Clash of the Rabbits


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ribunny123

4:47pm Apr 12 2011

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Well..  This used to be a graphic novel, but my laptop broke, Comic Maker was on it so..
I really didn't want to have it die, so I decided to make it a story.  c:
So...  Here we go...

Prologue

 

The sliver of the moon barely illuminated the bare field that once served as a valiant and rich woods, teaming with wild life, but now barely served as a place for deer to graze on the dying flakey gr*censored*.  Paws softly tip-toed on the ground, not even making enough sound for the deer, two does and a buck, to look up from where they tried to nibble on the gr*censored* without pricking their nose.  The shape was dark, for the night concealed the face and figure of the body.  It took a few steps forward again, pausing and twitching its ears in unison with the deer that where able to sense the presence of evil, and in a flash of white tails they fled into the thick woods that had even less light as the empty field, the trees forming a barrier against the moonlight, as if trying to protect the small animals who huddled in their niches and burrows; ignoring the sounds of howling wolves and praying that they couldn’t dig far enough to reach them as they slept.

 

The shape watched until the deer fully escaped into the thick brush, its eyes mad and unblinking.  It slowly neared the center of the field; the moon glinted off the clinking dog tags it wore pompously.  The muscle shape of the creature signaled the fact that it was male.  When he finally got to the exact center of the field, the species of the creature finally was apparent.  A rabbit, the bloodied and tattered creature was a mere rabbit.  Though the thought of a rabbit having an evil consciousness seems silly and quite impetuous, it was hard to disregard the fact that he was, indeed, a rabbit.

 The rabbit’s lips curled up in a gleeful snarl as the blood running down his arm reached his front paw.  He kneeled on the ground and placed his paw on the sharp gr*censored*, leaving a bloody paw print on the ground.  He slowly straightened his back, standing up perfectly straight.  He slid his eyes over to a building in the distance, and the sounds of music blew over him with the wind.  “Time for history to repeat itself.”  The gnarly voice cackled, darting into the woods with the same agility and speed as the deer had done minutes before, he would get there in no time.  No time at all.

 






Twintkitty

7:24am Apr 13 2011

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Yu write very well :U

Keep it up :3 




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