Crits please? DX


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Acapella

1:57am Jul 17 2010 (last edited on 1:57am Jul 17 2010)

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havent drawn using the pc in a while

 

so, what do you think?  any criticism? compliments? advice?  thanks c:




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Juke

2:03am Jul 17 2010

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Oh, God.

The background is just... CLICK! with the picture..

 This is great.

<3




Acapella

2:30am Jul 17 2010

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Thanks so much!  C:  You've given me a lot of confidence with that one comment, actually X3



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Mythalian

8:17am Jul 17 2010

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Yeah, it's really cool!

Btw, love the background!  XD




Juke

11:22am Jul 17 2010

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Aw, you're welcome. :3

I like giving confidence, lul.

Makes me feel all tingly inside... Either that or it's lunch. o3o




Acapella

1:58pm Jul 17 2010

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Awwww thank Mythalian ^u^

 

Or maybe there's an alien living in your body o_o

It's probably the confidence+lunch thing though :D :D :D




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EmoRotweiler

2:37pm Jul 17 2010

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I like it and your siggy scares me lol



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bella2562

7:15pm Jul 19 2010

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I like it very much, I see no flaws and the background clicks. Very nice shading :D

 

 

Your siggy is... ... ... ... creepy.




Helping out with the Triumph Graphics thread now :3
Acapella

8:11pm Jul 19 2010

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Thanks and hehe and thanks and thanks :D lol



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Yoshi

10:36am Jul 20 2010

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Ah. The picture and the background actually don't go all that well, in my eyes. They most certainly could, but the linestyles and stuff are too different. The background is sharp and gritty - the girl is smooth and clean.

I'd say using some sharper, sketchier lines on the girl to match up with the background would help. Maybe you could even do some quick hatching or cross-hatching to shade, rather than using the soft shading. Both would bring the piece together better, so it doesn't look quite so much like you drew the girl then just found a background you liked and stuck it behind her.

And while I'm on shading. x3 You don't really seem to have any particular light source.. It all just kinda looks like a few grey chunks thrown in to try adding depth. Makes things pretty confusing to the eye when you try looking at her.




Acapella

3:19pm Jul 20 2010

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Thanks for the crit yoshi!  That's exactly what I was looking for, actually

I'll keep it in mind to make my art better c:




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