How do these poems I made sound?

The flames burn in colors around me, yellow, orange, and red

Good~ Some breaks in rhythm, but only by a syllable and it resets itself quite well. Nice~ continue.

Random Poem 

Moonbeams shine in through the window, the light bouncing off the wood floor

As I ponder these thoughts in this brain of mine, I hear there's a knock at the door

Running to see who is knocking, the sound becomes a uproar

And when I thrust the door open, I find the one there is no more

After fluffing my pillow, I lay back again on my bed

As colors flash in my mind, black and blue and red

Suddenly I have pain, the source starting at my head 

I see a large flash of white and wonder, "Am I dead?"

Dogs and Cats Surround me, this seems to be a court

But peering around it's familiar, it must be the old wooden fort

Barks and meows surround me, and I notice that I am the judge

To my left there is Paws and my right is Fudge, nnd the cat and dog each share a grudge

I sort everything out, and all goes well, the two are again best buds

Then i'm released to play with the dogs, led by the dalmatian, spud

I open my eyes and tiredly yawn, happy for that sweet dream

Then there's a sudden knock at the door and then I begin to beam