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fenfirir's life ch1


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pryro

11:04pm Dec 8 2008 (last edited on 11:16pm Dec 8 2008)

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ok im fenferir this is my journal im ganna read it it leads up to my life now.

                                                        chapter 1

fenferir:ok im on a quest to hunt and kill encallbossa only a few more feet until his first guiardian's resting place its just above.*a large being drops from the platform*encallbosian knight: so you are the one brave or foolish enough to come to the land of darkness state you buisness.fenfirir: im here to slay encallbossa and no one will stop me*tears roles down eyes* he killed my father now i will kill him.encallbosian knight: ha you cant kill him hes to powerful for you plus you cant even make it pass me.fenfirir oh i cant we'll see*yells at top of his lungs*FLAMES OF KAMAKIZE.encallbosian knight:n...nooooo.fenfirir:that takes care of him*takes off into the air*.fenfirir: i see the tower its only a few feet away.*hits ground with masseve force shaking the realm*???: who are you tresspasing in the land of darkness and on master encallbossa'stower.fenfirir: im fenfirir ive come here to slay encallbossa.???: you cant slay him he will destroy you.fenfirir:thats what the knioght said but look at him now hes burnt to a crisp.???: *thinks to self that explains the noise* you can call me nanimos i am the second guardian of encallbosa the first was just a undead ogre. fenfirir: ok nanimos either move or die your choice. nanimos:is that a challenge ok lets go. fenfirir:fine by me but you will die*yells*WINDS OF INFERNO* .nanimos:t..this c...cant be happening. fenfirir:not even worth my time*rushes through door* encallbossa:hmm fenfirir i never thought you would make it this far. fenfirir:i did it to kill you and i will.*clashes six times* encallbossa:*thinks to self* w..what how does he have so much power here i am all worn out and he still is a max. fenfirir: aww u gettin a little tiered heh this isnt fun any more so now you will die FLAMES OF KAMAKIZE.* but fenfirir was to late encallbossa vanished right before the contact*

                                                   end of chapter

ppl can ya judge on it and tell me if i should make a chapter 2.

mystery question will fefirir ever find encallbossa and slay him?

Riyo

11:15pm Dec 8 2008

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Very creative, but you might want to try writing it as an actual story rather than a sc
ript or role-play sort of thing though, and use spell check, capitalize the first letter of sentences, and all that other great stuff we learned in elementary.



"You must always remember that the only thing necessary for evil to triumph is for good people to do nothing." - Alucard, Castlevania: Symphony of the Night.
pryro

11:17pm Dec 8 2008

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its really my first copy and im tryin to really make a book out of this is how far i got and right now im trien to perfect it
pryro

11:18pm Dec 8 2008

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oh and did ya answer the question?

 

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