Rescreatu - Virtual Pet Game

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clemintine

10:06pm Apr 21 2009

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I'm not trying to say, "oh i'm so bad!" just for attencion, i just think I definately have room to improve. I do all my coloring and drawing on my laptop. Any tips?

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa285/23iscool/Creature.jpg

It isn't anything in particular, just a creature.

shadowrider

3:43pm Apr 22 2009 (last edited on 3:48pm Apr 22 2009)

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hmm.

i think the thigh on the back leg looks a little two big.

i think its okay in structure and stance.

but it looks like if it was really standing like that compared to its hind leg its arm would snap and it would fall.

i dont know XD im not exactly a great artist either =P

sorry. it still looks pretty good besides that stuff though :)




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clemintine

6:52pm Apr 22 2009

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Thanks, and I see what you mean. i've always had a thigh problem...
Ping

2:43am Apr 23 2009

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1) Anatomy.You need to learn more about it! I suggest reading tutorials or reading up about bones and muscles (how they're postitioned and how they move).

Bits needing work:

  • Legs
  • Wings
  • Toes

 

2) Rendering (colouring in) needs a lot of work. Make the markings look sharper. Shading will add more life into your picture. Remember, when you shade, make sure you know where you light source is!

3) The left wing isn't linearted.




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clemintine

7:57pm Apr 23 2009

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Thank you. Do you have any recomendations how to learn about anatomy?
Ping

12:51am Apr 24 2009

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Use guide lines. Look at other people' artworks and see how they draw. Basically studying objects (detailed statues are recommeded because you can see it from all angles) and artworks is how I learn anatomy. Looking at diagrams about bones and muscles will help. Looking at pictures with exaggerated muscles can help learn about muscles will help as well.



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Flickyr

10:10pm Apr 26 2009

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i think it looks great, clementine! Cooltle="Cool" />



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