Critique Please? :D


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Falzon

9:43pm Jul 27 2010

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I don't have an account anywhere; and photobucket really annoys me... I don't know if you guys will be able to see it...

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1651/tsunafinal.png

Please critique it... but please don't mention shading or how his head seems overly largeee XD I failed at the shading cause I had only two color pencils that were totally different for the sweater. And then the hair became overly colored. And then. And then... I became lazy! :D

I only had 2 days to do coloring and only four 40 minute periods since those were the only times I saw my friend who decided to carry a random large box of colored pencils... The scanner wasn't able to bring out his sweater color D:

Mk thanks ^^ I will accept any kind of critism unless you're going to say its the ugliest thing in the world because its so ugly cause it is.

YAY FOR SUPER LONG MESSAGES! :D

Thanks ^^

Falzon

10:36pm Jul 27 2010

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Oh; Um also, I got this from an opening of KHR (the fourth one... or maybe the third) just to tell you ^^;;
shadowrider

11:29pm Jul 27 2010

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Aww...I think its good ^_^



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Falzon

2:20pm Jul 28 2010

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Thanks! :D

Ish there anything I could have improved on it?

shadowrider

4:08pm Jul 28 2010

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Hmm...I'm curious how is hair defies gravity |3 but that's all~



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Falzon

4:10pm Jul 28 2010

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Lol; there's supposed to be this flame that's producing tons of wind (more defying science stuffies! :D) But then I would have to draw his hand and I have no idea how to make things transparentish... -.-
shadowrider

4:18pm Jul 28 2010 (last edited on 4:19pm Jul 28 2010)

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yeah its hard. Your style kinda reminds me of this http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.partialtogrey.com/photos/uncategorized/boondocks.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.partialtogrey.com/blue/television/&usg=__exNxBDK0cekZQD27Q_bjIeQcnng=&h=298&w=300&sz=49&hl=en&start=17&sig2=cihwDTJ0plwpgJpcBdW77A&tbnid=HJxQ3vMxywh1eM:&tbnh=123&tbnw=147&ei=3Z5QTNeJHozZnAe5xdiPBw&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dboondocks%26hl%3Den%26biw%3D800%26bih%3D410%26gbv%3D2%26tbs%3Disch:10%2C591&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=129&vpy=79&dur=31&hovh=224&hovw=225&tx=108&ty=112&page=3&ndsp=8&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:17&biw=800&bih=410



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Falzon

4:27pm Jul 28 2010

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Woah; really? XD Never heard that XDD Or of the Boondocks O_o (I somewhat live undergroundddd)
shadowrider

4:42pm Jul 28 2010

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Boondocks is on cartoonnetwork, but its on adult swim. I just kinda thought there were osme similarities ^_^



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Falzon

5:26pm Jul 28 2010

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So I seee xD

SUDDNELY A SUDDEN REALIZATION OF WATCHING TWO SECONDS OF BOONDOCKS POPS into my head. He was walking down the street or something XD

I think I might do a full body version with flames and stuff once I get better and hands and RECIEVE MY FLYING COLOR PENCILZ...

 

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