"Instinct" prologe.


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SweetAromaz

11:41am Feb 27 2010

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Hey Everyone! Well this is my second story prologue so I hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it, so enjoy, and don’t forget to leave a comment good or bad.

  

Peering into his golden brown eyes was almost surreal. As he looked back to me, my heart skipped a beat, and my second soul was clawing at my ribcage. I knew that I shouldn’t have worn the pendant today, but for some reason, I felt that I needed to.

He met my gaze and turned to me.

 

“Luna, can you come over here?” Greg said somberly.

 

I walked over and realized that he was alone, witch was unusual because he almost always had his friends by his side.

 

“What’s up Greg?”

 

He sighed,”Well, I just wanted to say…sorry…about yesterday”, he said with a heightened sense of sincerity.

 

I was trying to forget about what happened. That day, was a big emotional blow for me, and me being so shy, only made me shyer. The thought of it brought tears to my eyes and blurred my vision.

 

“That was…rude of me to do that right in the open.” He said.

 

“I-Its, ok, I just wasn’t...wasn’t-----“, I couldn’t hold back my tears anymore and all my emotions that I kept for him went with my tears, and onto my jacket sleeve.

 

He pulled me close to him and wrapped his around my waist, I was sobbing into his chest, and I could here his heart beating with mine, and that, to me, was like my heroin. I looked into his hypnotic eyes and I tried to speak, but he spoke first.

 

“Luna, I love you, but I wish I said that two days ago.” He paused, “I need to go now Luna, but just remember this, I love you, and I will always love you…”

 

He stopped and started to lean to me, I knew what was coming, and my heart started to beat faster and faster as he approached,

 

“You just need to wait for me” he whispered.

He leaned more, and then his lips met mine, and for one brief moment, I was completely blissful. His hand gently rested on my cheek, and mine on his chest, His heart was racing as mine was. Then he slowly pulled away, and he met my tearful eyes.

 

“Goodbye Luna”, he said and started to walk away.

 

And then it happened.

 

My second soul was suddenly tearing and ripping me from the inside, I threw my head back and clutched my stomach.

 

“Luna! What’s wrong?!” He panicked.

 

I could only let out groans and lurches, and my conscious told me to get out of there. If Gregory saw me in my spirit form, well…I can’t imagine.

 

I suddenly bolted from Greg on foot and the eventually on all fours, He ran after me, not far behind.

 

“LUNA!” He screamed.

 

My pendant was glowing bright red and sinking into my chest, and I tried to run faster but the pain was unbearable, and then finally the orbs were circling around me. I was no longer Luna.

 

Gregory stopped dead in his tracks and squinted through the smoke surrounding me, and he let in a huge gasp.

 

For what he saw was no longer Luna, But a fox, it was Lahana, my Sacred Fox Spirit.

 

Hope you all liked it, please leave a comment and there is more to come soon! :D




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muffinz

12:21pm Feb 27 2010

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Woah....that was awsome.^^ Just the kind of thing I like to read.Amazing job.Cant wait to read more.:)



TokyoWolf

1:53pm Feb 27 2010

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pretty good but i saw some spelling errors. Witch is the thing you are for halloween, which is the correct usage.
luvsarahdessen97

2:42pm Feb 27 2010

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W.O.W. That was..... incredible. I don't usually read things in that genre, but your writing was absolutely amazing
SweetAromaz

4:22pm Feb 27 2010

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thank you all verry much, and sorry for the spelling errors, my computer would not stop refreshing when I wrote it, I will get spell check soon. The next chapter comes out on febuary 28th (that is if your on western time).




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Epicness

7:51pm Feb 27 2010

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Nice romance fant*censored*ey , keep writin'
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