..::Mystery Dungeon~ Creatu Rescue Team::..


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DrEaMxxEaTER

3:59pm Oct 10 2010 (last edited on 5:38pm Oct 10 2010)

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::Chapter One::

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A natural colored, baby sirleon and a baby amber tesuri enter a small clas.sroom along with other young creatu. But this story is not about the other young, baby creatu. Not really any way. It's about the sirleon and the tesuri. A bell rang out causing all the young creatu to raise their heads in excitment. It was time for their playground break.

"Come on, come on, come on! Let's get going befor all the swings get taken up, Gunther!"the amber tesuri sang as she pawed at the sirleon's tail. "Hey!"the sirleon known as Gunther fussed. "Zasha, you know I dont like the swings. Lets just go play at the sandbox and kiddy pool." Zasha rolled her eyes. She hated when her friend acted difficult like this. He never wanted to try anything she liked. Zasha gave in for her friends sake and headed over to the sandbox and kiddy pool with Gunther.

As the duo made their way over to their destination an odd shadow soared over them. "What was that?"a baby, black aukira asked as she looked up to the sky. A supervising berrok looked up and gasped. He grabbed as many children as he could and called out in his deep voice for everyone to run inside the school house. "Metor shower!"a supervising iluvu screamed as she gathered up a handful of kids.

A huge fiery rock crushed the ground around the monkey bars. A peircing scream could be heard. "Zasha!?"Gunther screamed with tears falling down his face. "Zasha where are you?!" Gunther was panicing fiercly. A chimby adult tried to grab him but he wormed out of her reach. "Gunther get back here! It's too dangerous!"the chimby called out. "No! I have to find Zasha!"he objected as he moved as fast as he could to the center of the playground. "Gunther!"a paniced female voice cried out. "Za-Zasha?!"Gunther called out as he headed twards the swing set. Gunther looked around to see if he could locate his friend. He was highly relieved when he saw an amber tesuri clinging to a pole of the swingset. "Zasha..."Gunther said as he hugged her.

DrEaMxxEaTER

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(( Does anyone like it so far? If anyone does I will post Ch.2 and if not then I will delete it to leave room for the others ))
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((It's wonderful so far. ^^  I can't wait for more! 8D))



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::Chapter 2::

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Zasha looked up and relaxed to the warm embrace of her friend. "Gunther,"she began slowly as tears continued to pour from her young eyes. "I dont think I like the swings either."Zasha giggled. Gunther laughed tiredly along with his friend. A large metor hit the ground at least two yards from the swing set. "Dont worry!"a strong voice called said to Zasha and Gunther as it picked them up. Gunther looked up with wide eyes and saw it was an albino haberisar. "We are Rescue Team Blade."the haberisar told them. The haberisar was accompanied by a sepia draqua who was water gunning the fire from the metors and a strong malal was breaking up thé cooled metors. "Rescue team..."Gunther mumbled in awe.

Later, when all the teacher had finished counting all the children and ensure that they were all safe and calmed down Gunther went over to Zasha with an idea stuck in his head. "Hey Gunther."Zasha greeted him just as her mother put her coat on. "Hey Zasha."Gunther greeted. "You remember that group that saved us earlier? Ya' know...the group that called themselves a rescue team?"he asked looking at her with a sparkle in his eyes. Zasha looked at him and smiled. "I already know what you are about to say."she smiled. "What are we gonna call ourselves, Gunther?"she asked as her mother called for her to hurry up. "I dont know yet!"he shouted to her as Zashsa followed her mother out the door.

As Zasha left out of the cla.ssroom Gunther watched her with a careing ex
pression. "I will be a great recue leader for you Zasha."he said to himself. "I never want to see you or anyone else in danger ever again

AND HERE BEGINS THE STORY OF GUNTHER & ZASHA'S RESCUE TEAM. Let's fastforward to their middle stage of life. No longer younglings at preschool, but now well rounded creatu at their middle stage.

Happykitty

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Thank you for reading *pets Happy*
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keep going!
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Yayz...more...more.
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<B> :: Chapter 3 ::

 

Gunther wakes up to the light of the early morning. He stretches out and yawns carefully. He looks out his window and sunddenly leaps up with excitement. A thought jumps into his head.

"The mail!"he gasps. He races out of his room and out the front door.  He makes his way down to his worn and ragged mail box. He looks at it with hope as his tailwagged with excitement. He opened themail box's door and his heart dropped with dissappointment.

"Why hasn't it come yet?"he wondered. Gunther was awaiting his rescue team beginners kit but it's so far three days past the expected arrival date.Gunther was growing more depressed as the days went by. The adolesent sirleon did not handle dissappointment well.

An adolesent, amber tesuri arroched Gunther from behind. "Hey guy,"she giggled. She already knew what the situation was. "Still nothing in the mail?"

"Just the regular junk mail, Zasha."he sighed with his head down. Zasha looked at him with her amber fur glittering in the sunlight. "Maybe they dont take us seriously."she suggested.

"You think that's true?"Gunther looked up, searching for an answer. "Possibly...maybe we should prove ourselves?"Zasha suggested. "Like our own rescue?"he asked.

"Totally!"Zasha exclaimed as the ground began to rumble and the air began to vibrate. By now everyone knew what that ment. A metior show was about to commince.

"Let's go Zasha!"Gunther rasped.

 

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omg its amazing plz dont ever stop! coontinue what happens next!
DrEaMxxEaTER

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::Chapter 4::

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 Gunther, followed by Zasha, raced through the thick forest. They heard the sound of a metior crash near here. There had to be someone in need of their premature rescue skills.

" Over here, Zasha."Gunther directed her. "I smell burnt rock and earth this way. We just might find something."

Zasha nodded and followed her trustedd friend. She looked at him with trust and admiration. She noticed that he was no longer the stubborn and static kid that she once knew. He was confident and she could feel his ability to lead radiating from his body, heart, mind and soul.

"Zasha...Zasha are you ok?"Gunther asked.

"Yeah!"Zasha said as she shook her head and pushed her thoughts from her mind. Zasha looked ahead and saw dark clouds of smoke erupting from a burnt hole in the earth. "Look, Gunther!"

Gunther looked up andalso saw what Zasha was looking at. He looked around to find a safe way to enter the crater. His eyes caught the sigh to and odd, omnious, and faint glow of green and red light. "You stay up here and keep a look out Zasha."he said with a tender, yet commanding voice.

Zasha hesitantly nodded and sat at the crater's edge. She watched Gunther find his footing and make his way to the center where a burning and smoking rock was located.

"Careful"Zasha murmered.

 

 

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Keep reading folks. The story will continue to grow until it blossoms and dies. Yes, sadly everything must come to an end.Don't worry though. This end is a long time from now, please continue to read.
daniellelavine

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*pleading for more *haha  im also a writer and i learned a lot from this thkzz!  my story is new and its called a myotis story check it  out plzin the forum under writing
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:Chapter 5::

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 As Gunther carefully approached the rock, he could hear the rock sizzle and crack from the pressure and heat. He looked aound and noticed there was a gapeing hole in its side, big enough for a small creatu child to squeeze in. HHe did his best to peer inside but the hole was dark and dusty. He could'nt possibly hope to see anything within the rock.

Gunther looked upand re*censored*ured Zasha that he was ok by waving a paw at her. She was happy to sse that he was ok. Zasha carefully waved back. Suddenly she noticed a shadowy reach behind Gunther,protruding from the crater it seemed.

"GUNTHER WATCH OUT!"Zasha screamed. It was too late. The shadow snatched him up. "Guuunnnn-thhhheeerrrr!"shecalled out as she flapped her sweet wings in the air twards the rock. As she approched the rock cracked even further, spitting it in half.

Zasha stopped in her place when she heard something that sounded like Gunther coughing. She tipped her pretty little head to the side and perked her ears tward the sound. She heard to voices talking and coughing.

The dust from the rock slowly unfurled and cleared away. Zasha could now see two figured shapes. She instntly recognized one as her friend, Gunther, but what was that other weird shaped creatu? The smoke cleared and drifted away completely now. Zasha flitted down the Gunthers side and stared at the other being.

Her eyes filled with confusion and her throat clogged with unsaid questions. After waiting a while shefinally asked what she felt was most important. "Wh....What are you?"she uttered.

The opposite creatu tilted its head andcleared its throat. By the way it did it revealed to Zasha that it was a boy. Zasha wondered if Gunther, who was right next to her, knew what it was. "I..I..am..an uldavian...I-vik."the odd creatu struggled to say.

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(( CRITQUE PLEASE BEFORE I CONTINUE ))
BeckyL97

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So.......EPIC!!!!!!!!!! XD

CONTINUE! ^_^

Just out of interest, is there going to be an Omni in the story somewhere?




Adopt one today!
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