The blue hour----A magical tale---Chapter one: The birth of a mystery


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ChispaBrisa

4:20am Jul 30 2010 (last edited on 4:23am Jul 30 2010)

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Okay guys, the first chapter.... Here we go! Sorry for posting the first part two times, I had a bit trouble with the treads. I hope you all enjoy it! Take a seat, make yourself comfortable, and let the mysteries begin... 

1: Between Sleeping and Being awake

The first thing I can remember of my adventurous journey was rather lazy: I was laying in the wet, dewed gr*censored* and the peacefully twittering of the birds in the shade- providing trees had send me into a sweet morning slumber. The blue and yellow rope flowers that hung down the trees provided an even sweeter scent than usual, now they were covered in cool, pearly dewdrops. The whole picture came pretty close to heaven itself, even with my eyes closed (lol)  

I think it won’t be hard to image I wasn’t really happy when I heard a thunder- like growl, deep and low, rolling through the sky. ,,Oh god, just when I couldn’t use it… Thunder.”, I groaned, somewhat frustrated. I tried to roll to my side, but it felt as if something was pinning my body down to the moist gr*censored*… As if a pair of heavy paws was resting on my chest.
,,That must be my tensed muscles”, I thought, as I indeed felt how stiff my legs were from that on the first sight so blissful slumber. ,,I wonder how long I’ve been sleeping here…”, I thought, while trying again to roll to my side, with my eyes still closed. But I really didn’t manage to do so, so I let myself fall back onto the gr*censored*, as I felt the pressure on my chest grew stronger again….
 
And then there was that growl again. That deep, dark growl, rolling through the sky like thunder. But wait, was it really thunder? Suddenly, the growl sounded much more feline, like the threatening growl of an angry lion. But then even deeper…. What, what the hell was it?
I still felt the heaviness, and also a certain sleepiness pressing on my body, but I finally succeed in forcing myself to open my heavy eyelids.

And what I saw when I did so, was far from what I could possibly expect. It were not the dark, threatening clouds that were supposed to produce such thunderous growls. Nor was it an angry lion that was pinning my body down with heavy paws. No, it even exceeded that last, impossible expectation.
Because when I opened my eyes, they were staring straight into the intense yellow, brightly shining eyes….


….Of an Otachi.

PS: do you know why this forum keeps censoring gr*censored*? I only mean those little, green blades! Can anyone help? To me it's pretty annoying.




My Angel Gone too soon, but never forgotten...
Flowers234

5:38pm Jul 30 2010

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Cool! Continue on!!

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Read my story! Kitten! An amazing encounter!!




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