Does It Hurt? [SasuNaru]


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LadyTsunade

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Does It Hurt? [SasuNaru]
  



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LadyTsunade

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This has a touch of Shounen Ai in it. 
 
Shounen Ai is boy x boy love
 
If you don't like it, don't read it.
 
And if you read it, please don't bash it.
I worked hard of this piece and it's really not bad. Theres one kiss
 
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Spoiler~ 
 
Anyway! Tell me what you think :3 



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DISCLAIMER:

I do not own the Characters in this fanfiction. They belong souly to Kishimoto-Sama. If I owned Naruto it would be called "Orochimaru" and be from the "Bad Guy" point of view because the "Bad Guys" fascinate me to no end.

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1:45am Nov 9 2010 (last edited on 1:57am Nov 9 2010)

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PLAYING THIS IN THE BACKGROUND ADDS TO THE MOOD 
 
I don't think I've ever cried while writing something. Not until this 
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Well, thats a sign of a good piece of literature if you ask me. I hope you enjyed it as much as I do!
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He pulled the sword from the man's delicate skin, flinching when he heard the audible crack of the ribs on the other side as it was removed. He dropped it, listening to the clatter of it hitting the ground and feeling tears prick at the sides of his eyes.

"Does it hurt? Naruto?" He asked weakly, a lump of emotion stuck in his throat. 

"Only... when... I breathe... Sasuke." The blonde answered softly, a weak smile meant to lighten the mood on his face. 

The raven looked down at the ground and away to hide his tears behind his thick bangs. "You'll be ok Naruto. The battle is done and the medics wil-" 

"No." Sasuke looked up suddenly, eyes wide and tears streaming from his face. "No..." Naruto repeated softly, shaking his head slowly.

A sudden grief stricken sob escaped from the Ravens' lips. "No." He shook his head. "No!" Anger coming over his face, "I'll... I'll kill myself if you die, Naruto! i swear! Do you hear me? I swear!" He raged angerly, desperately.

"No... live." Naruto whispered, blinking slowly. He coughed and blood was everywhere, on his chest, on Sasuke, on the ground around them. Sasuke put ne hand over his face and let his sobs get a little louder.

"Sasuke..." Naruto said, raising a hand, but her could only get it up so far. Sasuke looked up and took his hand in both of his, getting on his knees beside him. "Yeah, Naruto?" He asked.

"Closer..." Naruto whispered softly. Sasuke did as told, their face only inches apart. Naruto took hold of either sides of his face. "Sasuke..." He breathed desperately, pure agony on his face as he frowned, fighting for breath.

"Oh god." Sasuke whispered, shaking his head. "Naruto... Naruto y-yo-you can hold on." he said, shaking with his sobs now as his tears ran freely. "Too late." Naruto gasped. 

"Hn!" Sasuke clenched his teeth, glaring at Naruto's certainty. "I need... n-need..." The Blonde stuttered. "You need?" Sasuke encouraged gently. "You..." Naruto added shakily, breath nearly impossible. "Me." Sasuke repeated. "To... help me." Naruto finished.

"Naruto... I want to help!" Sasuke cried, pulling Naruto to his chest. "I don't know how." The Raven said into Naruto's neck. The dying Blonde looked up at the darkened skies and felt a few rain drops on his face. "I don't know how..." Sasuke whispered, closing his eyes.

Neither had noticed that everyone was standing around them quietly watching the two, tears on their faces as well. Kakashi, Iruka, Guy, Lee, Neji, Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Sai, Choji, Shikamaru, Tenten, Tsunade, Shizune, and the other team Leaders were there. Mourning the death of their Hokage.

"Be Hokage." Naruto gasped, clinging to Sasuke shirt, desperate for air and not getting any. Sasuke froze, along with the group beside them but no one spoke. "My dream... now.... is you." Naruto said, he wished Sasuke would look at him, but being held was comforting. "Always has.... will." Naruto's sentences were becoming incoherent.

"Naruto... don't leave me." Sasuke begged, he pulled away and put his forehead to Naruto's. "Don't leave me all alone." He whispered, "Please." Tears rolled down Naruto's face. "Not alone." He said, he tried to unzip his jacket and failed. 

Sasuke did it for him, it was difficult seeing as he was holding him as well but he managed. Naruto reached for the crystal necklace that Tsunade had given to him such a long time ago it seemed. He yanked hard and broke the string. "Protect." He said, giving the necklace to Sasuke.

"Will of...." "Fire." Sasuke finished for him. When he had come back to the village, Naruto had told him about a story that the Third had told to Iruka about the Will of Fire. "Teme?" He said quietly, slipping. "Dobe?" Sasuke answered, Naruto smiled. "I love you." He whispered softly.

No one was standing around them, most of them had left when Sasuke started begging, the others knew they wanted their privacy. "I love you Naruto." Sasuke said, more tears rolling down his cheeks. The old grin returned to his face, "Marry me Sasuke?" He mumbled. Sasuke smiled and laughed in spite of himself. "Ok Dobe."

Naruto inclined his head, Sasuke knew what he wanted and was happy to give it to him. He kissed Naruto gently, ignoring the taste of blood. "Right...... here." Naruto said, poking Sasuke's chest. Sasuke nodded, holding up Naruto's head now. "Ok?" Naruto asked, closing his eyes. "Promise." 

Sasuke held him for a long time after that, ignoring the world around him, holding his closest possession close to his heart. And thats where he would stay.



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Celty

7:45pm Nov 11 2010 (last edited on 7:46pm Nov 11 2010)

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[[ Homg Ladeh^^ This is AMAZING!! *cries with joy* ]]



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[[ Thank you!! *bows* Glad you liked it :D *offers tissue* ]]



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saryapink

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....This is so.... beautiful. <33

I enjoyed every bit of the story. ^0^ 




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1:09am Nov 14 2010 (last edited on 1:13am Nov 14 2010)

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Love it! very touching, adds a nice change to SasuNaru :D



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that was beautiful

that was so beautiful ;~; 

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[[ Thank you <3 ]]



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Thor

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Omg... that was just heart-wrenching... I can't really say anything... But.. for one. I think detail is key in yours. I mean.. It's so beautiful... I love it all... But i was a litle confused with Naruto talking.. Liek when he said "no." the first time. I thought sasuke was talking for osme reason...



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[[ Thanks :D 

I'm planning on going over everything and fixing things :3 I was rereading it and I even caught that Dx Thanks for pointing that put though <33 ]] 




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Thor

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haha, okays ^^ Im sorry tho. I mean.. It was so pretty and it pained me to write that down. I was like: ugh! it's killin gme with every letter! *dies*



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 Don't die D: I asked for it!! *Revives* <3 



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Nipperkin

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I absolutely adore this. Brilliant written and, if I may, sincerely amazing in itself. The emotions were raw, the voice was clear and, pardon my French, you've got some damn skill there that should be used to its best potential. I enjoyed this thoroughly.

(On a side note, I was listening to Richard Cheese's "Welcome To The Jungle" when I first read this. Completely innapropriate song to listen to. Made me laugh psychotically the first time through, so I turned one "The Mortitian's Daughter" and THEN cried. XD)

LadyTsunade

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Nipper is a Back Veil Brides fan? LOVE them ;u;

Another song that might have been appropriate would have been "Carolyn" by Back Veil Brides 

But thank you!! So much ;O; ]] 




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Love it Tsunady!




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