Short poem I wrote in like 5 minutes


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Moltres

8:31pm Mar 13 2013 (last edited on 8:40pm Mar 13 2013)

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So I am writing this poem for my english 20 class, to employ anthropomorphism. XD /barelyhasexperiencewritingthings




The night smothers me like a dark heavy
blanket



The moon my only hope in the tall blank
sky, and



Trees groaning to the lullaby



Of crickets shrieking in the bushes.



The damp grass at my feet



Moisten my toes like a running river



As my eyes adjust to the falling
darkness



I can now see the true beauty of the
night.



 



Rather than smother



It comforts.



The trees now dance



To a beautiful song



The dampness is cool



The river is quiet



All is the true beauty of the night.






MistySea

8:32pm Mar 29 2013

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Well, it's good for a non experienced writer :] Congratz, you did quite well...
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