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Fizzeh	8:22am Feb 6 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,028	Breath of fresh air, break through the green mist covet of invisible currency Jealousy and want, it hangs in the corners taint the minds of those who recieve never to give for it halts their thoughts blocking kindness defiling goodwill For, what is a pixel number amongst the mutual love of friends, new or old This sin I see in every name for all generosity given unto them fades to be replaced... by Greed. Opinions are welcome. Did it make you think? I hope so. Which CS creatu would you like to see Stardusted first?
Yasha	10:05am Feb 6 2010
Normal User Posts: 2,842	I love it.
thaliaflame98	10:40am Feb 6 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,009	I like it. It's really good!! "Monsters are real. Ghosts are too. They live inside us and sometimes they win." ~Stephen King
Fizzeh	5:28pm Feb 6 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,028	Thanks. o 3o Which CS creatu would you like to see Stardusted first?
Kira333	5:31pm Feb 6 2010
Normal User Posts: 6,511	It did indeed make me think. It's a good poem, but I can't make much sense out of it. xD Seasons are changing and waves are crashing and stars are falling, all for us.
Fizzeh	5:49pm Feb 6 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,028	Lawl. Ok. Which CS creatu would you like to see Stardusted first?
luvsarahdessen97	6:05pm Feb 6 2010
Normal User Posts: 192	I really like it!!! It's kind of confusing, but pretty much every good poem is ;)
Fizzeh	3:56pm Feb 11 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,028	Bump. o 3o I seem to be good at confusing people. x3 Which CS creatu would you like to see Stardusted first?

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