A Wolf Story( Still looking for Title)


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octavia22

7:13pm Jun 5 2009 (last edited on 3:58pm Jun 6 2009)

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                                                  ~Prologue~

 "Aiden look at her, she's beautiful." Julie lay beaming at her daughter, the snowy white ball of fluff scampering around the den. The little pup bumped into her father's legs. Aiden looked down at her and chuckled. " Where are going?" He picked her up and placed her with her mother. Julie curled around her and kept her close. The little pup looked around the den at all the faces. All the Elders came to see the birth of the new future Alpha female. One of the Elders stepped to Aiden. " She is beautiful son, just like your mother." He stepped to the young pup and gave her a welcome lick. The pup rolled over on her back and pawed at Noah. The Elder gasped when he saw what was on the bottom of her pads. " Aiden look at this! She bares the mark of the cresent moon!" Aiden couldn't belive his ears, he hoped his father was wrong, but sure enough on the pads of all four of her paws where blue cresent moons.  He looked at Julie in disbelief.  He silently backed away from her and said to the Elders " Come we must discuss this situation, " He walked out of the den with the Elders behind him silently cursing the Gods for using his daughter for their deeds....




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SeaDragon

7:36pm Jun 5 2009

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Ohh thats good

 

What did you want me to do? xD I foget




Just make it green, blue, white, and swirly. :D

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darkwolf96

7:40pm Jun 5 2009

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its got me hooked =)
ShadowPokemon

8:20pm Jun 5 2009

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8D WANT TO READ MORE!!



Rika

8:24pm Jun 5 2009

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Ooooh~! Nice!

 

And I think I have an idea for the name.

Godly Crescent? .3.

Mark of the Moon?

Gods' Will? *could do this all night* ;D




octavia22

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Ooooh Mark of the moon sounds nice:3 



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Rika

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<3

I come up with this stuff out of the blue.

...TIme to work on An Angel's Promise...and Mello's Journey....And Life is Love...

I need to finish one thing before working on something else. D;




octavia22

8:49pm Jun 5 2009

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Okay chapter One coming later today:3



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Shinigami

10:19pm Jun 5 2009

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 Very nice. x3

 The plot's well written out and, I'd love to read more. A few questions crossed my mind, 'Why is the mark so frightening to them?' and, 'What do the Gods use the mark for?'  I hope my questions are answered further on. c:

 Upon reading, I only found two errors:  "He silently backed away fom her and said to the Elders"  Fom needs to be from.  And, cursing is spelled wrong. :]

 I hope we get to read more. Keep it up.




octavia22

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Well here it is chapter one of Mark of the Moon!



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octavia22

12:58am Jun 6 2009 (last edited on 5:51pm Jun 6 2009)

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                                                     ~Chapter One~

It was a misty morning. The sun was peaking it's head over the clouds awaking the forest below. Inside his den Aiden was just awaking. He stood up and fluffed his fur out. A beam of light shone down from the canopy of his den and wamed his fur. He stepped out carful not to wake his mate Julie. He climbed down a slope to the gr*censored* below. He scanned the area, looking for intruerders. Not sensing any he walked to the waterfall and spring in his territory. The water was laping gently as the waterfall cascaded into it. He stepped to the side of the waterfall and stood before a rockface. He placed his paw into the center of the rock and it glowed bightly with a golden hue. A Sun shaped symbol appered in the middle and he placed his other paw into the center of the symbol. Suddenly eveything got quiet and still, as if time has stopped itself. The rock shook and crumbled and Aiden stepped inside. The Cave was a billiant Golden color. All the Symbols of the different tibes were caved into the rock face before him. He jumped onto the ledge under it and howled under his symbol. He stepped back as five wolves all of different colors jumped out of the symbols. They sat befoe him. " Hello Aiden, how are you this morning?" Aiden bowed his head to the wolf Gods. " I am good Bardou, I come in ugency. I fear the Dark clan is on the verge of attack. They have gathered more and more followers and grow evermore stronger."The old wolf looked at him calmly. He was a pale yellow color of that of the moon. " Aiden you musn't worry. Th cresent moons poweres lie within the one born under the mark. As you know this." He looked at him sternly. Aiden flinched at the mention of this, his tail quivering with worry. " Surly you have made a mistake. There must be some other way, some other form of power to stop this!" A light blue wolf stepped to him. " No Aiden there isn't. The prophecy speaks of a pure white wolf born under the mark of the moon. You daughter Alacion. Accept it." "But... please, no" He stopped knowing he was beaten. "Aiden I know you are heart broken but we hve no controll over this, you must accept her fate." He looked at Bardou and the old one looked away. " You have know all along this was going to happen, all of you did." He looked around at the Gods, all five of them. Earth, Wind, Water, Light, And Moon.

  The Earth God Teragon stepped to him. He was a stout looking wolf with pine colored fur. " Yes we knew but we did not know who it was going to choose, and that it would happen this early. We must not focus to much on this, we must look to saving the future generations of the forest." Aiden knew he as right. The wind God Mingan stepped to him. Aptly named fo the color of his fur. " What have you heard about the shrines Aiden. Are they safe?" "Yes, Skoll has not found out about them yet. Suly he will find out soon. "Then you must hurry. We do not have much time. The coming of the new moon in winter is approching, Alacion must be ready" Aiden bowed his head. " Yes my Gods I know. Thank you for your wisdom." Have faith young one Alacion will be fine" Bardou called to him and they walked back to there symbols. Soon they where gone. He jumped of the ledge and made his way back to camp, his mind buzzing with worry.

Chapter One Finished. More of an intro Chapter.  Chapter Two coming Later. This time you get to meet Alacion!

P.S I know I have alot of typos, my keyboard is wacky:P 




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EmoRotweiler

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sounds liek the book the sight where teh white wolf is born with the power of the sight but i love it



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