has no spell check. Surprising right? If I was meant to insult people I would use far worse words than 'stupid' and perhaps even write it diagonally in chinese characters to prove my intellect.

Everyday I go on Res I go to the writing forums and look at every single person's work. If they ask for opinions I will give it to them and if they don't then I keep quiet. I do this because I know what it's like not to get any appreciation for something I put a lot of effort into. So everyday, no matter how bad it is or how poor the excuses are for people not bothering to even capitalise anything, I go through them and I read them and I comment them when no one else would. I am also getting sick and tired of people like you.

If she did not want my review on it she should have stated so. If she wanted me to sugarcoat my words to the point I'd vomit then just say 'no critiques' rather than send you having to insult me. Then this whole flippin' mess would have been avoided.





xoholaxo

5:49pm Jan 4 2010

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OK Let's just drop it I appologize it was kind of a joke Obviously neither of u r stupid or ignorant



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