A little help, please?


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Alcarie

4:07pm Jan 11 2010

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I'v tried photoshop many times before but this is the first one that acually turned out...somewhat decent (I guess). If you could tell me what could be fixed or what should be done diffrent please tell me! Critical answers are gladly accepted.
Im looking to keep making my pictures better.
Thank you.

Coloredcasalanddimka_edited-1.jpg Dimka and Casal Colored picture by Fallenwind

((Silver otachie and blonde kayoki))

 




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prinxess

5:33pm Jan 11 2010 (last edited on 5:33pm Jan 11 2010)

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Shading a bit more maybe would help. Also some artists outline their creatu in a darker color; it's not necessary, but it looks nice.

Good Job though ^^




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Alcarie

6:51pm Jan 11 2010

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Okay, i'll definatly keep your advice in mind prinxess. Thank you!



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Ping

7:05pm Jan 11 2010

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Use Layers.



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Nouveau

7:33pm Jan 11 2010

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Bawh, this is just me, but the face on the Otachie looks a little...wolfish?  o-o  I dunno.  xD  It's nice, though.  Great work!






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Yoshi

8:32pm Jan 11 2010

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It's not really wolflike, aside from the longness... I see more of that the head looks incredibly thick for its lanky body. Right now that head looks like it belongs to something tough; its square snout implies masculinity. Yet, its body is thin, scrawny.. seemingly lacking much of a ribcage too.

The Kayoki's left leg looks a bit odd, as its center is lower than that of the right where, if anything, it should be very slightly higher since it's farther from us. And the black outline on the ear looks out of place, beside the other, really light outlines.




Alcarie

4:51pm Jan 12 2010

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Thank you for all the help, its very appreciated. Clearly I need to practice a bit more but with these comments hopefully I'll get better. Thank you once more.



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