Creativity Blooms...


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MilliniumFalconDriver

6:03pm Jun 14 2010

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This is a poem I wrote called Creativity Blooms. Uhm, opinions, I guess? Haha. ^.^

"Creativity Blooms"

The clock on the wall is there

Closing down everything.

It tells you when to breathe

Never stopping for anyone.

The surface of the chipped bricks

Looking with uncertainty

They tell us the surface

Is rocky, but still holds together.

The posters on the walls

Shine With joy

Reminding everyone to hope

For a brighter tommorrow.

The books on the tables

Filled with knowledge

Offer us the joy of knowing right from wrong

And the the right to do something about it.

The empty podium stands

Giving advice of past leaders

Singing the songs of dreams and wisdom

While the people

Slowly

Fade...

MilliniumFalconDriver

6:06pm Jun 14 2010

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The fade thing didn't really work as planned. Dx
Celty

6:07pm Jun 14 2010

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Falcon its wonderful!



Honeybee

6:23pm Jun 14 2010

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I love the use of metaphors and personification in this. It's really original. c:



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MilliniumFalconDriver

6:34pm Jun 14 2010

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Russ! :D

Thank you! This is the happiest poem I've ever written. T.T

Celty

4:25pm Jun 15 2010

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hey! happiness is good D:



MilliniumFalconDriver

4:56pm Jun 15 2010

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Oh. I forgot to say thanks, Koolgirl. ^.^...

Well, yeah...But mine aren't usually happy.

Celty

5:36pm Jun 18 2010

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oh well then you did great!^^



MilliniumFalconDriver

9:31am Jun 21 2010

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Haha. Thanks. I appreciate it. I did it in 5 mintues, so...Yeah...xD
Celty

3:09pm Jun 24 2010

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haha if it was me i would've been braindead xD



Mechromancer

3:28pm Jun 24 2010

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That's really good Falcon!



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Celty

1:47pm Jun 29 2010

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Falcon I miss you buddeh!D':



SecretsOfTheDark

8:19am Jul 3 2010

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I like it. :]
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