A Story Idea. *Please Help*


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chance437

10:50pm Feb 9 2010

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Yeah, I just decided to write a story. Well, a novel's more like it. I've decided it to be long, so this is what I have so far - 

~Characters~

Pika Draconair - Vampire Princess, pronounced Pieka Dracone air

Cymba ______ - Vampire/Lycan half- breed Guardian

Whit DraPhoenir - Vampire/Hound Princess, pronounced Dra Pheo(Like Phoenix) Neer.

 

~Story~ 

 

Pika walked down the midnight streets, her high heels clicking loudly in the silence. The streets were deserted, the only exceptions being her, and the unknown alleys. She walked with something not unlike swagger, like she had what others didn't.

All of a sudden she stopped, peering into a dimly lit alley. She sighed, her dark hair framed head.

"Just come out already," She called into the eerie shadows. Figures appeared from those shadows, seemingly darker than the gloom.

"It's time to come home,Pika." The tallest one addressed her, obviusly the leader.

"Why?" She questioned, smirking. "You think I can't watch myself, Ci-Ci?" She added, as she walked up to them. The man growled, but the grin on his lips told a story different from it.

"The Hounds are waiting," He replied, holding his hand out to her. She took it, sighing dramatically.

"Doesn't He know I can take care of myself, Cymba?" Pika asked, as she got into the "Mustang". What it really was, was horses. Unbelievably big, strong horses. Each clocked in at 12 feet tall. But, with the Horses, was an equal number of wolves. These wolves,or Hounds, were each 10 feet tall, yet just as strong as the horses. Excitement filled Pika, as she thought of how fast the traveled.

"It's his duty to worry, dear" Cymba replied, landing a kiss on her cheek. "He's your brother."

"I know," Pika admitted. "But I want space" She complained

"You own a Kingdom, how much more space do you want?" Gabriel asked incredulously from the front seat. Gabriel was an essential part to her Kingdom.Gabriel was only his ti
tle, though. It wasn't what name he was deemed at birth, but it was what he was to be addressed as.

"Shut up," Pika laughed, playfully hitting him. "And I share it with Whit"

Whitney was another one of her guardians - or a Guardian to be, after she graduates- but her most important one. They were like sisters. But, what made Whit special was her bloodlines. Whit was half Vampire, half Hound. Or, a BloodHound. To top that, she was the last Princess in the line of her last name, DraPhoenir. She had long, dark flowing hair that was such a rich brown color that it looked black, and grey eyes that bore no secrets.

"Hey, did you know that you two are related?" Cymba asked, turning to her.

"Yes, we know. By Great Grandmothers. We checked our lines already" Pika answered dismissively.

By talking about her, Whit appeared, running by the Hounds. Being a BloodHound made her faster than both species. Suddenly she jumped, landing in the back next to Pika.

"Hey Pie, hey Gabe. And hello, Cymba"She said, waving. Unlike Whit, Pika's bloodlines were pure, and had a lot of other Draconairs. Full blooded Vampires were called Haikus. Pika Draconair, was a Haiku. 

Guardians, like Whit and Cymba, were almost always Half - Breeds. The mixes included Vampire and Lycan, Vampire and Human, Vampire and Faerie, Faerie and Lycan, Faerie and Human, Faerie and Hound, Human and Hound, and the almost non - existent Vampire and Hound. Due to unknown genetic alterations, none of these breeds could reproduce with each other, only with Haikus. That's why there were Guardians. Unless Royalty, all non - Haiku breeds had their species' type of Guards. Vampires were special, though.

Pika brought Whit back to her senses, worry flashing from her eyes into Whit's mind. Hounds were able to do that, placing a bond between the one they loved most.

"I'm fine." Whit shrugged her off, smiling, as she released her emotions to Pika. She turned her head to Pika, her canines glinting in the moonlight.

"You can't hide anything from me," Whit laughed, as Pika's thought flashed over to boys.

"Even before the bond," Gabriel added, as they pulled up into the Academy.

~Chapter 2~ 

As they walked up the cobblestone path to the building, Whitney couldn't help but smile. St. DraPhoenir Academy held many memories for her. She was raised here, the codes of the Academy the guidelines of her life. Her father dropped her off here, since he was a Guardian, and she respected that decision. She didn't know her mother too well, aside for a few brief visits and encounters.

Whit shook her head clear of the unwanted thoughts, as they entered the building. As the Guardians went   their separate ways, Whit followed Pika, knowing she wanted to talk. As they walked towards the Haiku dorm building, Pika's interest spiked, and the wave of emotion hit Whit.

 

"What?"She asked,her eyes scanning the room.

"Hello, Princesses" A smooth voice said curtly, as the man dipped his head respectfully

"Adrian. What are you doing here?" Whit asked frantically.

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And that's as far as I got. I think that's pretty good, since I started 2/8.

So , tell me what you think. And please, no stealing. 




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