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3:03pm Jan 23 2011 (last edited on 3:04pm Jan 23 2011)

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   Tuatara Serenity Echidna Wilma Venna Brooke Aurora Porter paced her father’s drawing room as she considered the feasible options of why he had summoned her here. Her fingertips brushed against the soft, velvety top of the grand piano as she walked.

   The door swung open as the tall, muscular Emperor strode into the large room.

   “Good day, father. W-why did you s-send for m-me today? I-it interrupted my history lesson,” Tuatara stammered nervously.

   “A fine day, I am sure,” Sage Porter said, taking a seat in the sizeable chair. “As for why I called upon you today, I wish to discuss your future.”

   “M-my future?”

   “Yes, yes, your future. Please have a seat.” Tuatara sat down on a smaller chair opposite Sage, and waited for her father to continue his explanation. “You may well have realized by now, being a bright girl, or should I say, young woman, now, that at the age of eleven, each of your sisters has, if it can be described this easily, changed. I have never enlightened you as to why this is, but now is the time to do so, since you are coming up to your eleventh birthday. First I must ask you: what do you think changes about them?”

   “Their eyes change from a light blue. Except Brooke’s, which stayed the same. And they all sort of changed their attitude towards me, more superior.”

   “Very good, very good. You are as observant as your tutor tells me.” Tuatara blushed a little. “Do you have any idea as to why that is?”

   “No,” said Tuatara, looking down at her feet.

   “Hm. Well, as I was saying... This happens because they become magicians. They each control an element. My-”

   “What’s your element?”

   “I was coming to that. My element is fire, as you can most probably see by my red eyes. As soon as the clock strikes twelve on your eleventh birthday, your element will be revealed by the colour of your eyes.”

   “B-but what if I don’t have magic?”

   “Now that is just being foolish. The gods and goddesses have always given the royal children the gift of magic. However, as for the commoners, only a seventh son of a seventh son or seventh daughter of a seventh daughter will be a magician, and even then their powers are weaker than average.”

   But what if that backfires on a royal family?, thought Tuatara. After all, she was the seventh daughter of a seventh daughter.

   “Tuatara? Tuatara Porter, are you listening to me?”

   “Oh, sorry, what was that?”

   “Hmph. I just said that if you are gifted with the element of Shadow, I am afraid I will have to cast you out. No Shadow will ever set foot in my house.”

   “So... how many elements are there?”

   “Fire, Earth, Air, Ice, Water and Shadow. Luckily so far none of your sisters have been a Shadow. I sincerely hope you will not be the first.”

   “Yes, father.”

   “You may go now, Tuatara. Back to history.” The Emperor chuckled at the thought of his daughter actually concentrating on her studies after the conversation they had just had.

 

I've written more than that, but that would be a bit too long to put on this thread. Like or not? I don't know whether or not to continue it...




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Iceheart46

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Like it! <3

She's Shadow, isn't she? X3 I can just tell.




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Yeah, just cos the of the ti
tle and everything. XD

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I adored it ^^  You had me when you stated her name<3  Love it<33  Lots of imagery and elements of fantasy established in your work.  Lovely ^^  I will check back quite often.

The one thing I must say is that at some parts in can be kind of predictable :o  Just by the ti
tle and the father's attitude towards the shadow element...the reader can semi-predict the climax or problem.

However, a solid work so far.  Great job<3




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Thank you, Fun. :)



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6:32am Jan 29 2011 (last edited on 6:34am Jan 29 2011)

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   After history, Tuatara hurried back to her room for some time to reflect over her talk with her father that morning, but found her path blocked by her eldest sister, Aurora, and Serenity.

   “Well? Did he tell you, then?” Aurora demanded.

   “Yes. Please let me pa.ss.”

   “No can do. What element do you want?”

   “I suppose Earth would be alright. Why?”

   “Oh, not Earth. Both Venna and Echidna both have Earth. We couldn’t possibly have a third earth. I have Water,” said Aurora proudly.

   “I have Ice,” Serenity added quietly in her soft, tranquil voice. “Did he explain about the circle of elements? It really helps with battle tactics. We practise all the time.”

   “The... circle of elements? No...”

   “Oh,” Aurora rolled her eyes. “It goes like this: Fire beats Shadow, which beats Earth, Earth beats Ice, Ice beats Water which beats Air, and then Air beats Fire taking us round and round again.”

   “But what about if say... Air and Earth are faced with each other?”

   “Well then that’s just down to pure talent and luck.”

   “OK, can I go now?”

   “Alright,” Aurora scowled.

   “Bye...” whispered Serenity as Tuatara pushed past forcefully.

   She walked down a few corridors before reaching the oak door which lead to her humble room. She entered and collapsed on her bed, then sat up sharply at the sound of her maid shuffling towards her, mouth open, ready to speak.

   “Would you like anything, ma’am?”

   “No, no, Madeline, you may go. You are dismissed for the day.”

   “Are you sure, m’lady? No hot cocoa or a bath-”

   “Madeline.”

   Her maid scuttled out of the room at a fast pace, leaving Tuatara on her own. She flopped down onto her bed again and stared up at her plain white ceiling. She took a deep breath and whispered,

   “Please don’t make me have Shadow... it would break my father’s heart.” Tuatara gravely hoped the gods had heard her.

   She got up and took her black cloak from the back of her door. She put it on over her attire and pulled the hood over her unmistakable, waist-length ebony hair. Silently, she made her way through the castle, until arriving at the majestic, barred wooden door blocked by two guards. Tuatara removed her hood.

   “I am going out,” she said to the men, who stepped aside, letting the door open. Hastily she walked out, replacing her hood.

   Keeping her head down, Tuatara walked down a narrow, gloomy, slightly claustrophobic, street. She pa.ssed a few people, but other than that it was deserted. After a sharp turn, she found herself facing a man, whose little hair he had was white, and his face furrowed with old age. He grabbed her shoulders tightly and shook her. The man asked her if she knew a man named Fred Thorn. Tuatara shook her head and squeezed past him.

   She carried on for a while, then broke into a run at the sight of a large, grey, stone chapel covered in ivy. Her hood fell off, but still she ran. When she reached the building, Tuatara sighed at the warm air, and stepped inside. She walked over to a stone statue of the bust of a woman. Her hair blew slightly to one side as if a gentle breeze was blowing. The woman’s clothes seemed simple, and her eyes kind. Tuatara knelt on one knee before her and placed an apple in front of the statue as an offering, for the woman was the Goddess of Magic. Tuatara explained her reasons for coming, and then asked her that she was not given the power of Shadow.

   With a last look at the Goddess of Magic, she placed her hood over her hair again and slowly walked home.

   When she arrived back at the castle, however, her sisters were waiting for her, prepared to fire her with questions. They stood in a tight semi-circle in their day clothes, an air of secrecy surrounding them. They were whispering gently and looked sharply at Tuatara as soon as her feet scraped along the floor. Hesitantly, she walked over to them, and received many hugs.

   “Just don’t be a... a... you know,” Echidna said.

   “Yeah, father would be furious, we’ll probably all be dead by the time you walk out the door if you are,” Venna added.




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